Hi! I recently posted my first story on Fictionpress, and I was wondering if it was worth continuing. I'd like to get a review or two before I start to work on the second chapter. It would be greatly appreciated!

Summary:

Chris Langley leaves behind his small town life to study at Montana State University with his twin sister and his best friend, but when unsuspecting feelings for a certain roommate threaten to expose a secret he was determined to keep to himself, will Chris hold back or will he take a leap of fate?

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3036132/1/Damned_if_I_Do

I'll read it if you check out mine?

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