UnShure Dreamer
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since: 07-20-00, id: 14076
Author has written 33 stories for General, General, Life, Love, Friendship, Young Adult, Romance, and Humor.
Name: Jackie
Country: U.S.
Age: 18

Ok Im getting kind of bored with that so i'll just write more like this. How many people actually read these bios anyway? I mean, if you are reading this, do you actually care what my hair color is?(Blonde) Or what my favorite movies are? (Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Garden State, Finding Neverland, Big Fish,Chocolat, Moulin Rouge...) Or even what bands i like? (Matchbox Twenty, Five For Fighting, Ben Folds Five, Coldplay,Audioslave, Hanson, Goo Goo Dolls, Beatles, Elton John, Nelly Furtado...) Ah well if you dont, you just read all of that anyway and got to learn a little bit about an 18 year old girl you'll probably never meet.

So I've really gotten into this poetry writting lately and i'd love it if you read and reviewed any of my poems! But the poems i personally like a lot, that mean a lot to me, which i would really like more reviews for are:

The Things I Will Miss
There is Nothing You Can Do
Can You See?
The Upside Down Flower (Version 2)
The Fly on my Window
So Many
Wasting Your Life Away

So please read and review at least one of those, because id love it and id go to your page and read and review yours! :D
Well thats all i have to say! Bye!


1. Good Old Hiccups reviews
Don't you just love hiccups? Please read and review!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-26-05
2. The Unattainable Puppet Mistress reviews
One person tends to gain control in a relationship, some people more than others. Possibly a contemporary peice of fiction. Please read and review it! My first try writing something like this!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 832 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-8-04
3. Run Away reviews
Why it is so difficult to stay in one place, to never change. Please Read and Review, I wrote it quite a while ago and only now decided to post it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-3-04
4. Our Own Little Worlds reviews
Kayla is a girl who has no way to deal with her pain or stress anymore. It seems as though she has been pushed to the limit when suddenly she finds herself in a car crash that lands her in a new world. How will she escape, or will she even want to? Plea
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,281 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-22-04
5. When You Remain the Same reviews
If you want change, you have to help make something change, you cant just expect others to do it for you. Please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-10-04
6. For Happiness reviews
How many people do you have to hurt for your happiness?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-10-04
7. I Want to be the World's Super Hero reviews
About wanting to rid the world of its problems...it seems impossible though...please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-19-04
8. A Tale of an Empty and Hollow Tree reviews
How an empty and hollow tree came to be... sometimes you have to realize its time to let go of something or someone... please read and review it...im proud of this one :!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-8-04
9. Stranded on a Lake reviews
Feeling like you are lost in darkness and dont believe you can make it to the light. Please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-04
10. Fiendish Friend reviews
About the kinds of people who think they are great because they are brutally honest to everyone they know... thats not always the best thing for some people. Please read and review!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-7-04
11. The Makeup of One's Mind reviews
What is painted on a person's face...its difficult to explain, please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-30-04
12. A Change of Me reviews
This is a really dark peice for me...i usually don't write things like this. But please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-29-04
13. I Used to Think I'd Miss You reviews
Getting over missing someone from a relationship that used to be...please read and review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-23-04
14. When You Say You Wish to Die reviews
About friends who think about suicide and how it can affect others...please read and review
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-11-04
15. The Things I Will Miss reviews
The things you think about at the end of a relationship...everything you realize youll miss. Please read and review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-10-04
16. The Disease Known as Sorrow reviews
Its about how sorrow seems to pass along from friend to friend. Pretty short.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-20-04
17. Never Good Enough reviews
About those moments when you feel like you cant do much of anything. Kind of depressing but id still love it if you read it and reviewed!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-20-04
18. There is Nothing You Can Do reviews
This is for friends who stick by your side in your worst times and you cant quite understand why.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-20-04
19. Invisible Shoes reviews
The invisible shoes came from dreams that i had i thought they were great images. This is my interpretation of the dreams. R/R! Please? :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-19-04
20. The Painting on the Wall reviews
This kind of relates to an ex boyfriend of mine-bad break up, that kind of thing. But the image of the painting on the wall came from a dream. Please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 376 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-19-04
21. Can You See? reviews
I'm not sure i like the title for this...but i like how the poem flows. Its about how people (teens especially) go through mostly the same stuff...but its still just as hard. Please read and review! I love hearing from you guys!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-10-04
22. The Upside Down Flower Version 2 reviews
I added some stuff to my original Upside Down Flower, I really like the first one because of how it flows, but this one makes more sense and adds more to it. Please read and review! Id love it!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-27-04
23. Upside Down Flower reviews
Please read and review! Its short and I like this one :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-26-04
24. Fate Worse Than Death
About people stating opions about other people pretty much, people making others miserable...please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 3-26-04
25. Alone reviews
Confusion and aloneness...Please read and review! I'd love it!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-26-04
26. Barely Alive reviews
Poem about feeling barely alive...pretty short so please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-25-04
27. The Fly on My Window reviews
I wrote this on a trip to Ohio. Its about a fly...that was on my window...so i wrote a story about that fly. Its deep...ish hehe. not too hard to understand. Yup. Eh just read it please? That would be great! Oh and a review would be nice too! :0D
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-30-03
28. I Wish I Can Make Things Right reviews
Please read and review! Its just about a little situation thats been going on with me lately thats caused me to get in to writing poetry. Thanks for reading if you do!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-22-03
29. I Should Just Back Away reviews
Um id be sooo happy if someone read and reviewed this! Just something i wrote at like 2 in the morning. Thanks if you do read it! Id love to know what you think!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-22-03
30. Pain reviews
Just something i wrote at like 2 in the morning...please read and review! That would be awesome! Thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-22-03
31. So Many reviews
A poem about all the people in this world...i dunno im bad at summarys so please read my poem and review! I would greatly appriciate it! This is the first thing ive written in awhile.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-20-02
32. My Depression Narrative for 8th grade reviews
It is a depression narrative (in 1929 and so on) that i had to do for school it starts off in the year 2050- please R/r! thanx!
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,877 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-27-02
33. Wasting your life away. reviews
Too many people spend life crying and feeling sorry for themselves... this poem is about that please r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-14-01