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minnigurl892
Topic: im new and am begging for help
hey im new to fictionpress and just posted my frist story. it was an assignment that i thought turned out okay... please i am in desperate need of some constructive critism!! thanks so much!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2425850/1/

#1 Oct 12th 2007, 10:01pm
Kelsci J. Sceasel
I read and reviewed your story. It was lovely, not just "okay." If you could return the favor, that would be wonderful. Keep writing, and welcome to fictionpress!
#2 Oct 13th 2007, 12:46pm
Purple Summer
Hey i read your story and reviewed it. I hope you don't mind doing the same for me. Could you please review 'Seeing Colour'? any of them would be fine but i really need some thoughts on this story.

Thanks!

#3 Feb 12th, 7:53pm

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