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Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know

Hey

I have recently wrote a short, comedy story and I would appreciate some reviews on it. I haven't wrote comedy before and I'd like to know if it's funny or boring or whatever :)

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3023397/1/How_to_Survive_Sheep_That_Are_Out_For_Your_Blood

I will of course, review back. Just leave me a note saying which story and I'l get to it ASAP.

Thanks

5/19/2012 #1
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