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Crimsondrop7
Topic: New Ideas
So... I've been meaning to write/start another new story (even though I have too many already).

I'm planning to write about a hidden society, the OA, that has been protecting human kind for thousands of years. The general summary is about an young agent in the orginization who somehow gets his 'private' life mixed up with a normal girl. Eventually, she discovers his 'secret' and becomes involved with the orginization. The story talks about the transformations and challenges both characters have to endure.

I know I left some details out, but do you think this is a good idea for a story? (I like it, but I want to hear opinions from others)

#1 May 16th 2007, 11:43am
TaleForge
Sounds good. I guess I can't give much in the way of criticism on it; it all kinda hinges on the delivery.

Just outta curiosity, what is this organization protecting humankind from? Itself?

#2 May 17th 2007, 1:53pm
Crimsondrop7
The OA protects humans against dark energy that manifests into a real monster (or evil being). This dark energy can take any shape or form and even posess other humans. The dark energy seeps from corrupted humans, so in a way, the OA does protect humans from themselves (or what they've created).

Thanks for your opinion! If you have any suggestions, just tell me. (I would like to start typing this story soon) ^_^

#3 May 18th 2007, 11:26am
flamecca

ne ne, what kind of super power will they have?

or have they?

im be looking forward for this story..

thanks a lot, now im a member of this community as well...

subarashi!!!

#4 Jan 08th, 3:47am
flamecca

oopps im sorry, actually i dont have any idea if this story has come out already or not...

please correct me...gomen ne.

#5 Jan 08th, 3:49am

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