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Author has written 104 stories for General, General, Love, Life, Essay, Fantasy, War, Action, Humor, and Friendship. Just to start off, for those who do not like the way I review (which is probably why you ran to my bio), tough. If something is wrong with your piece, I will not hesitate to point out exactly what it is. If something is VERY right with it, I will commend you on that. Usually, I offer a Bad/Good side to reviews. Unless the piece is downright bad. But you WILL NOT be criticized negatively without at least a semi-intelligent argument with examples from the piece. If I have nothing nice to say without something in the piece to back me up (IOW: I just don't like it), I won't say anything positive or negative, just that that writer should keep writing. And when it comes to reviews, I really do expect my readers to do the same. It's just intelligent, as well as common, courtesy. If, however, you have an intelligent argument to something I have written, whether it be a review or a piece, where I screwed up, or you just have a good rebuttal, by all means, let me have it. My e-mail address is *points upscreen* right there. But do not write me if you have either A) Have nothing good to say except pointless comments that I do not care about ("ur meen" or "u SUCK"), or B) Use internet lingo for an entire conversation (LOL and LMAO I can deal with, though). By the by, if you really think I'm that bad of a reviewer, there is this cute little button on just about every page of this wonderful site that allows you to Report Possible Abuse. I will never claim to be a nice guy. And while we're at it New Paragraph! Let's take a couple examples of some real reviews, shall we? BAD Review for a bad piece of writing (written by some moron): "Ur poem (o story) SuCkS! You should never neve rite again as lng as u live!!! U $UCK!" GOOD Review for a bad piece of writing: "Your piece was cliched ("like a bull in Mom's china shop came your anger"), full of horrible similes ("like my cat sleeping" ...That's it?) and even more horrible grammatical errors ("I hasd found the light, and I break the day"), and contained imagery that only appealed to one of the five senses, ignoring all others for the sake of... well, honestly, I don't know. Other than that, the content itself of your poem (or story, you get my drift) was all right, but getting to that message was like pulling mineral water from underneath oil. One gets the clarity of your message, but one also has to sift through the muck of both your syntax and your diction that leave much to be desired. The next time you write, do fp.com, and your readers, a favor and get your pieces proofread first before you post them. Your writing will shine through wonderfully if, and when, you do." If you honestly cannot see a difference between these two types of reviews, you probably write the former on a regular basis, and this world has no use for you, except maybe to laugh at. Now, as I like to do in my reviews, enough with the bad, On With The GOOD!!! To my readers: Thank you, THANK you, THANK YOU to each and every one of you who review my works. You guys are great, you really are. Reviews are like Christmas at any time of the year, and other fp.com writers know exactly what I am talking about. They're even better when they're constructive criticism, because it shows the writer how to better himself (herself, if that's your case). Anyways, here goes nothing: I'm back again redoing my bio Just felt it was time for a change From the old To the new So here it is I am currently a freshman at Texas A&M University. On paper, it looks like I've done some great things with my life. In reality, I have merely been at the right place with the right people at the right time for the past nineteen years or so, and I have had a lot of great opportunities. This year I will be extremely busy with both the Corps Of Cadets and, well, just school in general, so if I do not update for a while, I'm still here. I just have more important things to worry about now, like a degree. Writing is just going to have to take the back burner for a while. Nevertheless, "I shall return." Now, onto the pieces themselves. Some are good (in other's opinions, not my own), some are bad (in my opinion alone), and some, well, should never see the light of day (but I like to archive everything that I write). You have been warned. One last thing, just remember: Life is REALLY GOOD STUFF!!! You only get one. Don't waste it. | |||||||||
1. A Valentine Renewal reviewsThat's it. I'm done for. I've fallen into the cycle of writing sappy love poems every Valentine's Day. They do get better and better each year, though.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-10-04 - Published: 3-10-042. Warmth Of Faith reviewsArguments between friends without a hint of hate or scornFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-26-04 - Published: 2-26-043. Push reviewsWritten for an amazing friend whose sickness is gripping her tight and not letting go. The only way she can survive is to just PushLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-19-03 - Published: 11-19-034. From Warfront to Homefront reviewsA story of a child's mind, and the laps it makes around reality, after he comes to a realization no child ever shouldWar - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 289 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-19-03 - Published: 11-19-035. A Glimpse of the MorrowLove and passion and power in its truest formLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-19-03 - Published: 11-19-036. Halo reviewsWritten after a night of passion without a hint of physical contactLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-19-03 - Published: 11-19-037. One reviewsLove without all the happy frills and fantasiesLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-12-03 - Published: 11-12-038. Think and You Shall Know reviewsThe fantasy of a loveLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-12-03 - Published: 11-12-039. Marine Corps War reviewsWritten after watching three recruiting videos in a row about the Corps in my Military Ethics class. One stanza = One movie.War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-12-03 - Published: 11-12-0310. Eternity reviewsAn eternity of torment for a life of giving that very torment to others. I experimented with a few styles of poetry to get this one. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0311. Name reviewsA man aboard a train. A woman he has known only in his dreams. A celestial goodbye. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0312. Making Peace With Midnight reviewsWritten for a friend, late at night, when I should have been asleep. The Muse, however, refused my relief. Good Stuff. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0313. Don't reviewsA betrayed love. A bitter ex. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0314. Loving Her reviewsVery basic love poem. Done reading ti? Now just read the dashed lines. Fun, wasn't it? Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0315. When The Sun Rises Up I Will Wish We Had Waited reviewsPiece I wrote for an Abstinene Arts Contest, borrowing the opening stanza of "Making Peace With Midnight". Of course, I don't practice what this preaches, but hey, the piece was there.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0316. Dawn reviewsBeauty and Hope and Nothing at all.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0317. lightscarletdark reviewsHunted in a forest, a man faces his Death at last. Read. Review. You know you want to.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0318. What HappensA man is lost for words when his eyes are cast upon her.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0319. Nothing reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0320. Love Me reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0321. Night StrikeWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0322. Short on Life Short on TimeWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0323. Lives Intertwining reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with tLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0324. Gladiator reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with tWar - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0325. Driver DownWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0326. I Just Don't KnowWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0327. FallWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with tLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0328. Bouncy reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0329. Free NightWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0330. Fight reviewsWritten in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0331. C reviewsSomething a friend of mine and I wrote for a writing assignment one day. We got very bored very quickly. My writing teacher was not the brightest bulb in the box, though. We got a 100. I don't know why.Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0332. Lost and Found reviewsA boy lost among this world wanders aimlessly, hoping to find what already seeks him. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0333. Up and Rise the Morning Star reviewsWritten one morning for an amazing friend who was very sick. She asked me to write her something to wake up to. So. I did. Read/Review. You know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0334. Thinking Too Hard reviewsSomething I just wrote to write. No, there are no typos. Everything done in the piece is done so on purpose. Read/Review. You know you want to.Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0335. Lucifer on Life and Love reviewsA fallen angel watches over humanities last days. Read/Review. You know you want to.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0336. The First Time I Ever Said I Love You reviewsThe title speaks for itself. Written just after the first time I told HerLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0337. Innocence Lost reviewsWhat if someone you did not know harmed someone you loved dearly? What if you could find that person? What if you did know that person? Would you still pull the trigger? Read. Review. You know you want to.Action - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,726 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0338. From One Man To Another reviewsJust after a rape, in the interregation room. For Mature audiences only. R/R Please.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0339. Gangs and Drug Money reviewsSee Title. About gangs that destroy lives, all for money, drugs, and power. Power, above all. R/R Please.War - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0340. Lost Get There reviewsThe strong yet fine line between love and hate. Get. Lost. Now. R/R Please.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0341. Moments of ZenSee Title. About everything and nothing all at once. Great for Zen. R/R Please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0342. Bittersweet: A Forever Ago reviewsA man finds his lover at last, at the grave.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0343. Awakening of the Guardian of the Nexus reviewsCyanotok Rayshore discovers that he is the key in a race against time and the Aesaic to save a race from genocide and a world from destructionFantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,030 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-03 - Published: 7-22-0344. Hope of a Glove of a Memory reviewsPoetry that is (Broken) filled with noiseLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0345. The Embrace of a Dream reviews"In your satin sauna of sin/And lust"Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0346. You reviewsYou are but the shadow that dark invades my lightLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0347. Guardian II: In Another's Dream reviewsA VERY rough draft of a piece of a long work of fictionFantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,678 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0348. Why do we think? reviewsPhilosophy of beauty and the aestheticEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 419 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0349. Lie To Me reviewsRating for suggestive langauge. Lie to me as if the truth would shatter our world.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0350. Through LuciferaWritten for the ex. Shockwaves of hateLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0351. Evanescence reviewsDrop now/Remember the nights we used to dream/And fly from here and now among the starsLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0352. LiberationOne woman who will not take the beatings anymore. Many variations of this theme present.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0353. Some reviewsSome believe this; some believe that.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0354. None Left To CryA song of love and flight that lives on.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0355. Just Be reviewsMy Everything within you/Take me awayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0356. I Only Wish reviewsOne man who wishes to return to childhood daysLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0357. Heal reviewsThe burn of love after the heat of passionLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0358. Come Into MeAm I alive to you? Love throught the skies. Read and Review.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-1-03 - Published: 4-1-0359. AwayMeant to be a song if I can ever write the music. Sappy, lovey-dovey. Read and review anyway.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0360. 0237Title comes from the time in which I wrote this poem about not being able to write a poem. Review the irony, if you will.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0361. Tired reviewsTired of life and all of its insanity. Some rhyme. All rhythm. Quick flow. Read and review.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0362. LingersA kiss that lingers upon me like summers days and winter nightsLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0363. Down reviews"Down in the world/(far past)" Short, quick, makes you think. You can read it before you blink. Review. See bio. Read more. Thank you.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0364. Go reviewsRating for one word. One of my better. Pain and shards of a broken heart. Short/Sweet/To the point. Read bio for more. Review, if you would be so kind.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-24-03 - Published: 3-24-0365. What If?Satiric pairing with "What If A Much Of A Which Of The Wind" by EE Cummings. Questions life in general in eight short lines. Read my bio and find some more poetry. Review!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-24-03 - Published: 3-24-0366. A Thought Has Occurred To MeRandom thoughts about life itself. Not quite Poetry, but read my bio for some more. Review if you make it to the end of this.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 938 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-24-03 - Published: 3-24-0367. Sabrina's ValentineWritten exactly one year after my last Valentine (gee, I wonder why). This one's my best V-Day, though. Read. Review. You know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-19-03 - Published: 3-19-0368. I Hate RunningExactly that. I hate the run; I love the run. Read on.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-19-03 - Published: 3-19-0369. Insanity reviewsThe voices in my head are callingcalling sanity in this time is fallingfallingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-19-03 - Published: 3-19-0370. Flight Of An Angel reviewsFrom suicide to flight, one angel's callLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-19-03 - Published: 3-19-0371. Death, can you Feel it?Can you feel the Death within the air?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-14-03 - Published: 3-14-0372. Stalker reviewsA stalker in the mi[d]st of her lifeLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-14-03 - Published: 3-14-0373. Line Live Love reviewsPerfection of loveLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-14-03 - Published: 3-14-0374. AeRonok's Fall reviewsAngel vs. Demon. From immortality to death, two creatures struggle with themselves and their creators. Read and Review.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-30-02 - Published: 11-30-0275. Because Of You reviewsAnother gift from Krystal to me. I took this one a step furthur, though. and responded to it with a parallel of my own. I still think her's was better, but it's always up to the audience to decide, right? R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-7-02 - Published: 8-7-0276. Hopeless Romantic reviewsAnother one I've found who I'm not quite sure who I wrote it for. Strange that I wrote it, since I usually abhor this style of poetry... Oh well. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-6-02 - Published: 8-6-0277. Right All Along reviewsAnother one of my Battles With Fate. I don't know, this is starting to become a motif with my poetry. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-6-02 - Published: 8-6-0278. Illusion"That this life is an illusion yet these writings eternal is what we try to hold on to escape the infernal" R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0279. For the wayWritten for who, I don't remember, but a nice little love poem nonetheless. "For the way your scent catches my breath in the wind" R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0280. Lights reviewsVery quick poem. Does nothing but flow. No sense to it, but a quick read anyways. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0281. Notes: March 4th, 2002Falls under Notes (read bio). Written during my Confirmation retreat; it's strange looking back at it now, but it still makes sense to me. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Parody/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0282. Notes: Febraury 8th, 2002Falls under Notes (read bio). Written while Death would not be kind enough to take me, or so I thought at the time. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0283. The Sky Moves 'RoundHow Death comes to claim yet another life. R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-5-02 - Published: 8-5-0284. WeaponsBetween bullets and lighting bolts. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-29-02 - Published: 6-29-0285. Burn reviewsWhat happens to the soul after suicide. Not in-depth or complete, just sporadic images. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-29-02 - Published: 6-29-0286. Notes: May 8th, 2002 reviewsWritten after getting burned by a girl I loved, and who I thought loved me. More Notes (read bio) on life.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-29-02 - Published: 6-29-0287. Notes: January 10th, 2002The first in my Notes (read bio) installment, though far from my last. It's not really suppossed to be poetry, but I guess with the way it's organized... Well, read and review for yourself, dear reader.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-29-02 - Published: 6-29-0288. Friendship Is A TwoWay Street reviewsWhat I consider as one of my best. How a dusty road becomes more valuable as a power through friendship is unleashed through the beauty of this road. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0289. Hidden Dreams reviewsA story of good and evil, of a girl whose capture turns a boy's world upside down (literally) and makes the very sun threaten to extinguish if she is not found, of an angel who travels through worlds he has never seen, and will never see again. R & R.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0290. Never Fear The Afterglow reviewsHow a kiss in the middle of a storm can change your mind about the afterglow... Thanks again, Krystal. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0291. You Are My Muse reviewsDedicated to Krystal who was a great muse for many of my poems, including this one, so of course this one's dedicated to her! Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0292. Heavenly Smile reviewsOne man's trip above and below just because of the smile of a woman. Dedicated to Krystal. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0293. By Moonlight I Wait reviewsBy moonlight I wait for dreams to come true. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-02 - Published: 6-27-0294. The Rhythm reviewsSomething that just came to me in about three minutes. Hope you like it! Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-02 - Published: 3-16-0295. Reflections reviewsFalls under Poetry, if only because of the imagery (read bio). Anti-suicide poem I wrote on a whim (actually, that's how I write everything). Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-9-02 - Published: 3-9-0296. A sonnet: Will you be my Valentine? reviewsI wrote this for my (now ex) girlfriend for Valentine's 2002. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-6-02 - Published: 3-6-0297. Ramblings reviewsFirst to fall under Ramblings (read bio) for obvious reasons. This is what happens when inspiration strikes and the pen dares not stop. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-6-02 - Published: 3-6-0298. The pen reviewsThe power of the written word. Read/Review. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-20-02 - Published: 1-20-0299. Time: The Enemy reviewsThe enemy that we can never beat. Read/Review. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-20-02 - Published: 1-20-02100. Blind reviewsActually written before 9/11, just a reminder that prejudice shouldn't control our lives. Read/Review. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-28-01 - Published: 12-28-01101. The night reviewsReal short. Something written on a cloudy night and in a cloudy mood. Read/Review. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-28-01 - Published: 12-28-01102. Time reviewsA nice little perception of time. I realize every author and his cousin has done SOMETHING on time, but... whatever. Read/Review. You know you want to.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-28-01 - Published: 12-28-01
