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| Adora Akai |
Author has written 22 stories for General, Romance, General, Fantasy, Love, Life, Family, and Action. Hello. I'm getting too old for this. I almost have a degree in creative writing and that is a depressing thought. Soon I'll either have to start publishing or start working as a telemarketer or something. Depressing. Anyway, I've been posting my mediocre writing here for like... jeez... seven or eight years or something. So the old stuff isn't that great. Don't waste too much time with it. Okay on to more optimistic things: Please review my writing? * If you review my story, I will review one of yours (unless something catastrohpic happens and I don't get a chance to.. cuz y'know accidents happen.) You can let me know which story of yours you'd like me to review even. And as I mentioned ealrier, I'm trying to get a degree in this crap so you can be quite honest with me. And detailed. Detailed is good. This has to be the longest and most boring Profile ever. My apologies. But read "The Lark Ascending" if you have time. It's my newest and is actually my creative writing honors thesis. I need the most help with that. Read it if you like really minimalist love stories. | |||||
1. excerpt from 'lark ascending'headam nearly dies in a mobile suit fight but is saved by the image of a girl he may love. is this piece dorky? this is a section i'm thinking of adding to my longer story 'the lark ascending,' but i'm afraid it sucks. if it confuses you, read the fullFiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 891 - Published: 5-3-062. The Lark Ascending, working title » reviewsUpdated! this is my creative writing honors thesis, set in a prison in a futuristic police state, a guard and a prisoner (who've both lead tragic lives) fall in love. Review me, I review you!Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 16,677 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-23-05 - Published: 10-1-053. cuz poetry's gotta be difficult »a collection of more abstract, multi-layered poems. (elitist, snobby, impratical crap that my professors tell me i hafta write.) rating cuz i like to swearPoetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 363 - Published: 3-16-054. He is the color gray reviewsnot a fancy poem, just about someone who i fear will take their own lifePoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-2-055. there is no graceful love reviewsstraightforward poem. easy love is such a lie, love is such a painful, clumsy process... i hope someone can relate. review me, i review youPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-5-056. love love love blah blah blah etc etc etc reviewsnot a sophistocated poem. just honest emotions about relationships, i believe a few readers could relate to this poemPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 447 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-5-057. Summer of the Japanese Beetles reviewswarning: story is a hard read. not only written in stream of consciousness, has twist at the end that changes everything you thought you knew. emile is so lonely that she lets audy think she's gay, just so someone will love her. review me, i review youFiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,509 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 12-5-048. 13 Reflections on Cigarettes reviewsa creative nonfiction piece about exactly what the title says. rating for mild swearingFiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,110 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-26-049. At 11PM reviewsWritten in experimental style. No plot. Abundant imagery. A girl goes crazy and hears music all the time.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 635 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-27-0410. On Tuesday they took my bodyNarrating the infinite requires an experimental writing style. This is my first attempt at a prose poem. It's about heaven.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 319 - Published: 9-27-0411. one long night reviewstwo punks. love at first sight. this poem is just an experiment in writing style. i have no idea how to describe it. please lemme know what you think.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 558 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-14-0412. Catholics call it death to self reviewsA villanelle about the freedom one feels when one releases control of lifePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-6-0413. you said the acorns falling sounded like raindrops reviewsyou never love someone as much as you do when you break up because you're not in love anymorePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-0414. I am the Sea Pacific » reviewsjust a story about the future? or is it political commentary? read and decide. deep religious and political themes, but lotsa love and fightin, too.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-13-04 - Published: 8-8-0415. Flavinda and Valentine reviewsIf you have ever been in love with a promiscuous person, read on. short story written in stream-of-conscioussness style, modern adaptation of V.Woolf's characters Flavinda and ValentineFiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 935 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-18-0416. Growing up, and covering my butt crack reviewsJust what the title says. Being a twenty-something isn't scary. Rating for some casual swearing.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 659 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-22-0417. Folding Priscilla's Laundry reviewsWorking at a honeless shelter in the armpit of Chicago, I never felt closer to the ladies than when I was folding their laundryFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 933 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-22-0418. lexapro reviewsan ode to my anti-depressant prescription medicinePoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-7-0319. Bereavement Fare reviewsmy family's reactions differ to my grandma's death as an airline company tries to screw usPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-10-0320. If I Can Just Get My Head In reviews(a fictional account of Tadeusz Borowski's suicide.) five years after being released from Auschwitz, an ex-prisoner is still tormented by the evil things he did to stay alive. but he had to do it... so why are the ticks and his family still eating him..Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,735 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-6-0321. Please, Beautifultwo months earlier his brother shot himself. CARPE DIEM seeing how we never know how long we have eachother, i had to tell him how i felt. this is a formless mess of being drunk and loving someone whose heart is almost bleedingFiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 537 - Published: 6-22-0322. just be quiet and watch the Fireworks reviewsi will never watch fireworks with someone i love, i thinkFiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 721 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-22-03
