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since: 08-08-02, id: 249001, Profile Updated: 04-18-13
Author has written 33 stories for Young Adult, General, Mythology, Romance, Life, Fantasy, Friendship, General, and Sci-Fi.

FICTIONPRESS WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY SECTION BREAKS.

Edit: I don't check here often, so I'm not sure when they tweaked the formatting (yet again) and all that. In any case all of them have been fixed for now — let's see how long they last this time. (If I'd missed any of them or if two somewhat different sections of any story look like they er, deserve a break, please inform me via PM or email or whatever.)

Edit2: I'm archiving some of my stories here over at Wordpress (see homepage link below), just in case Fictionpress messes them up again. You know.

Anyway, on to the profile proper!


Now...

Just for the record, my previous (and only other) username was deuteriuM Xtreme. You may read the rest after you're done laughing, the way I did at myself for the past decade or so.

Most of the stories down there are written by my idealistic, sentimental, rebel-without-a-cause adolescent self. I still like them. I still expand on them sometimes. But now I'm just a young adult with the mind of an old bat, on the verge of losing the memories and thought processes of said self. THE HELL OF IT.

Hence this account.

But I still hope to be able to update this page every now and then with a new story, salvaged from all those half-assed ideas mucking about inside my head and carefully crafted into something decent. Until then, thank you for reading.


A piece of advice for all you fellow writers here:
One of the best beta readers you can have is yourself a few years down the road.

Keep your old story drafts. Even the trashy ones. And ESPECIALLY those that you think you've written well. Because so long as you keep the habit of (and love for) writing, you will definitely improve. When you look back at your works again after some time you're bound to see all the quirks in your writing — little things you might not have noticed before, but which are now so glaringly out-of-place you'll hasten to correct them. Plus it's also really interesting to see how your writing style has changed with your different inspirations and influences over the years.

My stories here, for example, have all been edited at some point or another. For some I'd saved different versions, but for most I'd simply (and stupidly) overwritten them. The few drafts I'd remembered to save are all bloody embarrassing to read through, but at least I could gawk at how ridiculous my past self was, have a good laugh / cringe afterward, and then tweak whichever story I'm currently writing just to save whatever dignity I have left. Torturous, maybe, but also useful in the long run.

Go on now, and have a blast writing!


Additional story notes:

Ace of Spades
The bridge game featured in this story is floating bridge, a somewhat corrupted form of contract bridge and also (unfortunately) the only variant I am used to.

Skywriting
The easter egg is apparently working again. (I thank ye, o fickle gods of formatting.)

An Absinthe Affair
1. This is my first attempt at a more compressed style of storytelling. Probably needs a few more minor edits because some sentences and punctuations just don't seem to look right.
2. 'Countable Hairs': one possible anagram of 'Nicholas Aubert'.

@youths: Thank you for your very honest review. I was too concerned with the language and with being as concise as possible while writing this story, which is probably why I didn't pay so much attention to plot and character development (which I'm rather weak at). Then again, I admit I was also having too much fun making the story as ridiculous and entertaining as possible. I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.


Links:

Fanfiction account: fanfiction.net/u/249001/
WordPress archive (U/C): atomicparty.wordpress.com


1. An Absinthe Affair reviews
Nicholas Aubert has broken many hearts since he was a boy and never once felt sorry. But then along comes a young lady with her dream of a great machine and — could this be love he is feeling at last? Victoriana, semi-steampunk and everything but romance.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,007 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-9-09 - Complete
2. Season of Memories
Together, we celebrate the days we spent in school as friends. The rest — moments we shared as a little more, perhaps — shall be kept safe, even long after the last petals fall. A picture story of cherry blossoms and new beginnings. Implied M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,455 - Published: 5-23-09 - Complete
3. Beautiful World reviews
Edited. In time, we will leave behind traces of what we have forgotten — high towers, tiny stars, and a perpetual mask over the sky. And only in time will we remember that our world was wonderful, once upon a time. A semi-futuristic tale.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,329 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-08 - Complete
4. consume, create, fall down dead
This is the strangest cycle of life and rebirth, as told in pencil lines and paper towers.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Published: 7-24-08 - Complete
5. Thousand Feather Smash reviews
So he can't do without his beloved feather pillows. Fine. But must I suffer the indignity of shopping for them with him? Must I do that when he doesn't even know their MOST important purpose? I must enlighten him! M/M slash, fluff.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,213 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 7-13-08 - Complete
6. Skywriting reviews
Our summer sky is a dream of hanging ladders, and a tale of rippling seas. There we shall love, and hide, and send secret letters to each other, till the day I see your smile, and you my fallen tears. Implied M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,590 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-5-08 - Complete
7. Dandelion Clocks » reviews
I have a phobia of the wind. He thinks he can blow me away. We shall see, oh yes we shall. Complete! M/M slash, fluff, insanity.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 19,979 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 6-18-08 - Published: 5-9-08 - Complete
8. Leaf in the Heart of Autumn reviews
Nothing made him happier than watching the boy, going to and coming out of school every day. And the day he chose to follow the boy would be the one that would soon break his heart forever.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,063 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-10-08 - Complete
9. 1881 reviews
In our world of Venn circles we stand together, sometimes holding hands, sometimes far apart. Perhaps we still are friends. Perhaps no more.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-31-08 - Complete
10. Ginger reviews
He always saw the boy in the black hooded jacket with the cat's ears and tail. He wished he had never asked him why. A little city tale. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,558 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 8-17-07 - Complete
11. Shiroi Hana reviews
Always, we ask to be remembered. Yet now I ask of you to forget, so that you can embrace your sky once more, and me the memory of a flower that I never received. A semi-futuristic tale.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,428 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-8-07 - Complete
12. Nautilus reviews
What do you remember? What do you want to keep by your side? The coast in the past, the city in the now, the unknown in the future. Sun-kissed skin, PlayStations, sleepy afternoons, and the memory of a spiral shell in a rock pool. Implied M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,531 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-5-07 - Complete
13. A Pocket Full of Love reviews
It probably is all about truth, and not just during Christmas. About what you would rather do, and tell the one you have been cherishing all this time. Anyway Christmas itself would be a good excuse. A yuletide short. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,332 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-25-06 - Complete
14. The Rhododendron Trail
On hiatus. When a quaint pixie girl stumbles through his bedroom window one moonlit night, Rainer finds himself linking together pieces of both past and present, magic and mundane, in a curious journey around his realm.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,122 - Published: 8-8-06
15. Peppermint Dreams reviews
Thirteen year old Jack, still haunted by a rape incident one month past, continues seeking consultation from his psychiatrist, who relieves him of the trauma yet, this time, helps himself to his young patient as well, in one twisted secrecy.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,217 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-11-06 - Complete
16. Checkered Plastic Lunchbox reviews
A disconnected tale of one room, two unnamed persons, thirty-six handmade breakfasts, and the thousand things left unsaid. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,343 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-25-06 - Complete
17. The Anteros Complex reviews
Where a love untold arises from behind a mask, lost in a golden masquerade. Where we pretend in song and dance, just so you can give me a chance, even though you won't know it is me. Where we are, at least, until the night dies... M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,690 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2-14-06 - Complete
18. Rakuen reviews
A paradise garden that once was. A paradise garden that kindled one delicate relationship — one that began with a mistaken kiss, and ended with a poignant refusal. A paradise garden that never again would be. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,253 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-11-06 - Complete
19. Fondue reviews
One pot of melted chocolate. One plate of strawberries. Plus your best friend in a bunny costume. How can this potpourri not end up in some sweet indulgence? A high-calorie fic. M/M slash.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,776 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-25-05 - Complete
20. Trigger Happy Generation reviews
How utterly perplexing that we are growing up in a world of candid moments, captured in filmless cameras and merciless bullets. Smile away.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-2-05 - Complete
21. Midnight Rambles reviews
I sleepwalk a lot. Fortunately, I always manage to get back to bed eventually. Unfortunately, it's HIS bed that I usually end up in. Fortunately, he doesn't mind too much. Unfortunately... M/M slash.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,548 - Reviews: 49 - Published: 11-11-05 - Complete
22. The Giftmaster reviews
Why are so many birthday gifts nowadays store-bought and not self-crafted? A story of handmade cards and paper flowers.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,258 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-9-05 - Complete
23. The Final Rhapsody reviews
Were your gestures to me real, or did I imagine them all? Did you give up your life just to fulfill this selfish little wish of mine? Did you have to? Implied M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,947 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-05 - Complete
24. Eclipsed Yesterdays reviews
Why do you apologise after breaking your promises? Why do you not keep them in the first place? Why do you see only when all is over and gone? A modern reference to the story of Icarus, who this time finds his sanctuary in a shaded star.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,360 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-10-05 - Complete
25. White Silk Ribbon reviews
A long strip of silken material draped itself on my shoulders, and smoothly slid around the back of my neck. In the privacy of a deserted library Mizu discovers the thrills of a secret encounter, close contact, and playing with an unseen fire. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,253 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-31-04 - Complete
26. Ace of Spades reviews
His eyes shimmered with an undesired invitation, glowed with an unknown motive. A dark game of bridge reveals hidden desires that run rampant beneath an innocent surface. Requires some knowledge in bridge. M/M slash.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,097 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-24-04 - Complete
27. Murmur reviews
Like an intricate chain of broken wind chimes his wings shatter, and he plummets headlong towards the ground far below, along with the shining splinters of night.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,606 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-04 - Complete
28. Shadow of the Crane reviews
The aftermath to Leave. Perhaps you will never know what it is like to lose someone you love. And perhaps you will never know if he — or she — is feeling the same way as you are, somewhere far, far away.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,993 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-8-03 - Complete
29. Mannequin reviews
"Can you move?" he asked, quite innocently. The painted lips did not curl up at the corners, the eyes did not blink in reply. He waited for an answer, and it never came. A story of a boy and a lady in a window.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,506 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-30-03 - Complete
30. Bendable Moonlight reviews
I don't believe in guardian angels. I seriously don't. And I can't imagine a girl in strange, long dresses and a bluebird appearing in the dead of the night as one, either...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,715 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-5-03 - Complete
31. Enjoy the Silence reviews
Winding my way through the maze of reality — unseen, unheard, unspoken. The desire to talk finally dies down, and I end up in a world of lies and eternal silence.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,820 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-5-02 - Complete
32. Spotlight reviews
Once a nobody, now a rising star. Once a somebody, now a total stranger. A tale of fame and childhood love.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,849 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-9-02 - Complete
33. Leave reviews
The years the two of them spent together — as enemies, as friends, and as something more. An outline of a platonic relationship, which ends in eternal departure.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,228 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-8-02 - Complete