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Katica Locke
The Gemstone Dragons are so named because of the colors of their scales - onyx, amethyst, sapphire, emerald, topaz, ruby and pearl. They're also more serpentine, like eastern dragons, rather than western dragons. Draklings are a subspecies of dragon, dracorians are humanoid dragons, and innira are amphibious water dragons, in both saltwater and freshwater species.
#151 May 08th 2007, 1:35pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Gosh, you really thought this out! Have you read the Deltora series by Emily Rodda? She has a 'dragon system' like that. I can't remember them all, but there was ruby, amethyst, emerald, diamond, topaz, lapis lazuli, and opal. I think I got them all. Hey, I know you mentioned a dragon who's going to appear in book 5, I believe. What color is she?
#152 May 08th 2007, 2:36pm
Katica Locke
No, I haven't read that. I guess it just proves that there are no 'new' ideas left; no matter what you think of, somebody's thought of it already. *Shrugs*

The dragon in Book 5, Mahkyn, is a black amethyst. In dragon culture, the darker the scales, the more attractive a dragon is. Scale darkness has to do with density, which depends on nutrition and genetics, as well as age. Young and old dragons have lighter scales than dragon in their prime.

And yes, I have thought about this a lot, lol.

#153 May 08th 2007, 3:15pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Kewlness! Yeah, there are new ideas! I bet nobody's thought of a story where a tater tot must find the magical monster tuck of Muslims! Haha!! I feel.....really dumb now. I have no more questions. I'm out. For now. Mueheheheh!
#154 May 08th 2007, 5:14pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Sorry, that was supposed to be 'truck'.
#155 May 08th 2007, 5:14pm
FreezingRayne
I'm going to have to disagree with you, Rose. I think everything has been done, but that doesn't mean you can't do it again. Do it again, do it different, do it better. My dad told me this when I was depressed about not being able to come up with any 'original' ideas. And my dad should know; he's a science fiction author who's had five books and a bunch of short stories published.
#156 May 09th 2007, 6:04am
Yuy Ren
omg, haven't checked this place in a while (new semester of school)

so, how many chapters until the end of this book? :P

#157 May 09th 2007, 1:27pm
Katica Locke
As of now (ch. 28) there are 2 chapters left (30 total).

*sobs* I can't believe it's almost over. No more wonderful reviews until I get my butt in gear and start posting again! I don't know if I can stand it ... Okay, I'm over it. Lol

#158 May 09th 2007, 3:19pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Her de har har. Cool! The onlt thing my dad has published is, let's see, nothing. I don't think my dad even knows what fiction is, the only things he reads are Homeowner's Manuals. So he's not much help. OMGosh, 30 chapters! What an even number!

Ooh, are you gonna leave us with a cliff hanger? (hate those.....XP, but I like 'em too)

#159 May 09th 2007, 4:14pm
Katica Locke
I don't consider it a cliff-hanger. In fact, I think it wraps up the current situation pretty well, while still leaving it wide open for another book.
#160 May 09th 2007, 6:01pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Well that's the best kind! Unless you're one of those lazy authors who leaves it wide open but never writes another book. Unlike you. ^.^

So, are we going to learn about Lucifer's past, and that other horse who showed up? How did the ** and Thaddehoodie meet? (Sorry, but I can't remember names today) XD

#161 May 09th 2007, 6:15pm
Katica Locke
But I am one of those writers! Or, I was. Before this series, I would finish maybe one in twenty stories that I started. Before this, I had only finished two novel-length projects. One was a piece of crap about a vampire and an elf locked in a maze, and the other was a Law & Order fanfiction (with witches and incubi and magic, of course). So, honestly, I'm terrifed that I'll burn out on this one, too. Maybe I finally just grew up enough to stick to something. I hope so.

More about Lucifer, yes, but I don't know that the other horse was anybody special, she just looked like someone Lucifer used to know. The ** and Thaddehoodie? Why do I even bother thinking up these names? No one can remember them!

/rant

Lol. No really, Acena and Thaddemeyan met ... hmmm ... actually, I haven't really thought about it. Let's see ... she sent her servant girl, Orylani, around to the local manors to see which Lords had the most money and sons of marrying age. Acena sent out letters to the young men, and I guess Thaddemeyan was the only one dumb enough to write back. Quite the love story, eh?

#162 May 09th 2007, 6:39pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
-.- How romantic. I'm sorry I can't remember any names, normally I could, but I went to the dentist and they pumped me full of Laughing Gas!! T.T

How come Acena can't get pregnant? If you ask me, she's the one who's sterile! Or maybe she has birth control and uses it just to torture Naeven! Am I right? (She is a **. She is THE **)

#163 May 09th 2007, 6:52pm
Katica Locke
I was just teasing about the names. Laughing gas, how fun O.o

Actually, it's not Acena. Naeven is 137 years old, and no magic can completely stop the effects of time. He's shooting blanks, mostly. (THE ** - agreed ^_^)

#164 May 09th 2007, 7:10pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Stem cell research much?
#165 May 09th 2007, 7:36pm
Sohym
No wonder he's so angry! XD his pride is destroyed!

Ah, I've got a question!

Can I worship you? *puppy eyes*

*fangirl crisis*

#166 May 10th 2007, 4:29pm
Katica Locke
*accepts fangirl worship with demure modesty*

Lol, anyway, I was thinking about the question of STDs and I came up with a little scene that should answer that question. This is added into chapter 1 of Book 1.

***

From the box he pulls a round, black stone about the size of an acorn.

"Hold out you hand," he commands. He sets the stone on my palm and I jump as it starts to flash red, yellow, gray, green, brown, orange -- so many colors I can't keep track of them. Lord Sactaren raises his eyebrows. "You have more diseases than a third-rate whorehouse," he says, and his gaze turns appraising once again. I look back down at the floor. It's not my fault.

I glance up as he steps back over to his table of potions under the window. He picks up a little bottle and an old silver spoon. "Come here, Lark," he says as he fills the spoon with a thick, pink potion. He holds it up and I hesitate, then open my mouth. The potion is sickly sweet, clinging to the inside of my mouth and making me want to gag. He glances at the stone, still flashing in the palm of my hand, and then sets the bottle down. Next, he has me eat a piece of bitter root, and then drink something that looks a lot like watery pus. Luckily, it just takes like dirty water.

He keeps glancing down at my hand, and I finally realize that every time he gives me some new potion or herb, another color disappears from the flashing stone. He's curing me.

"You're very lucky," Lord Sactaren says after a moment. He hands me another glass of some bitter-smelling brew. "Many of these infections have been in your body for years. A few more years, and they would have killed you." He takes the empty glass and hands me a small, pale blue pill. "Last one," he says. I swallow the pill and look down at the stone, now just a dull red color, and watch as the red slowly fades to white.

***

And now Lark is STD free! Lol.

#167 May 15th 2007, 4:44pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
I don't even know what face to make. . O.- XP #O#

More diseases than a third-rate whorehouse? Exuse me? I would be SO offended. Like he would know? o.O

It's kewl though. Glad I don't have any STDs.

Does Lark have PTSD? Or C-PTSD? (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Second one is Complex PTSD)

#168 May 15th 2007, 5:14pm
Katica Locke
Lark has C-PTSD, though I didn't know it had a specific name until you mentioned it and I Googled it. He was abused for years.
#169 May 15th 2007, 6:30pm
FreezingRayne
yeah, if i had been repeatedly raped for much of my young life i would be a little ** up as well.
#170 May 15th 2007, 6:52pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Cool. (well, not really)

One of my characters has PTSD, but I don't know if it's complex because I researched it then forgot everything but the name and the fact that PTSD victims have insomnia and flashbacks. Shows how smart I am. How do I even pass tests....?

What about our mage? And are there bloodstains in the courtyard? (gosh that sounded morbid)

#171 May 16th 2007, 3:20pm
Katica Locke
No bloodstains in the courtyard, but Naeven does have a bit of PTSD associated with his rape. Jaguan, the mage who raped him, wasn't in human form when he did it, (Icky, I know) so now Naeven can't stand the feel of fur on his skin. It's why he hates having sex with Schaff.
#172 May 16th 2007, 4:41pm
FreezingRayne
Have he and Schaff had sex? I didn't know that. I just thought Schaff really really wanted to. Is he in love with Naeven, or does he just want to bang him? I understand wanting bang him. I would ;)
#173 May 16th 2007, 5:24pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
O.O -has seizure-

Hunch: Was it a jaguar? And was/is JJ older than Naeven?

Heh. It would be kinda funny if someone got him a fur coat for his birthday.

Ugh, I am SO gonna need therapy. And the pile grows higher!!!

#174 May 16th 2007, 6:01pm
Katica Locke
Naeven and Schaff had sex a few times years ago. Does Schaff love him? Maybe a little. Does he want to bang him? Hell yes. (Who wouldn't, right?)

No, Jaguan does not turn into a jaguar, and no, Jaguan is not older than Naeven.

#175 May 16th 2007, 6:23pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Younger? Same age?

Animals......Ok....OMG A FISH!!! Never mind, couldn't breathe. Was it a furry mamimal?

#176 May 16th 2007, 6:28pm
Katica Locke
Younger. About 40 years younger.

He was a hyena, a big one.

#177 May 16th 2007, 6:36pm
Sohym
Oh, my, god..... Poor Naeven ;_; *hugs him*

I hate Jaguan more and more..! _

Why do Naeven didn't get his revenge on him? Is he too scared? Or is it cuz it was "part of the contract" so he doesn't feel he can do something about him?

Ah, and about Kivilx (god, I'm sure I spelled his name wrong), what's his orientation? Is he going to have a boyfriend or a girlfrind eventually?

#178 May 16th 2007, 6:40pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
OH GOD, BAD IMAGE!!!! I will never be able to look at a hyena again!!! Horny children!! Guh! So how old were they when it happened?

Isn't Kivixl straight? But, personally, I think he has a little crush on Schaff. ^.^

#179 May 16th 2007, 6:50pm
Katica Locke
It was part of the deal. I wouldn't say Naeven is scared of Jaguan, he just makes sure he has as little to do with him as possible, but he has gotten a little revenge a few times.

I haven't decided about Kivixl's orientation. He's young and he'll want a family someday, I'm sure, so he'll find a female, but I don't think he'd turn down a male if he asked nicely. (Hear that, Schaff *poke, poke* Nicely) Lol, I've had thought about hooking the two of them up, but I don't know if it'll happen.

It happened in *consults timeline* 2002, which was 61 years before the story begins, which would make Naeven 74 and Jaguan about 30 ... Hmm, that's a bit young for Jaguan, maybe he's only 20 years younger than Naeven. That would make him 50 at the time ... that seems better.

#180 May 16th 2007, 7:26pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
That's better, I guess. Revenge, eh? Mueheheh.

When do we get to get to know Naeven's buddy a bit more? Maybe I've asked this before, but is JJ gonna show up? He should die. Horribly. Want to put that viper to work? Heh heh. -evil-

(great, I've even given him a nickname. I'm familiarizing!!! I hate me!!)

#181 May 16th 2007, 7:39pm
FreezingRayne
I have a question. Are Lark and Naeven gonna go on any more business trips? They only went on one and I really want to see more of this world.
#182 May 17th 2007, 5:43pm
Katica Locke
Naeven's buddy? You mean the friend that he said was dead? *shrugs* I don't know. JJ (lol) will show up in Book 4. He won't die. And I have something different planned for the viper.

There's another business trip in Book 4 - most of Book 4, actually.

#183 May 17th 2007, 6:37pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Ooh, a trip? They should get drunk!!! Lolz! Yes, Naeven's dead friend. How many other buddies does he have? -heh-

Is JJ gonna show up while they be on their trip? Are they gonna go see the wizard?

Hey, does Naeven have a bathroom in his room yet? (OMGosh, I saw a shark toilet seat cover in a magazine!!)

#184 May 17th 2007, 7:12pm
FreezingRayne
Don't they get drunk off magic all the time??? Haha, Naeven would be a horny drunk and Lark would be a sad/nuerotic drunk. Wait, they're like that already.
#185 May 18th 2007, 3:34am
RoseRedSnowWhite
-gasps- They are, aren't they? Well, Naeven DID say that he hasn't gotten any from a guy in a long time, so I guess he does get kinda horny.

You know that thing that Lark saw on Daron? I think it is either a mutated peacock or a basilisk. Yes. Popped right into my head today. The power of Fridays, baby. YEAH!!! O.-

#186 May 18th 2007, 1:03pm
Katica Locke
Lol, there will be drinking, and yes, JJ will show up. I'm not saying where they're going. Gotta save something for the story XP Haven't found a need to mention a bathroom.

Drunk off magic isn't the same as intoxication from alcohol. You got Naeven right, but I think Lark might also be a mean drunk.

Naeven is horny as hell. Not a peacock, not a basilisk, but related to both, sort of. I'm not giving away that one either.

#187 May 18th 2007, 3:29pm
RoseRedSnowWhite
Why is he so horny? Are there no such things as whores over there? Gosh!!

For some reason, I can picture Lark as a happy drunk.

#188 May 18th 2007, 5:01pm


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