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| Neshomeh |
Author has written 10 stories for Fantasy, Essay, Sci-Fi, and General. Hello, FictionPress. I'm Neshomeh, and I write stuff. Currently my focus is college, so there won't be much action here, but please take a look at what I have. Some of it is older stuff, but I'd greatly appreciate it if you would take the time to leave a detailed critical review on one of my newer pieces. If you know actual schools of literary theory (New Criticism, Deconstruction, whatever), feel free to use them--I'd love to know what you find, if anything. Thanks! Until later, ~Neshomeh | |||||||||||
1. In Defense of Tea reviewsA beginner's guide to tea and tea-drinking for the average American. Originally published in a student literary magazine at my college.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,003 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-19-09 - Published: 6-19-092. Mother's BloodEpigraph: What fairy-like music steals over the sea, / Entrancing our senses with charmed melody? --Mrs. C. B. Wilson, "What Fairy-like Music." Note: Follows from "Fugitive."Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,197 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-31-09 - Published: 3-31-093. Opportunity reviewsYoung Oliver has just won back his family's kingdom, but he doesn't know the first thing about ruling it. He seeks advice from the Duke of Twayblade, a man known for his loyalty--among other things.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 936 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-12-08 - Published: 10-12-084. Fugitive » reviewsA clean get-away turns into a messy chance meeting. Can Evarel charm his way out of this one? Originally completed in April, 2007. May contain nuts.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,702 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-12-08 - Published: 10-12-085. Turn, Turn, Turn reviewsPritha tells the story of a choice she made when she was still young: her Craft, or the man who loves her? It is the most important decision she ever makes.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,259 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-12-07 - Published: 1-12-076. Natural Consequences reviewsBest friends Kevon and Lani butt heads over respect for the working class and the planet. A short vignette taking place prior to the events of "The Resistance."Complete - Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,555 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-24-05 - Published: 8-24-057. The Healer Cycle » reviewsI'm not a poet. I don't pretend any of these are great. However, in case they prove interesting to anybody, here is a series of poems from the point of view of one whose life is to give everything she's got without hope of lasting reward: a healer.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 547 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-23-05 - Published: 8-23-058. The Resistance reviewsKevon and Lani both want to save their dying planet. Lani says join someone with the power to change things. Kevon says fight for that power. Who is right, and who is lost?Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,220 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-25-02 - Published: 4-25-029. Broccoli Enigma reviewsThis is an essay I wrote in ninth grade that PROVES - with real facts - that broccoli comes from outer space! Have fun!Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 772 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-12-02 - Published: 2-12-0210. The Legend of Lyte reviewsA story about the first Unicorn ever to exist, and why the rest of them aren't perfect. Written in eighth grade.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 957 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-12-02 - Published: 2-12-02