As I fix up various parts of my story they will be reposted. Hopefully people will find that it don't suck as much.

Eclipse - Chapter 3

If you like it say so, say why, if you hate it, say so, say why. I take criticism well, I know my grammar fails at times, so just point it out to me and I'll fix it.

As much as I'd love to go on some rant about my likes, dislikes and life story, I appreciate the fact that no one cares. Soooo...moving on then.