I'm trying to go back and read all the stories posted in the forums ^_^, but I figured I'd post if anyone wanted to review my story. It's titled Envelop My Heart. I'm still working on it so there's not too much to read. Please give me some constructive critisim or some encouragement, and I'll try to do the same for you!

http://www.fictionpress.com/~cherieisabella

Cherie Isabella

I have a story for you to review that nobody else reviews anymore, i have quite a bit of stories/poems, but only three or four reviews! I was wondering if i am really that bad!!

I will definitely try to read your works as soon as I get the chance! ...the dreaded monotonous final exams are occupying my time right now . but count on a review as soon as I can read it!

Can someone look at my story "The Dangerous Abilities of the Mind" ? Thanks.

Well I would like some reviews on some of my works, mainly on my story Graceful butterflies, as that is the story I am working on at the moment.

Hi, I'm a newbie here and I just started writing a story called

Something To Live For - Enola is the normal teenager she gets the average grades, has the average looks. When everything is ripped from under her very feet and her life is falling apart who's going to pick up the peices? Then she meets him, Tristan, the ghost with a tragic past.

Plz. help me out I really need some feedback.

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