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1. Pygmalion reviewsA disturbing story about an ordinary man who makes an terrible decision. First chapter is up - worth continuing?Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,154 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-24-05 - Published: 4-24-052. Chevrolet Days reviewsA family that is living in a car. Partially a character sketch - tell me if I should keep going with this one.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,238 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-05 - Published: 4-24-053. Lucky Strike reviewsJust a series of character sketches, but tell me if you think they're worth working into a story.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,163 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-054. Goodnight, Zi reviewsA short play about what comes after the attempted suicide, complete with obligatory suicide note - the one thing in life that you never expect to have to answer for. It's the first play I've written, so tell me what you think.Play - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,735 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-055. Melodrama, Aisle Seven reviewsJust something silly that I wrote - a regular, grocery-store tragedy. Don't be too mean.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 638 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-056. Piper » reviewsJolene Tarrow is not entirely satisfied with her life. She is twenty three, and still working as a bartender for a sleazy joint owned by 'Ziggy.' And then (did you see this coming? -10 points for melodrama), something happens that changes her life. RatingSupernatural - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,544 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-25-05 - Published: 1-25-057. Last of the Summer Wine reviewsThe extremely unusual habits of a small village. Please R&R, and criticism is quite welcome!Horror - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,812 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-26-04 - Published: 9-26-048. Smoke and Mirrors reviewsShort story showing love at its most painful; as an addiction.Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 529 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-25-04 - Published: 9-25-049. Token reviewsA rather sarcastic story about the Christian faith. Don't read this if you're religious and are going to get angry. The first chapter is kinda short, but please tell me what you think!Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-23-04 - Published: 6-23-0410. Ashes in her Eyes » reviewsThe best of friends when they were seven, Molly and Alex are as different as night and day, and they haven't spoken for almost ten years. An unexpected move throws them back into the mix together, with rather chaotic results. Please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,846 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 3-31-04 - Published: 3-3-0411. Blue China reviewsA man is sitting alone in a smoky, badly-lit bar at closing time, and he has no idea how to got there. Please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 897 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-18-04 - Published: 3-18-0412. Three Minutes reviewsA young teenage girl gets pregnant, told from her father's point of view. An extremely emotional piece that breaks about fifty different grammer rules. Please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 798 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-6-04 - Published: 3-6-0413. Colored Glass Marbles reviews"Five minutes ago they strung up the clinging, yellow caution tape." ...please R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 982 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0414. Broken Glass » reviews"A shadow moved fitfully in one corner, melting from shape to shape as it gradually resolved itself into a human figure. She was naked, hunched down with both skinny arms curled around her legs." R&R please!General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,292 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0415. Seven reviewsSnapshot of an unusual little girl. please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0416. Perfidy reviewsA woman lives in the clay beside a river. And a little girl is the only one who knows. Please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,761 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0417. Sandgap » reviewsShe has no name, no past, and no future. He has all three. And they are both lost.Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,926 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 12-30-0318. Memories Anonymous reviews"Very carefully, a woman lifts a crystal cylinder of perfume off her bureau. She is approaching sixty, and has begun to fade; each year her face is carved with new wrinkles, her sensual lips shrivel, and her smoldering eyes grow dim." Please R&R, not sureGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 893 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-2-04 - Published: 2-2-0419. Caged Eyes reviewsA strange, compelling woman walked into his life three weeks ago. Today, he wakes up at her side, naked in a cheap hotel room. Please R/R, as I don't know what I think of this one.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,808 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-2-04 - Published: 1-2-0420. Snapshot reviews"Because no one stares at her, she stares at everyone. They feel her hungry eyes on them, trying to see the secret. And because she never finds it, she knows that it must exist. She is the pretty blue of a wall, on which a famous painting is hung." (I'm nGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 485 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-1-04 - Published: 1-1-0421. Custodian reviews"None of them know me for what I am, and they let me live. But they sense it. They fear me. They hate me because I can see. "Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 955 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-31-03 - Published: 12-31-0322. Maybe reviews"I shouldn't have come. I'm not stupid. I knew that it was a bad idea all along. And that's exactly why I had to."General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 714 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-03 - Published: 12-30-0323. Soliloquy reviews"She is past that, now. This is her last soliloquy, her final act. She has played roles her entire life… she has been daughter, she has been sister, she has been wife and widow, she had been mother. She had been grandmother. And now, finally, she was boGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 528 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-15-03 - Published: 12-15-0324. For Best Results reviews"I am the mother goddess, Gaea. I am the one who gives, who saves, who burns with the emotions of others. I am a soccer mom. Each morning at 6:34 I walk the eleven steps to our mailbox and grab the newspaper."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 753 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-15-03 - Published: 12-15-0325. In a Bad Part of Town reviews"In a bad part of town, a balding, middle-aged businessman nervously taps one thumb against the steering wheel in time to his music."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 878 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-15-03 - Published: 12-15-0326. House of Cards reviews"She carried a pack of cards with her everywhere."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,065 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-15-03 - Published: 12-15-03
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