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Natalie Millan
Topic: Character/Plot -- Ask if yours is cliched
I was looking for a topic where I can ask if my character was just plain bad writing or cliched... I didn't find any...

So, moving on, is a character who is "perfect" but somewhat unpredictable and nuts a mary/gary sue?

Here's the basic layout of my character, Maximian, since he's the only one I'm worried about.

He's the child of Death and a vampire, he loves violence, he can't be killed unless someone hates him with no pity/mercy and he's utterly devoid of emotions. He's also somewhat sadistic.

Do you think he's a gary sue?

Please check the story, and give me feedback on whether he is or not.

Oh, and you can ask about your character too, if you want to. =)

#1 Feb 08th, 9:51pm
Rudersovgy
You know you oculd always just pop over to my Forum and my team and myself will igve your character a suitable analysis.
#2 Feb 09th, 2:39am

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