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Author has written 18 stories for Life, General, Nature, and Fantasy. I am 16 years old (birthday november) and the not so very, but still satisfyingly proud author of 18 poems. I like photography, reading, writing, music, Canada (though I live in Germany) and the sea. I won't get started on what I don't like ... Arabian Knight is not a writer of anything other than poems, but for those of you who would like to read something other than these, I will direct you to my twin account: Lotus Eye, who, I might add, is being a lazy loon at the moment, so I suppose you needn't bother after all. To all my readers: So sorry I haven't posted ANYTHING in such a long time, I guess one thing just came on top of the other .... but I have finally pulled up my socks and have created a new poem, which was inspired byan early morning vision - nothing special though. Still I would be glad to hear your opinion! Anyway, would be much obliged if you r&r-ed my other stuff as well ... it's not at all reassuring when you've got practically nada critic on some of your poems. I personally think that my better poems are the following: Streets of Africa, Inside the laboratory, Dedicated to the floods and Twisted out of reality (I would love to get some more feedback about this one, so far nobody's had anything to complain about and I fear I may become too self-satisfied!). Then there's the "Morning" poems, of which I have6 at the moment: January - May and November (don't ask). The rest are still to come. And my other poems? They're all right too, I suppose. What do you think? I am always open for criticism (or praise :), so please help me become a better writer by reviewing my stuff. So, loads of thanks to my helpful (few) reviewers: Taka and Keichirou, Little Prayer, evil eyed love, bridgette's tears, eyes of sky, serene-rhapsody, Reading Redhead, Rocky G, poisonous, Bleeding Ink, dark88poet, elvenstorm, Adonia Chesser, BlueDragonGirl1, Ethereal Gale, Hercules, youzi, EarthTouch, S4bbii, Leylique Morrow and Luculent Perspicacity. Thank you so much for your help and advice! Special thanks for the ones who's favourite list I'm on: evil eyed love, Little Prayer, Lurid and Ang-Mei Cho. What did I do to deserve such an honour? And of course very, very special thanks to my faithful sis and kind reviewer: the one, the only: Shooting Jewel. What would I do without you? You really think "January Morning" is my best? Perhaps you'd change your mind if you read a bit more ...? Hope to hear from you again! Yours truly, ARABIAN KNIGHT | |||||||
1. November Morning reviewsmy first morning poem in a long while, hope it doesn't disappoint you. it's just a recollection of what i saw when i woke up. enjoy!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-2-05 - Published: 12-2-052. Pounding reviewsInspired by depression, stress, rain pouring down ceaselessly onto my window and the lines "Cover her face. Mine eyes dazzle, she died young" (Duchess of Malfi). My first real angsty one. r&r!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-3-05 - Published: 5-3-053. May Morning reviewsBrought out very fast this time ): Monthly morning poem for May. Bit strange, not very long ... would still be gratified for any sort of review!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-1-05 - Published: 5-1-054. Sun Moon reviewsDefinitely NOT one of my best, just a few vague sentences and words that were asking to be put down on paper. Still, would be VERY happy if you reviewed anyhow!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-05 - Published: 4-26-055. April Morning reviews4th of the monthly morning poems. Sorry, got rather short this time, inspiration is at a definite low at the moment ... will try harder next time! r&r, please!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-056. Water of the mountain reviewsMerely inspired by the words "rushing ... plunging ... cascading ... down into the depths". Nothing special, but please r&r anyhow!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-17-05 - Published: 4-17-057. Twisted out of reality reviewsUm, I think the poem is self-explanatory ... at least, I like to think so. Not very cheering, but then, not many of my poems are. Please please r&r anyway!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 390 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-10-05 - Published: 4-10-058. March Morning reviewsSorry, the title sounds kind of sucky with this one. This time not quite so much nature, I was in a very emotional state at the time ... r&r please anyway!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-059. Fire Undead reviewsDon't ask me where I got this idea from ... I guess I just had to get something out of my system ... what can I say, very strange, very short, unfortunately not very good ... whatever, please r&r all the same, I've got a shortage on reviews at the moment!Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-11-05 - Published: 3-11-0510. Unreachable reviewsthis is inspired by a picture my sister drew, reflecting loneliness, depression, emptyness. well, i wrote it when i was in the fitting mood ... please r&r anyway!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-2-05 - Published: 3-2-0511. Thoughts of a winter night reviewsThis poem consists of vague memories and musings from when I was still very small. Please r&r, and I hope you like it lots!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-19-05 - Published: 2-19-0512. February Morning reviewsSecond of the monthly "morning" poems. Slightly longer than the first, maybe also better? please r&r anyway!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-12-05 - Published: 2-12-0513. January Morning reviewsHey everybody, my first non-depressing poem, though perhaps a bit weird. Please r & r!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-15-05 - Published: 1-15-0514. Dedicated to the floods reviewsthis is dedicated to all people who lost something because of the floods in asia and sri lanka and so on. please r & r and tell me if i captured the mood of the tragedy well.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-15-05 - Published: 1-15-0515. Inside the laboratory reviewsThis poem is based on a film I saw at school, where they were doing medical research on mice. Please r & r!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-11-04 - Published: 12-11-0416. Of One Generation reviewsThis is a poem about one generation, but even though the three boys might be the same age, that has no influence on their life.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0417. Streets of Africa reviewsThis is a poem about ... well, Africa. It's supposed to make the reader think a bit after reading it. Well, r&r please!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0418. And never do I linger reviewsThis is a poem about a sailor (i LOVE poems about the sea) and, well, I think it's self explanatory enough. Enjoy!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-26-04 - Published: 10-26-04
