I'd like some good, constructive criticism for my story, Learning to Forget, because the only people who review my story have said that they like it, and usually explained what they liked about it, but I've received very few tips on how to improve my writing.

I'd be more than happy to review one of your stories in return. :D

Alrighty, I just finished chapter one of your story and I am impressed with all of the detail you put into it. Good job. Gold star for you! I even wrote a pretty hefty review lol. Sorry but once I get talking...er...typing you just can't shut me up! Now if you could please review my story I'd greatly appreciate it! I typically get the same reviews you get and it is quite frustrating!Well thank you so much

Phobia - http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2607497/1/Phobia

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