I have been writing The Midnight Globe for years and most likely, I will never put it down completely. However, its done for now.
If you decide to read The Midnight Globe, then know that my chapters are generally long. Tell me in reviews if they are too long and boring, but also know that in the chapters, there will once in awhile be a paragraph that starts out with a few words in italic. When this is the case, I have meant to make a sort of break in the story at that place. So, you can stop at the italic text when the chapter seems too long for reading all at once.
I am though working on making my chapters shorter and have done this in my own private version of the story. But until I find a way to insert chapters and still keep the reviews where they were intended, there will remain long chapters in the beginning. If you read a chapter and wonder why I didn't make a new chapter at a certain place, that would be a comment I would very much appreciate. For the answer is likely to be that I simply wasn't aware of that place a chapter division.
Anyway, I hope you will find some of my work interesting and I hope you will tell me when I write boring stuff, so I can improve it for the next reader. Criticism in any form or shape is widely accepted and desired.
Although, if all you have to say is, "good stuff, please R&R my story", please do refrain from dropping the review. If you want me to R&R your stuff, just send me an email instead. The same can be said to you kind people out there feeling a need to return a review, but not wanting to read my freakin' long chapters. If all you want to say, is thank you, then write me an email for I desire not to receive pointless reviews
This is not only what I demand, but also my own review policy, so to speak. So, don't fret if I leave you a review that offers more criticism/suggestions than praise. I review this way only for one reason and that is, that I believe it to be more useful.
All I write is basically about friendship (or sometimes maybe a poem about other relations). Friends are few and far between, and the estrangement of friends is a tale of sadness I will never stop telling. And some estranged friends will forever mean more than the friends in your life will.
So, check out Rogue Knight1 (35237) on fanfiction.net, who has also been a helping hand with some scenes in The Midnight Globe. For this I thank you, dude! And as I have told you on more than one occasion and also told 'your' character in TMG, you stand second to none. The day you realise this and harvest the seeds of your talents, the world will be yours to own. Don't wait another 30 years realising this.
"Nieckas followed Rylothe a few steps, as he pleaded with him to stay. Nevertheless, his words were in vain and the silhouette of Rylothe disappeared in the darkness and like a curtain the rain closed between the two friends of old." - You're missed by many, my friend. In this forum and in all my worlds, you will be all that constitutes estrangement and loss.
There have by many been given suggestions on how to write 'the good story' and these suggestions have changed repeatedly in history. I have no idea what constitutes a good story, but under my favourites lists, you will be able to find a few stories I think good.
NB: Should there be any gifted painters or illustrators out there, I should like nothing more than pictures for my story.
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