Hi, I wrote a story a few weeks ago and there's a couple of chapters, but it hasn't really taken off. I'm scared that it's not good enough and I really want to be a writer after college. So please read and review my story and I'll do the same. Thank you :) http://m.fictionpress.com/s/3064242/1/Distance P.S. I like really detailed and long reviews. Mostly about what you like and dislike about the chapter, what you want to see more, etc.