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FleeThePhantom

It's called modern memory. I wrote it extemporaneously. I would love to review some other people's stuff too! I will be posting on this site pretty regularly now. Thanks! Let me know if someone out there is interested :)

12/09/2010 #1
Hamlet Survives

good poem! i would very much like some reviwes for mine, i just got a new account. : )

1/30/2011 #2
Stormfeather

Modern Memory was so good! Many people have forgotten our reason we're in this world- God. This was wonderful for having been written so quickly. A lot of my poems come out like that- I have an idea, I have to write it down, then I'm pretty much done with a little tweaking. A lot of people forget there's a life outside their technology too...heehee.

10/30/2011 #3
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