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Author has written 36 stories for General. I write deep depresing poetry, my life experiences have tormnted me into the person I am now. My parental neglect, the woman I love not loving me, my suicidal tendancies from my school bullyings. All hae resorted to this;a sad, depressed, crying man with this little boy trapped within. A little child wh can not be released now that he has been payed no attention to for such a long period of time, tourmenting time. This is my world, my words expressig it...and if you dont like it, so be it. | |||||||||
1. Skaige reviewsI wrote this really fast...within 5 minutes...and I havent written in a while...enjoy, and dont bash it...General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-032. Sleep Alone" reviewsI want to be alone...yet, I fear if I do I will die.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 3-18-02 - Published: 3-18-023. The Bedroom" reviewsThe second in my new writings. Very simple if you read it. My mother came down to see what I had done to my room, I wanted praise, got nothing more than ignored. And so, pain came as always. And I melded it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 414 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-17-02 - Published: 3-17-024. Sweetness Of Lies" reviewsAs you can tell by the repeating Chourus. This is a song. I am so sick and tired of woman in general. I almost want to be alone, they all seem so stuck up and snotty and just plain mean and bitchy. But I cant say it is for ALL woman, most Ive met, are shaGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 677 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-17-02 - Published: 3-17-025. All I Want" reviewsThis is one of the songs I did recently. Might not be sad sad depression stuff, but it is to me. But you dont know my situation.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 480 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-02 - Published: 3-17-026. Your View" reviewsI'm writing again, and here is the first to the new onslaught of my minds rantings and cursesGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 386 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-02 - Published: 3-17-027. I AM" reviewsThis is what I beleive myself to be, note the fact that not once will you see, needed, worthful, great, loved, or wanted anywhere in thi poem.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 331 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-10-01 - Published: 10-10-018. UN-EQUAL FRIENDSHIP FEELINGS" reviewsI feel as if my best friend in the world sometimes doest even care if Im there, at times then I fel like Im the most important person to her. Its all so damn confusing why she treats me so at times...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-10-01 - Published: 10-10-019. FORGOTTEN PATH, UNWILLINGLY ENLIGHTENED" reviewsI thought I had my life going in a direction, maybe not the rght one but A direction. I was to get over my love and live in sadness until I could cope with it, now she has said there may, only MAY be something more there, now, do I stay, or do I continueGeneral - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-10-01 - Published: 10-10-0110. DISTANT" reviewsOnce again the misfortunes of leaving a little boy scared and aloneGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-2-01 - Published: 10-2-0111. SOUL RELEASING" reviewsJust R and R if you read it please, its pretty nice one.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-2-01 - Published: 10-2-0112. STRESS" reviewsI jut typed this out and kept going till I thought I put all my stress on paper a very free form and expression of my inner most self.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 462 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-2-01 - Published: 10-2-0113. SWEET RELEASE" reviewsLet me be who I am....Let me just express myself he way I want..let me be!General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-2-01 - Published: 10-2-0114. WILL" reviewsAll the things I shall leave behind, either with my new life beginning, or my old life ending..General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,377 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-2-01 - Published: 10-2-0115. RESURECTION" reviewsLooking for somene to bring my soul back to life...its a bit old, dont remember much about it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-30-01 - Published: 9-30-0116. UN-NEEDED SOULS CAN FADE" reviewsMy love's one special person returned in her life and left me feelng worthless as I still do, the love she expresses for me is shadowed by that of for her angel, by the way, ashiteru means "I love you" in japanese, why couldnt I be her..angelGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-30-01 - Published: 9-30-0117. INVISIBLE GRAVE" reviewsRead it and find out what its about. Please review if you read it.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 666 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0118. THE CURSE" reviewsMost young teenage men, who are the oldet child in the fmily should relate.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 661 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0119. KNOWING MYSELF" reviewsLoosing ho you thought yu were, and now not knowing and knowig you will never know who you truly are r could be. R&RGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 374 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0120. NEW-OLD LIFE" reviewsThe life I keep returning t, because nothing ever goes as I want it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0121. DREAMSF THE SIGHTFUL" reviewsRea, I hate having to write summaries for every thing, no summary can exemplify the amount of emotion as doesthe actual peice itself.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 412 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0122. DISCERNING" reviewsRead it, review it, and see for yourself.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0123. ALWAYS KNOW" reviewsRead it and review it, I dont have the time this any more.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0124. CHERRISHED PAST" reviewsMy pride poem, it will be publshed in poetry.com's upcoming book "Under A Quicksilver Moon", see what happens when yo pick on those you dont need to, I still hate all you preppies out there for making me who I am toay.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0125. DEAD SOUL...WATCHING FLESH" reviewsRead it and find out, ont bother trying to see what the spoem holdsby reading this, btw, this is one of my favoites.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0126. THE VIEW THROUGH ONES SOUL" reviewsR&R please, just read and find out he content for yourselfGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0127. ONE SOUL TO SAVE ME"one of myolder ones I found, dont reember it myself, give it a goGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0128. DESLOVING BLOSSOMS" reviewsJust see for yourself, I grow sick of thes stupid summary's for poemsGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0129. FINAL DREAM" reviewsMy final dream...read htis youll see, my last obtainable dram is whatput me here...in the darknessGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0130. QUESTIONING UNTOLD HEART" reviewsRead it and be nice to review it as well, thank you.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0131. THE LITTLE BOY BURIED DEEP WITHIN" reviewsThis is my self, within me that sad little boy who so long ago lost his chance for a fullfilled ife...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 510 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0132. ONLY MEANINGFUL DESIRE" reviewsThe only thing I live for, and yet I probably will never have...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 396 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0133. REASONS OF SUFFER" reviewsObvious isnt it, why the heck Im the way I am,General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0134. THE GIFT OF FRIENDSHIP" reviewsEh...old old peic o crap here, yes, crap.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0135. KEY TO HAPPINESS" reviewsAnoter oldy, liked this one a while back...*shrugs* take a lookGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-0136. LONLINESS" reviewsMy feelings insideGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-01 - Published: 9-2-01