I'm in high school, I live in Alberta. One of my many interests is writing.

I would appreciate if you take a few minutes to review some of my work (that is, of what's posted - which is a partial representation). I always appreciate constructive critcism.

I leave perhaps too many honest, critical reviews. If you received one and don't like it, listen to all those who utter the perpetual refrain of 'good job' and/or 'you're a good writer', and remain happily ignorant.


Kiwii 

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Sort: Category . Published . Updated . Title . Words . Chapters . Reviews . Status .

1. Random reviews

Short and sweet - only 8 lines. It links several ideas together in an interesting way... have a look.

General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-7-03 - Published: 1-7-03

2. Butterfly reviews

Haiku with verses - I'm not sure if it can be done and be technically called haiku still, but I did it and here it is: a haiku with verses describing a butterfly.

Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-7-03 - Published: 1-7-03

3. The King's Joke reviews

About a traveller, and a joke... what happens if you don't understand.

General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-16-02 - Published: 11-16-02