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Topic: About My Poems
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You can drop by to ask any questions. I will also keep you posted on the meaning of my poems.

Also any comments you have about my poems are welcome here as well.

Thanks!

Tiffany Pradeep

(TSP)

#1 Jan 26th 2007, 3:26pm . Edited Mar 02nd 2007, 8:41pm
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I just posted a lot of poems today, so I hope if you have questions that you will ask me!

THANKS!

#2 Jan 26th 2007, 3:27pm
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Another Note :

I posted mostly old poems on this id, but I have some newer ones on my other id called, "Midnight Star Lights." Anyway, take a look if you wish.

Best Wishes!

#3 Jan 27th 2007, 6:44pm . Edited Apr 17th 2007, 2:57pm
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I put notes as a review, so that if you want to look at the reviews that you might get to see more of what I ment by the poem. Also if you just read it first to think about what it means to you it is a lot better than leaving a note on it when you post it. That is my way of thinking anyway.
#4 Jan 28th 2007, 2:54pm
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I am very random sometimes with my work that I do. I know that is kinda just about it! Well, I did write notes as review even if you really don't like it. I don't care if you like it or not really. That is just the way I do things, so think what you like because I really don't give two **!
#5 Jan 29th 2007, 7:07am
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You know something most of the time when I write poems I write them when I am depressed otherwise they really don't turn out as good or something. Well, I can make "wow" without being sad, but I normally write morbid anyway. Yup!
#6 Feb 03rd 2007, 3:07pm
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I just wrote a poem called "Scares of the Faithless," and I really wanted to say that I wrote it about my family. The anger towards them.

Thanks!

#7 Feb 06th 2007, 4:21pm
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The newest poem that I have posted here was called "Criminal." I think that was just the fact that I watched to many crime shows the night before. I was kinda thinking about it I guess. CSI and Criminal Intent... yeah... that might do it!
#8 Feb 09th 2007, 1:16pm
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You know something I have not wrote a poem in awhile... hum...
#9 Feb 12th 2007, 8:01am
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I just wrote something against the War in Iraq, and a love poem for Pradeep. That is about it for now!

SMILES!

#10 Feb 13th 2007, 1:53pm
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I just wrote a poem that is called "Strong Enough." I guess it is just me wondering if I can be srong enough to at lest last till I can get away from this place. I don't know sometimes if I can be srong enough to do that. Then I guess I was wonder why I keep on doing the same things in my life. Pradeep don't get we wrong when I said lost love. I KNOW that I just put that in there to sound better because I was starting to run out of ideas. Sometimes I add a little bit of something that isn't really what I am thinking. Ugh! I know that you are going to say something different. Just let it freaking go! I DIDN'T mean it that way, so just chill! I love you more than words can ever say! I am going to love you for the rest of my life I PROMISE on my life.
#11 Feb 16th 2007, 3:02pm
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Hum... I will try to see if I can write something tomorrow. Don't know because I have to work tomorrow.
#12 Feb 16th 2007, 8:02pm
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I just wrote another poem that is called "Saying Goodbye Mommy and Daddy." They just told me that they will no longer help me out, so why the hell do I need family when I have family like that. I would rather be homeless then live with them. I will no longer as for their help either. Nor will I talk to them because I don't have to. Another thing is I just don't freaking care anymore.
#13 Feb 17th 2007, 1:01pm
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I just wrote one called "Artificial." I wrote that about people who walk around thinking they are beautiful when they are nothing, but ugly inside. Beauty is skin deep!
#14 Feb 18th 2007, 12:55pm
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I just wrote another called, "Confess To Your Conviction." This is about the way that people are treated when they do not believe in the same faith as you. This nun is being punished by this priest that knows that she as changed her faith. He thinks that his faith is the one and only faith there should be. That is a lie! He kills her because of this ...
#15 Feb 18th 2007, 12:57pm
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I just wrote another poem that is called, "Sacrifice Of The Used." Just my way of saying don't be stupid and let yourself be used by someone that you think might be a friend. Don't trust to easy, but never be unfair with people.

little note: I might not have a great family, so I might be mad at them, but I still have to love them. I just will never let myself be pulled into their stupid world.

#16 Feb 19th 2007, 8:37pm
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I wrote a poem called, "Journey of Life." I was in a good mood when I wrote it sort of at peace. It is just "knots" and not "nots" that I ment in the poem. I was thinking just wanted to make it a little different by doing that. Anyway, everythins is connected link by link.
#17 Feb 20th 2007, 2:06pm
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About the poem "Queen of the Dead." I just stared to write about a little girl then it turned to her being in the darkness then it just went from there. I wrote in a short period of time. It isn't my best, but I like it! I like the dark beautiful girl part. I just write stuff like that because I don't know I just love to do it. I am really at peace today, but not feeling well at all.

SMILES !

#18 Feb 20th 2007, 2:14pm
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Notes about the poem,"Sapphire Dreamer." I just liked that word so I used it. Also I guess it was about something else because I was upset, but now I wrote this I feel a lot better now. I love you Pradeep very much. I wish you would understand that I don't want anyone else.
#19 Feb 22nd 2007, 2:48pm
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I wrote another poem today! Goody for me right? It is called," Enigma of Lost and Found." Don't really ask me what it is about because it is mostly an anigma to me. Besides I am half asleep the way it is right now, so whatever I wrote must be just as messed up as I feel right now. I didn't mean anything bad by it though. Just a bunch of bla bla... lol. Yeah, something like that.
#20 Feb 24th 2007, 7:35pm
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The comments about "Beautiful Children."

I was just thinking about wanting to be a mother someday and how much I want to love them. I am going to love them with my heart and soul. Everything I can ever give. I guess that is why I wrote that. Also I was thinking about how much my mother loves me as well. It is just about that family love that everyone has for their family.

#21 Feb 27th 2007, 1:06pm
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Goody! I wrote another poem today.

My Light In The Darkness

I wrote this about Pradeep, of course.

#22 Feb 27th 2007, 6:54pm
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Notes about "Little Girl in the Woods."

It is just about a little girl lost in the woods finding a new world that was forgotten.

Sprits, Faries, and Fauns...

#23 Mar 01st 2007, 12:55pm
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EVerything to know about "Haunted Mind..."

First off I wrote this about what I am feeling right now. I am really depressed about what happended today. I was thinking about doing this, but of course I promised not to do that. I think it was a good thing I promised. Besides death is never the answer to your problems.

#24 Mar 01st 2007, 7:53pm
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Vanquished White City

I wrote right after I was told that my dad just got layed off again. Everything withers in my path it feels like right now, so I am just wrote about what I felt. I guess you can take it any way that you want to. I would be glad if you made your own meaning.

#25 Mar 02nd 2007, 2:45pm
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Reborn Sacrifice

I wrote this about the way that people treat each other also the fact that I feel that sometimes people blame me for things I didn't do. They will just use me as their punching bag to feel like I am the one when nothing I do is right. Hum...

#26 Mar 04th 2007, 2:06pm
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I don't think that I will write anything for awhile now. I will see what happends. I am just not in the mood today besides I can read other peoples work for a little while. I like to do that anyway. I will make an update when the time comes to do so. Well, when I post something new on fictionpress.

Later!

#27 Mar 05th 2007, 11:51am
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Children’s Imaginations

(Crayola Crayons)

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I wanted to do an acrostic poem about "Crayola Crayons," so it just went from there. I thought about children, which lead to their imaginations. All in all I really like the way that it turned out.

#28 Mar 07th 2007, 8:34am
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(Sweetheart) Proposal

I wrote this once again for Pradeep because I love him very much.

Thanks!

(TSP)

#29 Mar 12th 2007, 8:06pm
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Lost Souls ............................

I wrote about people who die that are lost. I guess that is all I have to say about it right now.

Angel Face ............................

I wrote that about people who are beautiful, but are really ugly people inside.

The Wiseman ...........................

I believe that everyone should have their own freedom of what the believe in as in faith in God.

#30 Mar 17th 2007, 10:54pm . Edited Mar 22nd 2007, 7:45am
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Negative Stimulus ...

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There was this fight that I had with Pradeep that upset me very much, so I wrote this poem. I would never do this, but I really wanted to do it. I promised, so I can't. I can't help, but feel this way right now. I feel just horrid. I just hope things get better.

I am fine now! Just wanted to leave that so people don't get worried.

(TSP)

#31 Mar 21st 2007, 2:23pm . Edited Mar 22nd 2007, 7:45am
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Romantic Allure ...

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The "Pride and Prejudice" comment that I made was about the love between Elizabeth and Darcy in the book written by Jane Austen. I just watched most of the movies about this, but I might read the real book one of these days. I don't know though because I was told it was rather boring. Eithe way I might want to read it. Anyway, it wasn't all about the book really I just added that in there because I liked it. Good look in guessing what it is really about. I am just kidding. It means whatever you want it to mean. That is what all poems are like for the most part.

(TSP)

#32 Mar 22nd 2007, 7:43am . Edited Mar 22nd 2007, 7:45am
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The Meadow Dream ................

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This is just a short poem that I wrote. I don't even know why I wrote it. I just did it. I like to write about dreams or anything to do with fantasy ( such as fa ires and dragons etc.). I also put at the end "When I dream, I draem of you..." this was for Pradeep. I just left that there in the hopes that he will understand that I ment it for him. It is just about a girl dreaming of a meadow and fairies etc. It can really mean anything that you want to think of.

THANKS !

(TSP)

#33 Mar 25th 2007, 2:13pm
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Everlasting ...

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I had this on my profile for the longest time, so I am guessing that if you ever took a look at my profile that you would notice that I had that there for awhile now. I don't really remember when I wrote this though because as I said I had it on my profile for the longest time. Now I have a quote that Syliva Brown had in one of her books that I am reading right now. I thought it was something very nice and she said to say it to yourself in the morning as an affrimation. She had a lot listed, but I thought that was beautifully said. Anyway, I love Pradeep so much. I wrote this for him. He is a wonderful man. I was upset, but knowing that I will always love him. He is the best person that has happend to me. I can't imagine my life without him. He is just the one for me, so to me it is everlasting in this lifetime.

God Bless You!

#34 Mar 28th 2007, 4:28pm
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Journey Home ...

........................................ part of Heaven

I just wrote this about when you die and go to Heaven. That is all it is about. It is very short and to the point. I am sure that whoever reads this will understand. Just wanted to write something beautiful about Heaven. It is something that has been on my mind as of late.

Bless YOU!

#35 Mar 28th 2007, 5:12pm . Edited Apr 03rd 2007, 4:32pm
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The Hall of Voices ...

..................................... part of Heaven

It is another religius poem that I state what I feel about Heaven.

#36 Apr 03rd 2007, 4:32pm
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Twilight ....

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This is about the love that I feel for Pradeep. I feel he found me in the dark and showed me the light that was always there, but hidden from my view.

#37 Apr 03rd 2007, 4:33pm
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Antiquity ..................

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I don't know why I wrote this, so I have no idea what to tell you!

#38 Apr 16th 2007, 3:46pm
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I wrote some poems about Pirates on my other ID of, "The Monkey King of Pirates."

I hope that you will read some of my work there, and have a look at my forums.

Thanks!

*TSP

#39 Apr 23rd 2007, 11:39am
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Our Heart's Wasteland ........

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I wrote this because there are time when we leave people when they need help. We should help one another more often. Also you should never teach a child to hate because we should love and not hate. I know many people have said that and still no change in the world, but maybe some day someone will listen.

#40 May 03rd 2007, 6:01am . Edited May 03rd 2007, 6:01am
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((( Listless Concerns )))

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Just a poem that I wrote when I was upset... and I was thinking about the song, "You're so Vain." Classic song... it was in my head because I heard it not to long ago on the radio. I like all kinds of music... so I was listen to classic oldies.

#41 May 09th 2007, 2:17am
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((( Shadow Walker )))

This is just about walking in the shadows with someone, but my husband wrote something that I posted with it because he read that and started saying what I posted, so I thought that might be good to post that as well. It was going to have a darker theme (my poem), but I guess I didn't want to do that. My husband sure did that for you all. He is an intresting guy.

#42 May 16th 2007, 10:52am
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((( America Has A Problem, A Big Problem )))

This is just about what it says. Then I also wrote a note at the end of it.

#43 May 17th 2007, 2:26pm
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((( Beauty In Many Colors )))

It is just something that I was thinking about and it is on my forum under, Random Palace...

#44 May 19th 2007, 12:00pm . Edited May 19th 2007, 12:00pm
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((( Beautiful ? )))

Yeah, I think everyone is beautiful!!!

#45 May 19th 2007, 12:01pm
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((( Two Hearts )))

It is about two people who love each other... all that stuff etc...

#46 May 19th 2007, 12:10pm
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((( Memoirs )))

I wrote a big authors note at the end, so I am sure you don't need to come here to read about it. I just pray that everything is going to be okay with the other thoughts in my head. Not bad thoughts, but worries. That is all. Thanks for reading as always.

(TSP)

#47 May 27th 2007, 12:21pm
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((( Waiting For The Sun )))

It is about love when it is hard to be together because of the distance.

#48 Jun 04th 2007, 6:33am
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((( End To Sanity )))

Well, it is a story. I don't know where to go with it now. Anyway, if you have any ideas let me know. Thanks also if you read it. I haven't been updating as much as I use to, but I guess that is okay.

#49 Jun 30th 2007, 2:51pm
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(( My Star ))

I wrote this about Pradeep and I, so it is about my life in general.

#50 Jun 30th 2007, 2:52pm . Edited Jun 30th 2007, 2:52pm


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