so. my story:

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“What’s your name?” He pressed on forebodingly

“I don’t know.”

“Where are your parents?”

“...I don’t know.”

“Little girl, where did you come from?”

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“Little girl! Are you okay?! Can you hear me?” a female voice yelled. I heard footsteps approaching. I couldn’t open my eyes.

“Can you hear me?” I tried to nod, “Cyma call your father. We need to get her to the hospital...

The rain beat on the road in a rhythmic pattern that put me back into a deep sleep. Something warm was coming over me. I was scared. But I couldn’t fight back. I was dying.

Hey Juliette, I'd be happy to review you, if you'll do the same for me of course?

Cheers,

Matt.

I'll toss you a review if you could do the same for me :)

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