Hey

I would appreciate it if anyone could review my short story - http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2952890/1/No_Escape

I am currently in the process of a redraft (just to make the opening better - so any tips / comments on what was good / bad and how to improve are much appreciated) and then, if it is deemed good enough that people would want to read more, I may continue it into a longer story.

Thanks alot.

Oh, and of course, if you wish for me to review any of your own stories, just say the word!

Reviewed your story AquariusGirl1991. If you don't mind some nasty violence i would appreciate a review of CUPIDITY. I am still working on all four chapters so they do stop suddenly.

Hey everyone

I just wanna know what you guys think of my recently posted story called Cylinder. I'd like to hear your thoughts about it. Also, I'd be more than happy to review anyone else's story if they post a link.

But anyway, here's mine http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2929172/1/Cylinder

Hey everyone

I just wanna know what you guys think of my recently posted story called Cylinder. I'd like to hear your thoughts about it. Also, I'd be more than happy to review anyone else's story if they post a link.

But anyway, here's mine http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2929172/1/Cylinder

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