I'm currently starting on a novel that I hope I could try to send for publishing one day. However, currently I'm most interested in a good review of the areas I could improve, especially since I know I'll need to reread my story and do some heavy editing when I'm done.

My story is called Estranged and I'm currently trying to make it as original as I can. It revolves around a boy who falls in love with a girl with the alter ego of a killer. Even with that, I still try to make things as logical as possible and I take the story seriously.

If you review my story, I'll more than gladly give your story a proper review in return.

And don't worry, I write reviews on my blog for movies, books and many other things so I think I can give a pretty decent review :)

Here's the link:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2688260/1/Estranged

Thanks!

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