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Author has written 37 stories for General. Well, what is there to say about me? I'm a mentally abused reject who has basically no family left, and I write poetry to express my feelings, make observations, and send a message. I've been writing for several years and have participated in several contests. I don't have much of a social life outside of school. In school I get ok grades and I am a total beatnik. I'm usually not a total bitch unless provoked. I am severely depressed, suicidal, and a cutter. Please tell me what you think about my work, but don't be too harsh. I don't know if I could take it. | |||||||||
1. Ode to My Girl reviewsThis poem is dedicated to my dog, Vita, who died last thursday. She was one of my best friends.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-012. I.n.d.i.v.i.d.u.a.l.i.t.y reviewsWritten from my viewpoint (as usual), but kind of about me. The inside me, I mean.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-013. Pay the Price reviewsDunno. I hate summaries. Read it and tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-014. Hiding reviewsViews on the world.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-015. Tell Me reviewsMore views on the world.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-016. Look Around reviewsAnd yet even more views on the world. :)General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-017. Dreamworld reviewsPhilosophical, Metaphorical. You know, the usual.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-018. Forgotten, But Not Gone reviewsOne of the first poems I wrote. Like them all, it's how I feel.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-019. Living Nightmare reviewsAbout the fourth poem I ever wrote, but this was the one that mainly got me started in writing.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-0110. We The People reviewsHow many "world views" poems have I done? Anyway, here's another.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-01 - Published: 12-10-0111. Denial reviewsI had to write this for an english assignment, but I still like it. It describes how I see myself.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0112. Gone:: reviewsAnother one about how I feel.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0113. Could You? reviewsA general question......General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0114. Fading reviewsFading away.....General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0115. This is How You Make Me Feel reviewsWritten to my mom, "This is how you make me feel."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0116. You Say You Love Me..... reviewsThe title plays an important part, but I couldn't incorperate it into the poem.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-4-01 - Published: 12-4-0117. Backwards reviewsComplete contradictory poem.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0118. The Fire Within reviewsDon't really know what to say about it, except, read it.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0119. Chaos reviewsThe name says it all, but it's one of my better pieces of work.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0120. Hypocritical reviewsA bit of my personality and observation mixed together.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0121. Rosebud Weed reviewsHard to explain; read it and find out.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0122. He Never Knew reviewsA poem written to a guy I was in love with, that never noticed me.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0123. Silence reviewsA poem I wrote to explain how I feel. One of many.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0124. Broken reviewsAnother one about how I feel.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0125. My Story reviewsYes, if you are wondering, this is a true story. It happened January 5 of this year. It's been almost a year, but the experience is still fresh in my mind.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 419 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0126. Ter'ah'nee reviewsThis is a poem based on a mixture of the third Myst book and the Myst game.....General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0127. Standing There reviewsJust a poem about a feeling I had. Hard to explain, but read it anyway.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0128. Storm reviewsPoem about weather. Rainstorms, particularly.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0129. Death Draws Near reviewsPoem about death.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0130. Fake reviewsYet another one about how I feel.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0131. Shame reviewsA poem written to my mom telling her how I feel. One of many.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0132. You Don't Know reviewsDo I have to keep explaining?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0133. Summer's Breeze reviewsRead it and find out......General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0134. You'll Never See reviewsHow people see me.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0135. Whisper reviews"Speak the language of the trees, and hear the secrets they relieve......."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0136. Relief reviewsThis is about my cutting and self-injury, so I think you should be a little older to read it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-0137. The Depths reviewsKind of hard to explain, more of a philosophical story than anything.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-01 - Published: 12-1-01
