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Author has written 27 stories for General, General, Song, Friendship, Humor, and Love. 12.28.03 New piece posted, titled The Anti-Sock Revolution. Written last year as a school project, and has turned out to be one of the few things I've ever written that I truly like. I've got twenty-five or so poetries and stories down there to read. Please review, if you do read, if only to give some constructive critism. My poetry is rather terrible, but I think my stories have been improving lately. s.t.o.r.i.e.s Crescendo - A story about a girl who's never thought she was capable of love, until she meets the one boy who breaks her heart. Entered in a contest, and won. I'll soon be receiving a published copy (excited for that, haha). Would love some reviews to tell me your opinions. Aoi Hitomi - Thoroughly ashamed of this one. One of the first real stories I ever actually wrote. I mean, that I sat down and worked out a plot before writing it. It will probably remained unfinished forever, unless I suddenly one day get the urge to revise it. Which I doubt. p.o.e.t.r.y I've got a crap load of poetry down there; I'll give you the highlights. Safety - It's safer to be sad. Living in a Bubble - If you never take risks, you never really live. A Different Me - You stole my heart without my permission. The only three poems I consider to be worth a crap and a half, but who knows? You may disagree. Falling in love Is much like falling in a lake Every step you walk is for them As is every breath you take So, forgive me for my lack of tact But this statement I must make It seems I've lost my balance And fallen in your lake (c) Marionette '02 Never got around to posting that. G'bye | |||||||
1. The AntiSock Revolution reviewsLoopy Evans has Blue Tiger Junior High in the palm of her hand. Whatever she says, goes. When a teacher tries to give her an underserved grade, she sees the situation fit to start a revolution...Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,793 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-28-03 - Published: 12-28-032. Bane reviewsAfter being shot with cupids arrow, you slowly bleed to death...symbolism. Please r/r.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-03 - Published: 9-23-033. A NotSo Simple Life tenative title reviewsPatrick's parents are the writer/illustrator team that produce the popular childrens book, "Moogle and Narm". Because of this, he's had to move around his entire life. Finally, his parents offer him a chance of consistency in Paradise Valley, which he sHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-26-03 - Published: 7-26-034. Three's a Crowd reviewsFollows the old saying 'two's company, three's a crowd'. Please r/r.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-20-03 - Published: 3-20-035. Crescendo reviewsA girl who has never loved before finally learns what it really feels to have her heart broken. Entered for a contest, and would love to hear some feedback. Please r/r.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,286 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-20-03 - Published: 3-20-036. Safety reviewsSadness is easier. That's basically what this is about. Please r&r.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-13-02 - Published: 8-13-027. Silly Girl reviewsI can't really describe this one; it's too personal. Please just r&r.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-2-02 - Published: 8-2-028. Fly reviewsI guess this could be considered romance...I've never really written a song before; I'd love to get some reviews to tell me if I should bother to keep trying! Anyway, if offered the chance, shouldn't we all fly?Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-16-02 - Published: 5-16-029. Lydia reviewsLydia doesn't consider herself human anymore. She's merely existing in the big scheme of life until she's sent to her Aunt's house to learn a thing or two. This is just the first chapter, I expect to work the plot in later.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 700 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-9-02 - Published: 5-9-0210. Fate reviewsBe nice to everyone; you never know when they might be gone and it's too late.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-20-02 - Published: 4-20-0211. Betrayal reviewsThis is definetly the strangest thing I've ever written...I had it previewed by someone I trust and they described it as "really freaking powerful and the ending makes you stare". So you tell me.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-20-02 - Published: 4-20-0212. Sorry reviewsIt's based on someone who never apologizes.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-31-02 - Published: 3-31-0213. Remember Me reviewsA poem written by me. About doubts...hey, that rhymes!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-29-02 - Published: 3-29-0214. Simplicity reviewsHeehee...irony, people. Ugh, can ya tell me what ya think, please?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-1-02 - Published: 3-1-0215. Living in a Bubble reviewsIf you don't take chances, then you don't live.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-1-02 - Published: 3-1-0216. A Different Me reviewsThis is kinda weird...BEWARE...this is not some gushy romance poem.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-02 - Published: 3-1-0217. The Girl reviewsShort but sweet.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-26-02 - Published: 2-26-0218. Aoi Hitomi » reviews[Chapter 4 is up!] About a ghost. Set in 2035. Please r&r.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,876 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-8-02 - Published: 12-2-0119. Mystery reviewsJust another poem by me. Hard to explain it...Please read and review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-22-01 - Published: 12-22-0120. I Still Love You Anyway reviewsKinda confusing...but...please r&r anyway!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-18-01 - Published: 12-18-0121. Cross my Heart reviewsHey...Hard to describe. Just read. Please review. Thank you. Ha, short sentences...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-18-01 - Published: 12-18-0122. Fantasies reviewsI used to dream I lived in a perfect world...Enjoy, and r&r.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-13-01 - Published: 12-13-0123. Two Paths reviewsThis is for my friend, Sparticus. I sorta wrote it from third person and switched around the characters, but he knows that it's for him. I love you, Sparticus! Anyway, it's about two friends...I hope you enjoy it!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0124. Part of Your World reviewsAnother poem about Chris, who was just out of my grasp. u.u; Please...just read...(and review...)General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-2-01 - Published: 12-2-0125. What Would You Do? reviewsNo, it has nothing to do with the song. I have nothing to say about it other than to please read and review, because I'm incredibly insecure about my poetry. Thanks! ^_^;;General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-30-01 - Published: 11-30-0126. Hide and Seek reviewsRecently someone I knew died, and I have been incredibly upset...I wrote this poem about him. Please r&rGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-30-01 - Published: 11-30-0127. I'm Still Here reviewsDon't know why I wrote this...just started typing. Please r&rGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-30-01 - Published: 11-30-01
