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Author has written 36 stories for General, Love, Spiritual, Romance, Essay, and Religion. If you've come here, it's probably because I've reviewed your work, and you're looking for something to read/review in kind. My recommendations: Human Requisites Love, At The End of World Motive Firecracker Third Weekend The Rise of Reasonable Men Those are your best bets. Reviews are more than welcome, flames and non-flames, and I will review your work in kind. If I am reviewing one of your work, note that I can be at times a harsher critic than most, but I mean well, and hope to see everyone and anyone improve. | |||||||||
1. essayessayEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,243 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-06 - Published: 9-20-062. clotelhumor in clotelEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,504 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-13-06 - Published: 9-13-063. The Barbarian Invasions, or a party for Dante reviewsOur houses burn as a favor He returns.Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-23-03 - Published: 12-23-034. Love, At The End of The World » reviewsVessels of addiction, betrayal and self-hatred converge upon an innocent woman. Rated for graphic sexual content.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,525 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-17-03 - Published: 4-4-035. Execution reviewsMichael traveled to the darkest corner of humanity, where he believe his son is evil, and only he can kill him.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 741 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-036. Smoke reviewsThere's at least one thing to love about Jenny. Rated for sexual content.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-037. American Women » reviewsA look at the ugly truths of modern dating.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,363 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 9-8-038. The Meltdown of the Democratic Party reviewsHow elitism, arrogance and phony utopias is driving liberals into submissionEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,606 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 12-13-039. A Switch of the Wind reviewsA teen confronts his sinful father with a stunning violent act. Rated for violence and cursing.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-0310. Motive » reviewsTrent could have been a college football star. Instead, he's going to rape Sidney Ashford. Why? Inside the mind of a teenager.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,557 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 9-8-03 - Published: 4-6-0311. Third Weekend »Father. Daughter. Football. Medieval knights. Leather coats. Master Maids. Love. Hate. Divorce. Yeah, it all comes together. Just read it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,317 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-8-03 - Published: 8-18-0312. Human Requisites » reviewsEver wanna to stalk somebody? David did. And Dani was a willing target. The start of a different kind of love: Black. White. Big Mammals. Cigarettes. Chess. Football. And Bridget Fonda.Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,688 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-15-03 - Published: 3-28-0313. Beatdown reviewsA short, nasty little number about a group murder.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 706 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-0314. Today's Temporary! reviewsIt's a humiliating job. Somebody has to temp it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 826 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-10-03 - Published: 8-10-0315. Anastasia reviewsRedemption and the Miss America pageant.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-03 - Published: 8-6-0316. The Mall Girls of Dirty Pop » reviewsA lame guy gets into one misadventure after another amidst the fashion show that is an afternoon at the outdoor mall. Short read, great laugh, profanity in all the right places.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,901 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0317. A Death In The Family reviewsA woman, her husband and their youngest daughter deal with the life-altering decision of another family member.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0318. Firecracker » reviewsA story of Little League baseball, sibling rivalries, first crushes and the black sheep of every family -- Uncle Ray. A little love, humor, pain and dirt clods for everyone.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,535 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 3-28-0319. W reviewsCali, Cali, Cali: The heat, the hotels, the women, the celebs, the food, the weather, the glitter, the life.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0320. Shadows of Atlanta reviewsBeyond the southern corporate sheen is the absurd, the profound and the obsessed of AtlantaGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,056 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0321. Thanksgiving, In the Land of Bulimia reviewsAnother day in food paradise...but this is no ordinary day.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,052 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0322. The Rise Of Reasonable Men »A powerful man hides the secret of a devastating rape. Five years later, the past returns...with a vengeance.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,200 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 4-4-0323. Prairie GirlsTruths of a different, simpler kindGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 986 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0324. The Saturday Matinee Idol » reviewsA gameday in the life of a college quarterback, whose thoughts return to the one woman beyond his reach. More literary than "sporty," so don't let the subject scary you too much.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,043 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-28-0325. Babygirl Done Lost It » reviewsA meditation on showers, Jim Morrison, cinnamon hard candy, football, crank, parties and shag carpets. Rated for sexual themes and violence. Please read and review. More chapters to come.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,740 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-27-0326. Holidome » reviewsA man and his mistress. A wife and her cousin. A daughter and her gay idol. An affair. Suicide. Parents. Kids. Art. Coffee. Tacos. Pizza. Pools. Putt-putt. Holidome. Rated for theme and a small scene of violence. Please read and review! More chapters to fGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,689 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-27-0327. Girl, Born Again reviewsLainie Edwards found Christ in college. She fights herself to keep Him close to her heart -- if, in fact, this is the Christ worth keeping. Three days in the life of born again believer. Read, review, argue!Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-28-03 - Published: 3-28-0328. Move on baby reviewsThe new trophy wife has.....issues. Have to read to end to understand the whole scope. Please read and review.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-27-03 - Published: 3-27-0329. Faint Lines of Distinction reviewsAfter of the fall of stardom, the life of an out-of-fashion runway modelGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-0330. Rape, by inducement of jelly reviewsBeautiful girls, malls, jelly, mothers, daughters, jelly, cowboys, plankton, jelly, rape, jelly.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,290 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-02 - Published: 8-26-0231. A serial killer's thesis statement reviewsThe controlled inner rant of a methodical maniacGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-26-02 - Published: 8-26-0232. The luxury of fat, as seen by a beautiful girl reviewsYou must choose to be a museum piece (me) or a grotesque, abhorrent, trench-foot fatty (you). Men do not like the in between.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 522 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-0233. The paradox of beauty, the paradox of punctuation. reviewsWords, from the most beautiful girl you've ever read.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,203 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-0234. Death by Telephone reviewsA common man snaps, leaving tragedy in the wake of his work-induced mental breakdownGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,957 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-0235. The Columbine Solution reviewsA warped world post-Columbine...and the disatrous resultsGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,486 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-0236. bulimia binge and purge reviewsthis is not -- not -- your after-school special account of an eating disorder. It's personal, weird, angry, complex and real. Well, hyperreal.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
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