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She is Perfectly Flawed

Hi, I'm currently in the process of writing a pregnancy story called Forever Yours, although with a slight twist - the male is actually the main character, with the story in his point of view. I have ten chapters posted so far and I would love a few reviews to let me know whether or not I'm doing a good job. =)

Love you all!

~ Perfectly Flawed

6/05/2011 #1
RedX9

I have read chaps 1 to 5 it is pretty good. Like I said, this reminds me of my own story long ago

6/06/2011 #2
She is Perfectly Flawed

Thank you very much! You're awesome!

I've added a few chapters, just to let everyone know. =)

6/11/2011 #3
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