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jtown8890

Hi, I have a piece that is two very short pieces that are self contained but fit in with a longer short story that I wrote in an experimental non-linear format. Thoughts on if it works or if it's just boring are appreciated.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3042406/1/Out_of_Egypt

7/24/2012 #1
Hammsters

I'll check it out, but do you think you could look at one of mine?

7/28/2012 #2
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