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Forums » No Reviews? » Writing my first story- reviews please!
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Jen4Flute88

Hi everyone! I'm starting to write my first story, and I'm calling it Diamonds in the Rough. I have a couple reviews but I'd love to get more so I can continue to improve all areas of my writing. If you could take a look and leave a review, I'd really appreciate it. I'll also review some of yours in return. Thanks! :)

8/15/2009 #1
Chu-Chi Bear

Sure i'll review for ya, i'm just gonna go visit your page.

~Chu-Chi Bear

8/20/2009 #2
Tiger Pie123

I'll review ya :)

Ill check out your page

8/23/2009 #3
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