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C.Gholy
Topic: High school lust
This is my idea,

Title: High school lust

It's set in a school, There is a really smart girl called Hilary and a party girl called Lindsey. They both hate eachother guts but when they find out the boy they have been fighting over called Tom was gay. They end up having an obsession with each other. Hilary has loads of secrets but won't say anything to anyone? Will Lindsey be save Hilary from an arranged marridge?

#1 Jul 23rd 2007, 10:37am
Alexandra Jacobson
No offense, but just the way you began it made it sound cliche even if the whole gay thing and arranged marriage thing is more original.

However, PLEASE FLESH OUT YOUR CHARACTERS SO THAT THEY ARE NOT JUST STEREOTYPES ADN DO NOT MAKE THEM BEST FRIENDS OR EVEN FRIENDS AT THE END.

#2 Sep 27th 2007, 7:22pm

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