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Gilded Coins
Topic: Six-word stories
We'll be brief: Hemingway once wrote a story in just six words ("For sale: baby shoes, never worn.") and is said to have called it his best work. So we asked sci-fi, fantasy, and horror writers from the realms of books, TV, movies, and games to take a shot themselves. @ http://wired.com/wired/archive/14.11/sixwords.html

Want to take up the challenge? Post or link your stories here. "Forums are not to be used to post stories." If asked, deny it's a story :-P Have fun.

- Horror Writer Commits Suicide. Murders Cease.

- Earth blows up. No one cares.

#1 Nov 12th 2006, 1:57am
mesmerised bookcat
alright, here goes:

-I save life, mine is destroyed.

-I pronounce love, relationship is ended.

-Bomb hits house, insurence doesn't pay.

-Fight breaks out, man is paralised.

well, i tried.

#2 Dec 19th 2006, 9:00pm
NeoMiniTails
She died; I'll never love again.
#3 Dec 23rd 2006, 12:21am
Sakka-Fenikkusu
Writers' block. Now a dead writer.

Four insane men talk over coffee.

The sweater fits. I hate it.

The ferret dies on a Tuesday.

#4 Dec 30th 2006, 1:49pm
Will Sachiksy
I live for dreams no longer.

"Honey, put the new plane down!"

They watched it bleed to black.

He departated, now unafraid of salvation.

#5 Jan 11th 2007, 4:49pm
NeoMiniTails
With tears of joy, she cried.

She was thought 'winner', but wrong.

#6 Jan 11th 2007, 10:50pm
The Ferrett
I die? Have really bad day. ------ (See Saka)
#7 Jan 12th 2007, 12:50am
Dice Darwin
Drive. Sleep. Crash. Injury. Hospital. Morgue.
#8 Jan 12th 2007, 9:51am
NeoMiniTails
Nightly she cried; tonight, she's happy.
#9 Jan 12th 2007, 3:09pm
YJanZ-Providence
Angels, they wait; beyond the grave.

There is cheese; the mice rejoice.

Writer too perfect; need more typo.

Too much manga. Too much fanservice.

#10 Jan 13th 2007, 1:15am
Will Sachiksy
"Trust me. He ate them raw."

He wished for peace. Everyone died.

She screamed. He smiled. Nobody heard.

If I'm lying, may God strike

They rarely killed for pleasure anymore.

#11 Jan 13th 2007, 5:28pm
Will Sachiksy
I've been inspired by this contest. Now I'm working on writing fifty six-word stories and collecting them in one document. Look for it later tonight or tomorrow.
#12 Jan 22nd 2007, 3:31pm
Sakka-Fenikkusu
That's awesome! I totally will.
#13 Jan 22nd 2007, 5:59pm
Will Sachiksy
Just posted it, but the link seems to be broken right now. I'll check it tomorrow to see if it works. It should be in the Horror section, titled "Watch Them Flicker." Thanks in advance to anyone that will read this.
#14 Jan 23rd 2007, 4:24pm
Will Sachiksy
Not showing up in the search. Find it here. Or here: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2309031/1/
#15 Jan 24th 2007, 12:33pm
Sakka-Fenikkusu
R&Red them. Nice job.
#16 Jan 24th 2007, 2:21pm
Will Sachiksy
New stories:

Strangler? On, right! He's here. Meatloaf?

I apologize. This may hurt just-

#17 Feb 07th 2007, 2:38pm
Kumquat21
Strangler? On, right! He's here. Meatloaf?

That's good. XD

The bird forgot the opaque window.

Fire. You. Our hands never reach.

Faceless, famous, friendless, falling, for-never.

A dancers dream, a crippling accident.

And I don't think this counts, but it's an idea I like . . .

She

(bride of twenty-three years, careworn, forgotton)

Told

(Screamed, dropped her dishes she washed)

Him

(coming home from more dirty escipades)

"I

(Dreams and flight, forgone for this?)

Hate

(Loath, cannot discribe, cannot live like -)

You."

(Yet she was not young again.)

This is fun! ^___^

#18 Feb 12th 2007, 3:30pm
Will Sachiksy
Interesting variation. I may have to try it later.

Please, don't leave. Mommy gets mad.

#19 Feb 12th 2007, 4:53pm
Sakka-Fenikkusu
If I were alive, I'd tell.
#20 Feb 12th 2007, 5:24pm
Will Sachiksy
"You ate my planet!" "Temporary inconvenience."
#21 Feb 14th 2007, 3:20pm
Keba Si Rota
Hmm. Cool idea. I'll try it.

I feel so very important, today.

He loves her. Or does he?

My dog sits on the rug.

Dust. Vaccuum cleaner. No more dust.

Not very creative, but I tried!

#22 Feb 14th 2007, 6:27pm
Will Sachiksy
Unaltered humans denied health care claims.

I hate blood! Never washes out.

Red meat doen't kill. Green does.

#23 Feb 15th 2007, 4:32pm
Keba Si Rota
Hey! Where the heck is everyone?
#24 Feb 16th 2007, 8:31pm
Will Sachiksy
Cute dog, mister. Where's his head?
#25 Mar 03rd 2007, 6:17pm
Will Sachiksy
Painful? Never. We paralyze our victims.
#26 Jun 09th 2007, 9:48am
Keba Si Rota
Has anyone seen my giant squid?
#27 Jun 14th 2007, 2:29pm
Will Sachiksy
You eat dead autotrophic matter? Eww.

Surreal: losing arguments with a shoe.

Unreal: provoked shoe injures emo guitarist.

Too real: shoe obsession among females.

Light particle condensation: walking on sunshine.

Solution to Global Warming: Nuclear Winter.

#28 Jun 14th 2007, 5:09pm . Edited Jul 09th 2007, 4:39pm
Oceans of Mercury
Well, good thing it was non-toxic.

Felt the bullet. Silent the shot.

Lets fly, just mind the gravity.

Not deaf, I just don't listen.

Warm and bright when burning alive.

Cold and dark when buried alive.

Burn those bridges to stay warm.

#29 Mar 28th, 5:28pm
Darkening Mist
Broken window; broken heart; broken neck.

But surely you noticed the dragon?

#30 Apr 01st, 9:29am
Dr. Vox

FictionPress forums spawn interesting writing ideas.

These are harder than I expected.

The above was clever; this too.

#31 Apr 10th, 12:23pm
Will Sachiksy

This means everything, Dad. I promised.

Look, mister. Dreams. You buyin' today?

around. Because we're sixteen. We're allways --shortest fanfiction ever

I'm out tomorrow. Funeral. Family business.

Take care, man. We're professionals here.

#32 Apr 10th, 4:49pm
Thunderboom

I have a crazy l33t sister.

-Jonathan

ph34r my m4d l33t skillz, m0rt4l5!

-Melissa

#33 Apr 18th, 10:27pm . Edited Apr 18th, 11:39pm
Ocean of Wickedness

-I was chosen. They were not.

-She surfaced; her world was gone.

Eh. I'm not especially good at this, am I? xD

#34 May 03rd, 11:41am
Will Sachiksy

You've just got to get the right balance of the vague and the specific with these. Give the reader at least one good image with the six words, then let him form the story in his mind. These stories get easier to do with practice.

"Hungry? Got some legs leftover." "Whose?"

Portrait? Foolish girl. It's pressed glass.

Our kitten snuggled the baby's throat.

#35 May 03rd, 6:38pm

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