So, I wrote this story. Its called Meeting Slade.
I know this is a huge request, but could someone read it so far and give me some constrictive criticism to make it better? I am also in need of a new title. 'Meeting Slade' sounds pretty boring.
Sorry to ask, but I need help. Please and thank you.
Tell you what. If you are old enough toread a mature story because of some vulgar language I'll read your's and you can read mine. Night Sense. Actually I'll read your's anyway. its always hard when you write a story not knowing who likes it or not or what you might be doing wrong.
I'll let you know what I find.3/12/2009 #2
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