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| valpincon |
Author has written 75 stories for General, General, and Love. not me anymore | |||||
1. Still reviews1st draftPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-4-122. Venice 2 reviewsOld onePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-4-123. nostalgia reviewsBArely even a scrap.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-12-074. Sonnet reviewsWrote this in response to one written for me.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-22-075. Between Us reviewsOld one. kind of grim. And there are meant to be two verses, dumb fictionpress.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-28-066. Question reviewsTis a poem, so it is.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-23-067. Venezia I reviewsThis is part of a three-poem series, but the other parts suck, so it's just this. The triptych was the last hurrah of my Venice obsession. This is the most anodyne, but least thematically shaky, of the three. please R R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-3-068. Walking Home reviewsI dashed this off from a few thoughts I had walking home from work - not sure if it's not a little vague... opinions please :PPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-069. untitled poems reviewscouple of little nonsenses i wrote whilst on mushrooms just now, which I HIGHLY recommend while they are still legal (well, ish) in this country.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-16-0510. tupilak reviewsI submitted this piece for my uni unit this term...apparently they're going to teach me how to write...the idea came from a meeting, a present, and a warped mind :p Like anything I write based in reality, it diverged a very long way by the second sentenceFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,790 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-16-0411. Time, Rhyme and Him reviewsa poem. i am trying to rhyme and rhythmise at the moment...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-16-0412. beachcombing reviewsa little walk on the beach in my head...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-16-0413. Nativity Plaint reviewsoh my god, I can't BELIEVE I submitted this for my first ever uni portfolio...oh well...a little christmas rhyme for you all :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-16-0414. Dawn On The Water reviewsThere's a lake on campus; its a pretty lake. :-DPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-8-0415. Bridge BurnedInspired by what somebody told me on friday night, but now i come to think of it could be about many people at the moment...it never rains but it pours...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Published: 12-7-0416. love jama little bit of nothing that is all. The half-rhyming is deliberate, don't know if its effective. please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Published: 11-26-0417. truth reviewsbasically i have to put something up, its been so long...I'm rusty and emotionally imbalanced at the moment...this is NOT what I want to say but its as close as i can get right now.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-5-0418. The Reading reviewsI decline to comment on the grounds it may incriminate me :P no really, its just fleeting infatuation in free verse. well, free-ish. I can't resist the patterns and half-rhymes... please review, best thing I ever did.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-9-0319. Nakednessan old one redone due to structure problems and one stupid keyslip...still virtually the same though. Please review!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Published: 12-6-0320. You Are HereInspired by various things which dragged up this strange sensation of loss. Please R R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Published: 12-6-0321. Far More reviewsshor little poem about whats really true. not my favourite, but its gotta be done when i'm in soppy mode :PPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-15-0322. Loving You My Way reviewsEverybody loves differently, don't they?Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-22-0323. Raspberries reviewsA moment...not my best, but please review!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-15-0324. Sphinx reviewsLove poem. Slightly flippant, but not bad! :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-10-0325. When You're Asleep reviewspossibly a wee bit hyperbolic...me and my passions and insecurities, his beauty and his impenetrable sleep...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-6-0326. The Celestine Prophecy reviewsSomeone told me that I'd made them feel the energy referred to in the celestine prophecy...they make me feel it too. makes sense even if you dont know what the celestine prophecy is i think...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-6-0327. Perhaps reviewsgod, don't you hate not knowing what it is they WANT of you? Its driving me mad!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-6-0328. The Mere Idea reviewsThis guy I thought I just lusted after, but now I know I'll care about him too, damn it. Why can't people be as one-dimensional up close as they seem from a distance? it would make life so much easier...or failing that, why can't I be more discriminatingPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-16-0329. Compassion reviewsJust when I wasn't looking for him, he appeared in my life and is making me happy...that's more than enough.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-13-0330. Smoke reviewsa very short poem of lust...I can still taste him... please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-11-0331. sundaywhat a wonderful day i just had :) please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 5-11-0332. Vaccillations reviewsMy hearts going up and down like a yoyo at the moment...so many choices, so many loves, so many paths I could take...Its all his fault for coming back, but I still love him...for Mark. please R R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-9-0333. There Are No Words reviewsa poem full of exquisite words and no sense! for those who know me, prepare for A LOT of naff poetry - he's back in the country, and my heart has run away with itself again.oh joy! :PPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-4-0334. Ellen Or Anyone reviewsThis is a story about a woman who is so afraid it is driving her insane. She could be me. She could be you. She could be your best friend. She could be anyone; everyone.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 906 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-25-0335. Passionata reviewsDesire! desire all over the place :P please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-27-0336. revelation reviewsabout the morning after. sinister, self-pitying :P please r r nonetheless!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-5-0337. Nothing But Light Under My Skin reviewsa poem about purity and its corruption...i stole the idea from LittleMaggie's poem by the same name, go read it! :P but first read this! and review please :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-1-0338. succubus reviewswhen darkness seeps into sex...i've been listening to jeff buckley's 'dream brother' :pPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-1-0339. Stolen Orange reviewsA poem of unwilling transition between the savage little world of childhood and adulthood...i've been reading 'five quarters of the orange' and its imagery-d me to death, what can i say? please r r :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-1-0340. The Kiss reviewsA poem inspired by the painting of the same name by Gustav Klimt...amazing picture, slightly less amazing poem :P please R R however!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-26-0341. Siesta reviewsOne of those whitewashed towns in the spanish hills...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-6-0342. The Night to Persephone reviewsA kind of dialogue in verse...I don't like it now its done, but the idea was good, based on yet another painting by Dante Gabriel Rosetti. Please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-13-0343. The windows of the soul? reviewsA rather strange monolgue on eyes - why is it so unnerving, so exciting, so invasive, to be looked right in the eyes? Next time, don't look away. Look back and see...whatever it is you see. please R RFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 884 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-11-0344. Caesura reviewsI'm waiting for his return...and everything seems to be on hold. This is not good...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-11-0345. Choice reviewsI could, with an effort of will, regain control of my heart and get on with my life. But why would I want to do a thing like that? I have made my choice. please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-11-0346. Could It Be reviewsWondering what hes doing now, his life has so much more beauty than mine...some good imagery here i think, but as per usual re this guy a bit sappy - dont be deterred though, R R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-7-0347. Rosary reviewsI have often ordered my emotions into poetry so they are acceptable and accessible; but at night there is a time to really feel...this is how i feel about him, and his leaving. the structure leaves a lot to be desired, but pls R R :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 384 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-1-0348. Transition a lament reviewsmy lament for a personal disaster that gets closer evry day - that the one I have begun to love is leaving, and I will never see him again. please R R.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-27-0249. Teeth reviewsI had a dream my teeth were falling out, and I looked up what it signified...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-24-0250. going away song reviewsgod hes going away...he'll never know! it will be like it never happened, like he never made me feel this way...why?why should he not know? ahem. a poem, please R R :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-15-0251. moment reviewssomeday soon the mass of love i have for this guy will come out right in poetry...for time being, this is for him. again. :p hes going soon, and i'm panicing. please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-12-0252. What I Deserve reviewsI do not want another like myself...this wasn't supposed to come out like this but i'll try again another time to express what hes come to represent to me...about someone really beautiful. please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-10-0253. Lara reviewsinspired by the beauty in dr zhivago, wanted to be more clever and elusive with it,. but what can i say, i'm a sad formulaic storyteller...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-24-0254. On beauty reviewsa random rant about human beauty. what is it, whats it worth? please r RFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,095 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-24-0255. Foretold reviewsWhen you do something you have to do, even though you know you'll regret it. please review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-19-0256. Happiness reviewsnot so much a fic as a moment of pure unadulterated happiness. They're always short and sweet, and none more so than this one i imagine, so i thought i'd write it down.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-18-0257. Losing Each Other reviewsI've been thinking a lot about one night stands lately...and the consequences that might ensue if one were to... oh yeah, also a sonnet. I wish i could write more abstract stuff...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-20-0258. Paperback Rita reviewsa friend gave me the title and said do something with it. this is what i created. cant say i think much of it. pg for suicide attempt. please R R!Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,854 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-24-0259. The Bond reviewsbasically i need to create a portfolio for a uni i wanna go to, and all i write is crappy poetry - i need prose. so i've been picking random titles and writitng bout them for an hour. this was my very first attempt.pls review and suggest more titles forFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 680 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-24-0260. Catch The Ear Of God reviewsMusic is the only way to catch the ear of God...I've been listening to a lot of classical music, i feel affected, expect lots of maudlin crap on music for a good long while...:P Please review!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-27-0261. Fly reviewsreally quite bad...about running down the stairs. I really don't know WHY i'm posting this...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-8-0262. the reason for evil? reviewsnot as naff as it sounds...i'm allin favour of a bit of evil...read on and find out what i mean...please review :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-14-0263. Snow-angel reviewsabout lying down in the snow...suicide. please please r r :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-12-0264. Today reviewsabout that moment when you notice you've begun to get over your grief...this is one of the worst things i've ever written, but i must have reviews, i am a junkie! :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-12-0265. Rebirth of the Soul reviewsits not as simple as religion and self-help books would have you believe...please R RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-0266. poppies reviewsweird image that came into my head only two minutes ago, this is brand new and totally unedited...going out on limb here! review me! :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-26-0267. burning reviewsabout my weird hero-worship of tim booth, frontman for mancunian band James. i like it...is different anyways. please please R R! :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-0268. Monsoon reviewsme getting inside another personalities' head - indian poet in the monsoon season. don't ask me why...please review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-19-0269. Porphyria reviewsinspired by Browning's poem 'Porphyria's Lover'. i have taken *serious* liberties really, its sheameful. but i loved that poem so much i had to try and imitate it, and i think i've manged to create a slightly different story anyway. whatever, please plPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 506 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-10-0270. fantasy reviewsNOT a love poem - a poem of aimless desire. i am proud of this one, please read and review.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-5-0271. Desire reviewspoem about wrong desire. please review :)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-0272. never wake reviewsvague story of lost love, possible hint of suicide, but open to intereretation...therefore please please interperet! :PPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-16-0273. Mother reviewsabout the strength of motherhood, inspired (for some reason) by a statue of the Virgin Mary and child; weird, as i'm not relgious. please R R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-20-01
