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since: 11-04-01, id: 121881, Profile Updated: 10-01-08
country: United Kingdom
Author has written 68 stories for Fantasy, Love, Religion, Life, General, Friendship, Haiku, School, Biography, Family, Nature, General, and Humor.

"Singing with our fate we cry, cry for death, but good win out in glory in the end."
Aeschylus, Agamemnon

I'm currently studying English Lit, History and Creative Writing at university in England, and witing for the day I can write something of real worth... of which I despair as the days go by! However, I give you my feeble attempts, and maybe, someday I will get there... so any critcism would be greatly appreciated- as long as it is constructive, of course!

The most important thing I have learnt about good writing? it comes not from a spontaneous overflow of emotion, but from careful thought. Even the Romantics, famous for their spontaneious poetry, drafted their work. As a matter of fact, Wordworth's 'I wandered lonely as a cloud' was based on a diary entry by his siter, Dorothy Wordsworth.

Could I revive within me
Her symphony and song,
To such a deep delight 'twould win me,

That with music loud and long,
I would build that dome in air,
That sunny dome ! those caves of ice !
And all who heard should see them there,
And all should cry, Beware ! Beware !
His flashing eyes, his floating hair !
Weave a circle round him thrice,
And close your eyes with holy dread,
For he on honey-dew hath fed,
And drunk the milk of Paradise.

'Kubla Khan', Samuel Taylor Colerigde

“In the room the women come and go

Talking of Michelangelo.”

T.S. Eliot, 'The Love Song of Alfred J. Prufrock'

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1. Reality's Dreams » reviews
Kathryn must discover her origins in order to survive in a strange new world, filled with magic and necromancy.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,162 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-3-09 - Published: 4-27-09
2. Requiem for a Nightmare reviews
A dark little piece, which didn't really seem to fit into any category.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-25-08 - Published: 8-25-08
3. Poppies in the WheatField
A thought upon seeing poppies growing in a wheat field, and the symbolism attached to them.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-08
4. Treetops reviews
A view on life for those not so lucky
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-15-08 - Published: 6-15-08
5. Flowers
Abroad thoughts from Home yes, that is a reversal of Browning's title!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-29-08 - Published: 5-29-08
6. Gravestones reviews
A reflection on a mother's gravestone
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-29-08 - Published: 5-29-08
7. Unspoken Arguments
friendships can be silently destroyed.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-13-08 - Published: 5-13-08
8. Cobblestones
A short character study.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-7-08 - Published: 5-7-08
9. Shamal
A piece abot moving on. A shamal is an arabia windstorm, if anyone is interested.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-27-08 - Published: 3-27-08
10. Secrets
A puppy can be the cause of matrimonial breakdown. A short piece I had to write for a creative writing course, based on an overheard conversation
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 915 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-6-08 - Published: 3-6-08
11. Experience
A passing thought on changes in the world
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-19-08 - Published: 2-19-08
12. Death Is reviews
A piece on my own memories of death... perhaps 'Life' is not the best section for this, but all life must end in death...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-21-08 - Published: 1-21-08
13. A Maiden Deep in Death reviews
An attempt to echo the style of the early Romantics, in particular, Coleridge. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-21-08 - Published: 1-21-08
14. Celestial Love reviews
A life lifted to the skies
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-13-07 - Published: 12-13-07
15. A Fighting Chance reviews
Thoughts on a life if everything had gone according to plan all those years ago.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-2-07 - Published: 12-2-07
16. Searching for my Home reviews
Slightly dark, perhaps, but love nonetheless... closer than I have have ever been to anyone.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-26-07 - Published: 11-26-07
17. A desert redeveloped reviews
A poem based around the Grand Mosque in Bahrain. Another of my pieces for a course, I have tried to stick closely to a rhyme scheme and meter
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-13-07 - Published: 11-13-07
18. Sonnet for Language reviews
My experiment with the Sonnet form the rhyme scheme is a little odd, nearer the early English than the Spenserian or Petrachan. And the subject is prehaps a little unconventional... but a love after a form!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-07 - Published: 10-30-07
19. Childhood Memories reviews
A memory of memories, and waiting for all the memories yet to be made
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-28-07 - Published: 10-28-07
20. Pandemonium at the BBC reviews
A humourous piece I wrote for a creative writing course. An unlikely day at the BBC studios it's rather fantastical, so don't say I didn't warn you...
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,035 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-07 - Published: 10-28-07
21. To be loved reviews
Love chases away all darkness
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-28-07 - Published: 10-28-07
22. A Monologue of Generations reviews
The observance of a French village from one who has stood there for centuries, watching lives made, and then destroyed by war. The tree in the square. Strange subject, but it is an assignment please tell me what you think?
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,000 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-17-07 - Published: 10-17-07
23. A new life » reviews
How can a Princess survive when a coup destroys the life she has always known?
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,814 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-07 - Published: 9-20-07
24. Sunshine Within reviews
You gave me a reason to shine
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-19-07 - Published: 9-19-07
25. Never Mine reviews
So much in this world, but what do I have?
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-07 - Published: 9-18-07
26. Trees in Autumn reviews
A simple little poem, showing the world in change
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-07 - Published: 9-18-07
27. Stars in the Sky reviews
The stars in the sky are not enough to match you.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-14-07 - Published: 9-14-07
28. Darkness Banished reviews
Love can take away all fears
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-31-07 - Published: 8-31-07
29. Falling in Secret reviews
The strong are only those who have never had anyone to hold them up.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-9-07 - Published: 7-9-07
30. Wait for it reviews
The wait to obtain love
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-22-07 - Published: 6-22-07
31. On my Knees reviews
To be forced down is not to suppressed.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-11-07 - Published: 5-11-07
32. On Breaking Ice reviews
Written for my Dad, who has been ill.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-07
33. Dollhouse Harem reviews
Why is beauty valued above all else?
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
34. One of the Crowd reviews
Realising that you can be so much more than what everyone thinks of you...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
35. The Watchers reviews
An eerie little piece.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-28-07 - Published: 3-28-07
36. All Alone reviews
Once more, the one left alone
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-07
37. Existence reviews
Has anyone found the meaning of life yet?
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-07
38. To Die on Calvary reviews
Why can two people not agree in their love?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-2-07 - Published: 3-2-07
39. The School that Banned Fruit reviews
Yes, I know it sounds wierd but my school has actually done it!
Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-27-07 - Published: 2-27-07
40. Blindness reviews
Is blind love a good thing?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-16-07 - Published: 1-16-07
41. Response to 'Love's Apparition and Evanishment' reviews
A Response to Samuel Taylor Coleridge's poem. Unfulfilled love.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-13-06 - Published: 12-13-06
42. Butterflies from heaven reviews
This is an autobiography, not a biiography, but I didn't know where to put it. Anyway, it's a reflection on the day of my mother's death, when I was seven.
Biography - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,035 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-10-06 - Published: 4-10-06
43. Can you see me? reviews
Am I invisible to the world, or just ignored?
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-7-06 - Published: 4-7-06
44. Sir, i've got the wrong suitcase! reviews
Written during a philosophy exam, based on my teacher's method of 'unpacking' exam answers.
School - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-15-06 - Published: 3-15-06
45. Flowers of Love and truth reviews
Human emotions in a natrual environment
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
46. White lies reviews
Rather you lie than hurt me...
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-7-06 - Published: 2-7-06
47. Fallen Castles reviews
Castles in the sky...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-1-06 - Published: 2-1-06
48. Destiny reviews
What is destined?
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 1-26-06
49. Left out reviews
Why is it always me?
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 1-26-06
50. Where is the Kindness in this World? reviews
Pretty self expanatory...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 1-26-06
51. The Palm Trees reviews
Quite depressing... Anyone who has seen the killing of palm trees with salt water will know exactly what I mean
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-6-06 - Published: 1-6-06
52. Louder than Words reviews
How can you tell what they mean?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 11-27-05
53. Confusion reviews
The confusion in love...
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-26-05 - Published: 11-26-05
54. Priam's City reviews
Based on the fall of Troy
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-05
55. Beloved of the world reviews
I was a bit down when I wrote this, but maybe there is some value in it.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-23-05 - Published: 11-23-05
56. Thank you reviews
Just something I wrote for a friend who helped me more than they will ever know
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-23-05 - Published: 11-23-05
57. I think of you reviews
Thoughts of a lonely love
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-23-05 - Published: 10-23-05
58. How can I live without you? reviews
Hopelessly and madly in love?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-23-05 - Published: 10-23-05
59. Just imagaine reviews
If only love were perfent, and he saw me like that
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-23-05 - Published: 10-23-05
60. Body, Mind, Soul reviews
What plagues us all? Does it even have a name?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-17-05 - Published: 10-17-05
61. Parting Sorrows reviews
Can I leave? Or can you?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-17-05 - Published: 10-17-05
62. Do you Love me? reviews
Questions that need to be answered
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-17-05 - Published: 10-17-05
63. The Battleground reviews
What are we fighting?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-17-05 - Published: 10-17-05
64. A different World » reviews
When a girl has two lives, which one is the one she will spend the rest of her life in? And who can she trust when her morals are upset? FINISHED
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 20,299 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 10-16-05 - Published: 4-24-05
65. I will not give up reviews
I'm not quite sure why I wrote this, but it must have had a reason
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-11-05 - Published: 5-11-05
66. Souls reviews
Just something that came to me... i'm still trying to figure it out
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-11-05 - Published: 5-11-05
67. An Outer Shell reviews
When a witch is burnt at the hands of her tormentors, what are her last meditations?
Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-11-05 - Published: 5-11-05
68. Is this Love? reviews
What is love? Why do we feel it?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-11-05 - Published: 5-11-05
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