Eternity's Secret
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since: 04-26-02, id: 204907, Profile Updated: 04-03-10
country: USA
Author has written 24 stories for Haiku, School, General, Humor, Sci-Fi, Horror, Thriller, Supernatural, and General.

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What's up? Just me, Eternity's Secret. Umm...reviews are encouraged..and flames, no. No way. You can type them and submit them, but I don't stand for it. I'm no push over. Constructive comments are acceptable, I'll stand with that. But don't give me crap. Got it?

Name: Bri

Age: 19

Looks: Dirty blond hair, blue eyes, 5'7"

Birthday: November 27

Education: Attending Community College, will be transferring

I feel as though every time I promise you with something, I always manage to break it. But here's the reality, I am working 32+ hours at a gas station and taking 16 credit hours this semester, so my free time is managed to the fullest extent (mostly me wandering aimlessly complaining that there is nothing to do, but in actuality..there is plenty). I have found my old manuscripts that I intend on revamping and putting on here. And I have also been working on a few more things on the side, some scattered poetry and plausible plot lines. Though this takes up a lot of time and effort to make sure that this profile stays up and running, I'm willing to give it a shot. Wish me luck.

Meet my disclaimer:

Evening minuetto in a castle by the sea
A jewel more radiant than the moon
Lowered Her mask to me
The sublimest creature the Gods, full of fire
Would marvel at making their Queen
Infusing the air with Her fragrant desire
And my heart reeled with grave poetry...

From grace I fell in love with Her
Scent and feline lure
And jade woodland eyes that ushered in the impurest
"Erotic, laden fantasies amid this warm Autumn night
She lulled me away from the rich masquerade
And together we clung in the bloodletting moonlight"
Pearled luna, what spell didst thou cast on me?
Her icy kiss fervoured my neck
Like whispering waves 'pon Acheron's beach
In a whirl of sweet voices and statues
That phantomed the dying trees
This debauched seductress in black, took me...

In a pale azured dawn like Ligeia reborn
I tore free of my sleep - sepulchre
On the sea misted lawn where stone figures, forlorn
Lamented the spectre of Her
Bewildered and weak, yet with passion replete
I hungered for past overtures
The curse of unrest and her ardent caress
Came much more than my soul could endure...

I, at once endeavoured to see Her again
Stirring from midnight's inertia
Knowing not even her name
On a thin precipice over carnal abyss
I danced like a blind acolyte
Drunk on red wine, her dead lips on mine
Suffused with the perfume of night

For hours I scoured the surrounding grounds
In vain that we might meet
When storm clouds broke, ashened, fatigued
I sought refuge in a cemeterty

Sleep, usher dreams
Taint to nightmares from a sunless nether

Mistress of the dark
I now know what thou art

Screams haunt my sleep
Dragged from nightmares thou hast wed together

Lamia and Lemures
Spawned thee leche
To snare my flesh

Portrait of the Dead Countess

Deep stained pain that I had dreamt
Flaunted demise, life's punishment
Leaving little strength to seal this wretched tomb...

But poised nectar within my stirs
Up feverous desire and morbid purpose to search
Through cobwebbed drapery to where she swoons
Goddess of the graveyard, of the tempest and moon
In flawless fatal beauty her very visage compels
Glimpses of a heaven where ghost companies fell
To mourning the loss of god in blackest velvet
Enrobed in their downfall like a swift silhouette

"Fleeting, enshadowed
Thou art privy to my sin
Secrets dead, wouldst thou inflict
The cruel daylights upon my skin?
Dost thou not want to worship me
With crimson sacrifice
So my cunt may twitch against thy kiss
And weep with new-found life?"

Red roses for the Devil's whore...

Dark angels taste my tears
And whisper haunting requiems
Softly to mine ear
Need-fires have lured abominations here...

Nocturnal pulse
My veins spill forth their waters
Rent by lips I cherish most

Awash on her perfidious shores
Where drowning umbra o'er the stars
Ebon's graves where lovers whore
Like seraphim and Nahemah

"Nahemah"

Pluck out mine eyes, hasten, attest
Blind reason against thee, Enchantress
For I must know, art thou not death?
My heart echoes bloodless and incensed...

Doth temptation prowl night in vulvic revelry
Did not the Queen of Heaven come as Devil to me?
On that fatal Hallow's Eve when we fled company
As the music swept around us in the crisp, fated leaves
UNder horned Diana where her bloodline was sewn
In a graveyard of Angels rent in cool marbled stone
I am grieving the loss of life in sombre velvet
Enrobed in Death's shadow like a swifter
silhouette...

-- "A Gothic Romance (Red Roses For The Devil's Whore)" by Cradle of Filth

Please review me, I love them

~WOBM


1. Era of Darkness » reviews
Earth. A barren wasteland now used for war. War between Humans and Other Beings. Earth as we know is losing the battle against this new Race. The only group that can win back Earth is a group of teenagers who need some anger management. Check disclaimer
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,627 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 10-23-08 - Published: 4-2-04
2. In Absence reviews
The child is not what it seems, or was it ever there to be seeming? Please read and review.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-16-08 - Complete
3. Cry for Me reviews
His suspiscion with her started with the brutal murder of his mother. Her secrets, he thought, could show the answers he's yearned for. But he'll regret meddling in business not his own. Plz read and review.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 699 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-23-06
4. Singles' Awareness Day reviews
Posted a day before V-Day...but oh well, you'll live right? Anyway, it's funny and mocking Valentine's Day. Please read and review!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-13-06
5. To the Damned reviews
All this time I thought we were friends/Until our very end/But when I saw you turn away/When I needed you the most that day... Review for me, and I will for you.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-25-05
6. Nightmares of Darkness: Revised reviews
When Antoinette tries to figure out a shooting of her childhood friend, she gets thrown into a spider web of adventure, drama, fighting, and the horror Darien goes through in the Torture room. Read my profile for more R R
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,408 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-5-05
7. Bodies » reviews
He's a mass murderer that never kills the same two ways. He's a madman with a sick nature. Police are on tight guard, but that never stopped him. He's a torturer and won't stop until your dead. That's not a threat, that's a promise. 1 up!
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,286 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-5-05 - Published: 2-1-05
8. Crimson Night reviews
I suck at summaries...it's about this girl who's getting killed and ends up killing the guy who tried to kill her..rated for slight language...U review 4 me I review 4 u!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-21-04
9. That's My Boy reviews
Well, I can't really descirbe it...but it's about a murderer's son who just wants to be appreciated by his father. Please r r!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-27-04
10. Diamond reviews
A diamond's beauty lasts forever
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-2-04
11. Meadow Breeze reviews
Relaxing in a field with nothing but flowers and a gentle wind...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-31-04
12. As the Rain Falls reviews
It's a vampire poem. Plz r r! U REVIEW 4 ME I REVIEW 4 U!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 3-16-04
13. Deadly Dragon reviews
I wrote this during Language Arts class. It's about a dragon in the Mideval Ages. r r
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-6-03
14. Touche, Dear Puppy reviews
Don't you hate it when puppies look at you with big, pleading eyes?
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-17-03
15. Dreams reviews
At night, normally you think of what happened during the day and how you could make it better. But every once and a while, don't you just want to get away? Fantasy dreams help...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-7-03
16. Stage reviews
What goes through your head when it is school talent show and your act is last and you take that fianl step on the stage and there's no going back?
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-19-03
17. Lightning reviews
If the title doesn't get through to you, then how can the summary do the same?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-4-03
18. Clouds reviews
About the pillows of fluff that we can have fun making shapes out of them.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-3-03
19. Midnight Sky reviews
It's about the midnight sky.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-14-03
20. Silence reviews
about silence
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-14-03
21. Moon reviews
a haiku about the big circle in the midnight sky.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-25-03
22. Stars reviews
The mysterious world above us filled with sparkling spects of life.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-10-03
23. Babies reviews
what does the world look like through a baby's eyes? what is it like when they first learn to crawl?
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-8-03
24. Missing reviews
Again, no summary I can make up can fit this.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-25-03