hi guys, i'm somewhat new here...but review my poetry and i'll definately return the favor!!

thanks!

I have reviewed Glass Castle, a poem I liked very much. I like your style, I haven't seen one quite like it before. Please, pick a piece of my work and review one. I would like to hear your opnion.

I read Into Displacement, and liked it very much. I love the way you use words, its a real talent to be able to string such interesting and rare words together and make something so beautiful. Your poem made me think.

Keep writing,

Kezi

Hello! I reviewed your poem "Into Displacement". This may sound paradoxical halfway through but bare with me, My review is actually not terribly long, but the review I wrote is terribly long. Well, mostly due to me analyzing your poem and throwing out my ideas as to what it means. I am most interested in what it really means to you and your take on it, and I hope my giant rambling review isn't a nuisance. I found the poem to be interesting and want to know what you meant by it. Well, please let me know if you can or want to :) Thanks! u Sincerely, Tobias Gosnell

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