Status:
19 June 2007: I have started something I have long wanted to put to words. I have also removed Desert Song, for lack of interest writing it and for the fact that it was trite.

Stuff:
To all those who inquired about me reviewing their stories, I am going to try to get to them within the week.

What is there to know about a person? Try reading their works, and see what you may learn ;)

myspace.com/simplewhimsy -- writers welcome.
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Creature

Transformation thank yous:

Enigmagirl: I don't think my writing has ever been called entrancing, but it is a compliment I think I will take wholeheartedly. ;) It is good to know you enjoyed it so thoroughly; I hope you will continue to be entranced by this little world I've created.

Goddess:) Heh, you may like the character now, but just you wait. I've had Deilakrion/Vilaelia as a character for many years, and she has been developed like non other. Thank you for your always-positive reviews.

Ms. Barnes: Thank you! Haha, I think I cannot write in anything but a dramatic tone, which sometimes makes my writing cluttered. Nontheless, I am glad you enjoyed.

Mr. Vance : Just because you didn't review me here doesn't mean I won't thank you. I've always loved your criticism (about as much as it frustrates me), and I will edit the first chapter. Constant improvement is something to aim for.

Narc: Thank you, thank you, thank you. I'm hoping I might get some other critiques before I revamp chapter one, but yours and Vance's criticism will definitely play a part in helping my writing to improve.
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As always, constructive criticism is appreciated and taken into thoughtful consideration.

Bear in mind that I've had Deilakrion/Vilaelia as a character for 4-5 years. Sometimes I forget that others haven't known her so long, so if things get too confusing, please let me know. Anything you don't like or think is unnecessary, let me know. We may not always agree, but change to improve is always something I consider.

Extra:

"The insane, on occasion, are not without their charms."

- Kurt Vonnegut, Jr.