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since: 08-22-02, id: 257317
Author has written 36 stories for General, Love, Spiritual, Romance, Essay, and Religion.
If you've come here, it's probably because I've reviewed your work, and you're looking for something to read/review in kind.

My recommendations:

Human Requisites
Love, At The End of World
Motive
Firecracker
Third Weekend
The Rise of Reasonable Men

Those are your best bets. Reviews are more than welcome, flames and non-flames, and I will review your work in kind.

If I am reviewing one of your work, note that I can be at times a harsher critic than most, but I mean well, and hope to see everyone and anyone improve. 

Stories Authored: (36) . Favorite Authors: (2) . Favorite Stories: (0) . C2 Communities (0) .


1. essay
essay
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,243 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-06 - Published: 9-20-06
2. clotel
humor in clotel
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,504 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-13-06 - Published: 9-13-06
3. The Barbarian Invasions, or a party for Dante reviews
Our houses burn as a favor He returns.
Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-23-03 - Published: 12-23-03
4. Love, At The End of The World » reviews
Vessels of addiction, betrayal and self-hatred converge upon an innocent woman. Rated for graphic sexual content.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,525 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-17-03 - Published: 4-4-03
5. Execution reviews
Michael traveled to the darkest corner of humanity, where he believe his son is evil, and only he can kill him.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 741 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-03
6. Smoke reviews
There's at least one thing to love about Jenny. Rated for sexual content.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-03
7. American Women » reviews
A look at the ugly truths of modern dating.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,363 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 9-8-03
8. The Meltdown of the Democratic Party reviews
How elitism, arrogance and phony utopias is driving liberals into submission
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,606 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 12-13-03
9. A Switch of the Wind reviews
A teen confronts his sinful father with a stunning violent act. Rated for violence and cursing.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-03
10. Motive » reviews
Trent could have been a college football star. Instead, he's going to rape Sidney Ashford. Why? Inside the mind of a teenager.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,557 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 9-8-03 - Published: 4-6-03
11. Third Weekend »
Father. Daughter. Football. Medieval knights. Leather coats. Master Maids. Love. Hate. Divorce. Yeah, it all comes together. Just read it.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,317 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-8-03 - Published: 8-18-03
12. Human Requisites » reviews
Ever wanna to stalk somebody? David did. And Dani was a willing target. The start of a different kind of love: Black. White. Big Mammals. Cigarettes. Chess. Football. And Bridget Fonda.
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,688 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-15-03 - Published: 3-28-03
13. Beatdown reviews
A short, nasty little number about a group murder.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 706 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-03
14. Today's Temporary! reviews
It's a humiliating job. Somebody has to temp it.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 826 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-10-03 - Published: 8-10-03
15. Anastasia reviews
Redemption and the Miss America pageant.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-03 - Published: 8-6-03
16. The Mall Girls of Dirty Pop » reviews
A lame guy gets into one misadventure after another amidst the fashion show that is an afternoon at the outdoor mall. Short read, great laugh, profanity in all the right places.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,901 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
17. A Death In The Family reviews
A woman, her husband and their youngest daughter deal with the life-altering decision of another family member.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-03
18. Firecracker » reviews
A story of Little League baseball, sibling rivalries, first crushes and the black sheep of every family -- Uncle Ray. A little love, humor, pain and dirt clods for everyone.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,535 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 3-28-03
19. W reviews
Cali, Cali, Cali: The heat, the hotels, the women, the celebs, the food, the weather, the glitter, the life.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-03
20. Shadows of Atlanta reviews
Beyond the southern corporate sheen is the absurd, the profound and the obsessed of Atlanta
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,056 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-03
21. Thanksgiving, In the Land of Bulimia reviews
Another day in food paradise...but this is no ordinary day.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,052 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-03
22. The Rise Of Reasonable Men »
A powerful man hides the secret of a devastating rape. Five years later, the past returns...with a vengeance.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,200 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 4-4-03
23. Prairie Girls
Truths of a different, simpler kind
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 986 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-03
24. The Saturday Matinee Idol » reviews
A gameday in the life of a college quarterback, whose thoughts return to the one woman beyond his reach. More literary than "sporty," so don't let the subject scary you too much.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,043 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-28-03
25. Babygirl Done Lost It » reviews
A meditation on showers, Jim Morrison, cinnamon hard candy, football, crank, parties and shag carpets. Rated for sexual themes and violence. Please read and review. More chapters to come.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,740 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-27-03
26. Holidome » reviews
A man and his mistress. A wife and her cousin. A daughter and her gay idol. An affair. Suicide. Parents. Kids. Art. Coffee. Tacos. Pizza. Pools. Putt-putt. Holidome. Rated for theme and a small scene of violence. Please read and review! More chapters to f
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,689 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 3-27-03
27. Girl, Born Again reviews
Lainie Edwards found Christ in college. She fights herself to keep Him close to her heart -- if, in fact, this is the Christ worth keeping. Three days in the life of born again believer. Read, review, argue!
Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-28-03 - Published: 3-28-03
28. Move on baby reviews
The new trophy wife has.....issues. Have to read to end to understand the whole scope. Please read and review.
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-27-03 - Published: 3-27-03
29. Faint Lines of Distinction reviews
After of the fall of stardom, the life of an out-of-fashion runway model
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-03 - Published: 3-25-03
30. Rape, by inducement of jelly reviews
Beautiful girls, malls, jelly, mothers, daughters, jelly, cowboys, plankton, jelly, rape, jelly.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,290 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-26-02 - Published: 8-26-02
31. A serial killer's thesis statement reviews
The controlled inner rant of a methodical maniac
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-26-02 - Published: 8-26-02
32. The luxury of fat, as seen by a beautiful girl reviews
You must choose to be a museum piece (me) or a grotesque, abhorrent, trench-foot fatty (you). Men do not like the in between.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 522 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
33. The paradox of beauty, the paradox of punctuation. reviews
Words, from the most beautiful girl you've ever read.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,203 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
34. Death by Telephone reviews
A common man snaps, leaving tragedy in the wake of his work-induced mental breakdown
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,957 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
35. The Columbine Solution reviews
A warped world post-Columbine...and the disatrous results
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,486 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
36. bulimia binge and purge reviews
this is not -- not -- your after-school special account of an eating disorder. It's personal, weird, angry, complex and real. Well, hyperreal.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-25-02 - Published: 8-25-02
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