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Author has written 72 stories for Humor, Life, Religion, Song, Love, Politics, War, Young Adult, Horror, Friendship, Fantasy, and Essay. Huge thanks to the people who gave constructive criticism--I appreciate you much more than you know. 'Llo. I'm not too terribly interesting, to tell the truth. Another of those run of the mill, slightly above average kids who finds poetry an intriguing pursuit, if not a particularly suitable one. I'm 20, a student at an average (though gorgeous) state uni, and planning to work in a medical field at some terribly far off point in the future. One day I'll let mania overcome me and hop a plane out of this monopolized, convenience-concerned society. Until then, feel obligated to read and comment on my word salad. You know you want to. You're that bored, and I'm that cool. XX Stay far, far away from the bottom of this page. It holds several "poems" worthy of much contempt. Roughly equivalent to the Bad Art Collection. | |||||||||||
1. Meteor Shower ReminderEver searching for your remnants in the dark. Losing illusions you desperately cling to is just a part of growing old. Pretty rough-cut, CC very welcome.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-09 - Published: 11-9-092. Eyes Burn Bright for Sacrifice reviewsSleight of hand and silent bands play nothing but deceit." Not a finished piece, more a bit of musing. Where do I go with this?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-09 - Published: 4-9-093. Schizophrenic Musings reviewsTitle doesn't fit too well. Kind of silly and cute, rather childlike in fact. Crazy kids... /shakesfistComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-09 - Published: 4-9-094. I Hope Your Plague Infests YouYou might as well have stabbed me in the eye for all the good you did me, spreading your wretched disease of an existence around like you were the next great martyr.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-9-09 - Published: 4-9-095. Aloof is but a Passtime reviewsYou were a butterfly on my fingertips.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-2-08 - Published: 8-2-086. Courage is a Fickle ConceptAn analytical view of courage in The Kite Runner by Khalid Abdalla. It's a great piece of modern world literature; definitely worth a read.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 895 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-2-08 - Published: 8-2-087. When the Sidewalk is All We See reviewsCreative writing assignment #3: observe a poem, write a reaction. This is a reaction to an unnamed Shel Silverstein piece. I'd say it's a good bit darker than he would have written, though...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-17-08 - Published: 7-17-088. The Schizoid MindCreative writing challenge: Write a poem with no more than three words per line. Mine is about the schizoid personality. Enjoy?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-17-08 - Published: 7-17-089. Impressible Surface, Untouchable Mind reviewsOur worlds are emblazoned with ourselves. Written for a lit class.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-11-07 - Published: 12-11-0710. Inducing FocusDrunken comprehension of the world. Don't move me, this is familiar... Just leave off for a while... I'll be fine... But who has ever uttered those lines in a truthful matter? Love cc, feel free to leave some. Just the first draft ].Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-2-07 - Published: 12-2-0711. Contour of Delusions reviewsLoaded with abstractions and cliches. Lovely. Constructive criticism would be amazing. Very misanthropic/cynical/apathetic.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0612. Koolaid Stains the Tub reviewsYay metaphor. I don't think it's difficult to catch the analogies, but apparently it's coded well. Please try anyway?Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0613. Inspiring Homicide reviewsPerhaps not horror, but slightly sadistic. Short story based on the writer's block of a horror writer. Written for my freshman composition course.Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 614 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0614. Scintillating Gestures reviewsRandom, not my best. Concerns self-deception, the pretense of something you could never be.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-12-06 - Published: 1-12-0615. Lust Condemned to Nothing reviewsLust, obsession, murder. In a nifty rhythmic pattern. Yes, well, the title can die. Read it anyway, you know you want to.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-29-05 - Published: 11-29-0516. A Different Sort of Rape reviewsWritten for my best friend and her worthless boyfriend...Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-19-05 - Published: 10-19-0517. Interspersed with Silence reviewsFantasies of a beautiful suicide... Having never died, how could you believe such things?Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-26-05 - Published: 9-26-0518. Capricious in Contentment reviewsDid you ever pause to consider that your therapy could be your assassin?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-05 - Published: 8-26-0519. Decadence Residing reviewsWhat a lovely whore you are; a prostitute of grand elegance. You despise your existence, but is it not specialty? If released, would you be free?Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-26-05 - Published: 8-26-0520. Inerrant Milieu reviewsWill you still be paranoid when the universe breaks stance, and compliance is upended? Can be for any age, though I doubt anyone below high school would give a dmn.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-05 - Published: 8-26-0521. Prodigy of Upier Fantasies reviewsI don't want it, I don't need it... But I will dominate. You have no power over me, succumb! Note that an upier is a type of vampire. I know, fed up summary, besides the fact, please read.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-26-05 - Published: 8-26-0522. Integrity reviewsYour pseudo-face, your pretense, is shattered even before it does you any good - yet somehow, it still matters. They stare, judging you by stance... No worries, karma always swings back around.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-5-05 - Published: 7-5-0523. Inspiration of a Lovecraft reviewsHorror for the appearance of Nyarlathotep; romance for the love in it, and yes, necrophilia counts! This is what comes of being inspired by H.P. Lovecraft.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-27-05 - Published: 5-27-0524. Sunday reviewsHungover on a Sunday morning, what else would you think of but religion? The cynical ponderings of a faith-losing soul. Would appreciate constructive criticism!Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Parody/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-27-05 - Published: 5-27-0525. Stairway to Mortality reviewsAbout cheating, essentially, but I don't know if anyone would pick up on that. Drugs, hatred, and suicide, what fun! And all niftily pocketed by offset allusions.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-27-05 - Published: 5-27-0526. Statistical, No Fear reviewsHard to classify, but another of my poetry-prose bits. Written from the perspective of someone who's just committed murder. Not your average fiction piece!Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-12-05 - Published: 4-12-0527. Stark Raving Mad reviewsThis is my randomosity. In cohesion with the title, this is some of what danced through my mind when I sampled the insane. Beware the references to movies. Rated for language.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 464 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-11-05 - Published: 4-11-0528. Spite reviewsDon't you dare put me through this sh!t. I'm pissed. Friendship because it was written for a friend (somewhat, at least).Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-14-05 - Published: 3-14-0529. Contradictions reviewsWith freedom comes the price of peace, for nothing can be simple. Free verse.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-14-05 - Published: 3-14-0530. Just Another Whore reviewsOh, how I wish this could be heard, I the music is as much a part of this as the lyrics themselves. But alas, I don't have the voice. Very angry tone, you are warned.Song - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-14-05 - Published: 3-14-0531. Anything But Alive reviewsHave you been disowned by your messiah today?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-13-05 - Published: 3-13-0532. Whisper Stilled reviewsOne shot, prose-like story, written from the eyes of someone not entirely with the moment. When the fallen break, you lose yourself as much as you do them.Horror - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-1-05 - Published: 2-1-0533. A Broken Sort of Affection reviewsSomewhat morbid, I suppose. A prose bit, I'm starting to like prose quite a lot. Can be taken in several ways, what it means to you is not necessarily the same to another perspective.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-24-05 - Published: 1-24-0534. Wrong With the World reviewsWritten in an odd mood, listening to A Perfect Circle. Basically about my failing belief in humanity. How everyone thinks they're doing the right thing when they screw the world over. Constructive criticism welcome.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-23-05 - Published: 1-23-0535. Dimensions of Reality reviewsFreeverse about abuse, and escaping the torment through self-inflicted pain...Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-22-05 - Published: 1-22-0536. From a Broken Pedestal reviewsAbout how love blinds you. How you can love someone even as you die by their hands. In other words, about deceit.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 431 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-22-05 - Published: 1-22-0537. A Soul's Reprieve reviewsAbout a person with insomnia, and their distorted yet somehow accurate view of the world. Written for a poetry contest and turned out really well, in my opinion.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-05 - Published: 1-22-0538. Goodnight reviewsMy first prose bit! About how only select people are the ones who hold the burdens in this world. But they're not immortal. They break too. Will you care? (bad summary)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-15-04 - Published: 12-15-0439. Mendicant of a Lost Day » reviewsLatin fixed, on chap. 2! Discrimination between the rich and the poor, no longer living a sheltered life but open to see the beggars of the world. They aren't so bad - but you can only see filth without having gone through their pain.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-04 - Published: 11-8-0440. Quickly Now, Once Again reviewsAbout being cheated: Thinking someone loves you, then realizing they're just playing a cruel joke. Nobody really loves you, you could never matter.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-20-04 - Published: 11-20-0441. A Night Like Any Other reviewsA young girl, physically abused by her mother, stands upon the roof of her second-story roof as she ponders suicide.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 954 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-11-04 - Published: 11-11-0442. Paradox reviewsDepressing, but do I ever write anything that isn't? Not really angsty, again influenced by Lacuna Coil. Read the poem and take your own meaning from it!Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-04 - Published: 10-3-0443. Unforgiving reviewsAt my school there are a lot of people all following a religion just because that's how they grew up. I'm VERY much against that. Rated for the "eff" word.Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-29-04 - Published: 9-29-0444. TRENTUS reviewsGenerally about a girl whose only friend commits suicide, and how she copes. Revolves around music. PLEASE r/r I need Constructive Criticism! rough draftYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,228 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-28-04 - Published: 9-28-0445. Apocalyptical Freedom reviewsFrom the title, you might be able to tell that the poem's about the apocalypse setting the world free. What you don't know is how ironic the destruction will be ::smiles::War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-7-04 - Published: 9-7-0446. Save Me reviewsAbout the terrorist attack on the school in Russia, from the POV of someone caught up in it.Politics - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-5-04 - Published: 9-5-0447. Parody of Society reviewsRated for language. This is a freeverse scoffing at how infinitely disgusting society in general has become. How too much these days is based on appearance.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Parody/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-5-04 - Published: 9-5-0448. Blood in the Snow reviewsAnother love poem, about wanting who you can't have. About being seen in disgust as you watch in awe. Gazing from your position in hell, you wish for what you cannot have.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-0449. You reviewsMy first ever actual love poem! Really sappy, and perhaps the oddest thing ever to come after the last bit of poetry I posted.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-0450. Slave reviewsR for language. About being in debt to the Reaper, who refuses to let you die, or even sleep, until you've paid your death. Odd ending. Very VERY dark.Song - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 316 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-0451. From Life to Decay reviewsAbout a girl who doesn't understand how anyone can love her, much less a boy with such a perfect life. Eventually she realizes that love is impossible for her.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-0452. Bound reviewsReally, I'm not sure what it's about... Kind of about limitations, but I wrote it while listening to Lacuna Coil so you know it's odd... Dark-themed...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-04 - Published: 8-6-0453. Destiny reviewsAnother anti-love poem. About loving someone, but you know that being with them would kill them. So you tell them to go away so you can face your destiny and die.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-04 - Published: 7-31-0454. Breathe and Die reviewsYa know, they really need a category for death poetry. Anyways, this one's about being numb. Everything you see is distorted, warped by your twisted mind. Your love tells you to breathe and you do, dying by every breath, until you're gone...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-25-04 - Published: 4-25-0455. Monster Inside reviewsCan have several meanings, but by my original intent it's about somebody's psychotic inner beast killing everything they care about, and they laugh the entire time.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-25-04 - Published: 4-25-0456. Scream of the Alarm reviewsFree verse written for my poetry class. Supposed to be about someone who doesn't want to get out of bed in the morning. Mmm... A bit dark...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-6-04 - Published: 4-6-0457. Conversations Between reviewsINSANE NONSENSE! Yay, what fun! A conversation you might hear between my friends and I, which is where it's staged. Please r/r!Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-6-04 - Published: 4-6-0458. Shards of Childhood reviewsFree verse, written for an English I assignment when I realized the teacher probably didn't want the darker stuff I'd written. Still has the dark edge. Odd meaning, can be taken a few ways. R/R please!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0459. Imagine reviewsAbout a girl who lives in the world of imagination, ignoring the real world.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-4-04 - Published: 3-4-0460. Voices reviewsThese are the voices that scream inside my mindLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-1-04 - Published: 3-1-0461. Bloody Kiss reviewsRated for murder... It shouldn't be rated under 'love,' I guess, but- well- maybe she used to love him or sumthin... Anyways, this girl murders a dude... Kinda funny, to me...Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-29-04 - Published: 2-29-0462. I Deserve the Shame reviewsA person is trying to persuade someone to kill them, because they feel they've caused too much pain to others.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-12-04 - Published: 2-12-0463. Wishing I Had Not Been Found reviewsI'm not entirely sure what I meant by this. Hmm... It's about not feeling free around the person that confines you. It's about being treated like trash. It's about not knowing who you are anymore. It's about wanting to be free. Choose a meaning or mLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-10-04 - Published: 2-10-0464. Rumors reviewsMy first ever bit of free verse. 'Tis about a certain evil called rumors. As if you couldn't tell by the title. Rated for suicidal references.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-9-04 - Published: 2-9-0465. Fall Through Time reviewsGuy commits suicide, his friend figures out why.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-6-04 - Published: 2-6-0466. Corrupted Spirit reviewsNot quite as depressed as my usual stuff. About darkness taking away your innocence...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-6-04 - Published: 2-6-0467. And Life Became Dark reviewsAbout somebody who was raised in a bad environment... kinda... I'm not good with summaries.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-6-04 - Published: 2-6-0468. Smiling at my BloodFilled Dreams reviews'Tis about abuse and suicide. Kinda sad...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-6-04 - Published: 2-6-0469. My Tears, My Fears reviewsSo overcome by sadness that you never even notice that your inner child has gone, taking your innocence with it...Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-5-04 - Published: 2-5-0470. Spirits reviewsNot for the overly-religious. The world dies, and a person goes to Heaven for Judgement. She ends up in Hell, then God abandons everything and the angels end up in their own Hell. I suppose you'd call it morbid...Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-5-04 - Published: 2-5-0471. Dreams of Suicide reviewsUm... Nothing much past the title, there... A girl dreams of committing suicide...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-4-04 - Published: 2-4-0472. Mind Reading for Dummies » reviewsSorta pointless and REEEEAALLY confusing. If you like any of our other stories, you'll like this one. Story written with mjh-523.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,202 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-5-02 - Published: 12-5-02
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