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So I have a story called What Lies Beneath. I've only got 1 review. So far my story is only 5 chapters long, but I would really like some feedback on how it's going so far. If you review my story I'll review yours (: Just post it when/if you reply!

Thank you so so much!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2930585/1/What_Lies_Beneath

7/08/2011 #1
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