I've written a lot of poems in the last two days, but there wasn't much response so have a look!
My poems' titles (to get you interested, i hope -_-):
-Can't you see it too?
-I hear your screams.
-I whisper farewell.
-Now the stiff body lies.
-She sat upon the autumn-leaf covered ground (wow, long title, any title ideas? credit would go to the one with the title)
-The eternal darkness of the waters.
-The hooded figure of Death.
-The lady in black.
-This is life (not one of my best).
-What are poems?
-When I was a child...
-Who cares (one of my earlier poems, so don't read this one first)
Review please! ^__^8/24/2009 #1
Hey I've reviewed your poem haunting. I was wondering if you may be able to review mine it's my first posted and I was after maybe some constructive criticism or anything of the like by the way do i have to join the forum to be able to reply and post :S9/01/2009 #2
nope, not all! i'm going to review your poem! :P thanks for reviewing me, keep reveiwing!! lolz9/01/2009 #3
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