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VanFanel3
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since: 10-10-02, id: 279241, Profile edited: 06-14-08
country: United States
Author has written 39 stories for Life, Love, General, Religion, and Song.

Haven't written narrative fiction in a while. I do poetry a lot more often so I've put some up here; hope you like it. I write using fragmented phrases that I write in lists and then I piece together what makes sense and is effective.

A lot of my poems are very short which I guess comes from eastern influence although I hardly ever write proper haiku. My favorite poet is William Shakespeare. When I read his sonnets I feel like he's reading my mind and then telling me things about myself and my situations that I didn't know.

Sorry for my somewhat uninspiring user name. I made this account a long long time ago when I first was getting into Escaflowne (I still think its a masterpiece) and I wanted Van Fanel as my user name even if it meant making it pointless by adding a 3 because someone had beaten me to it.

I'm in a band/duo called Winter Boat if you'd like to hear our songs go to www.myspace.com/winterboat
If you'd like to download high quality better mixed mp3s of the songs for free go to www.download.com/winterboat

Fiction press has now made it possible for me to retain the formatting of my notepad stuff by just re-editing the content when I upload documents. Shweetness.

I sometimes might reply directly to a review but usually I'll just get around to reviewing something you've written soon after.

If all you know of poetry is internet poetry from users such as myself then you really really really need to read these guys because your missing more than you know:

T.S. Eliot
Carl Sandburg
Emily Dickinson
Edgar Allen Poe
Rudyard Kipling
Lord Byron
Percy Bysshe Shelley
John Keats
William Butler Yeats
Dante Alighieri
W.H. Auden
Robert Frost
Po Chu-I
Lewis Carroll
Homer
Sappho
Aeschylus
Sophocles
Euripides
Tu Fu
Li Po
Geoffrey Chaucer
William Shakespeare
Matsuo Basho
Walt Whitman
Mother Goose (don't think your too sophisticated)
Martial
Lucretius
Omar Khayyam
Su Tung Po
Issa
Ryokan
Beowulf (Unknown Author, Essential Poem)
Phillip Sidney
Robert Burns
The Norse Sagas
William Wordsworth
The Medieval Miracle Plays
Francois Villon
Alexander Puskin
Hesiod
Aristophanes
Pindar
Ovid
Virgil
Wang Wei
The Manyoshu
Ferdowsi
Rumi
Sadi
Hafiz
Kalidasi
Edmund Spencer
John Donne
John Milton
Robert Herrick
William Blake
Robert Browning
Robert Lewis Stevenson
Torquato Tasso
Francesco Petrach
Ludovico Ariosto
Johann Goethe
Charles Baudelaire
E.E. Cummings
Marge Piercy
Allen Ginsburg
Seamus Heaney
Langston Hughes
Claude McKay
Gwendolyn Brooks
Paul Laurence Dunbar
Phillis Wheatley
James A. Emmanuel
Sidney Lanier
D.H. Lawrence
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Herman Melville
Sir Thomas Wyatt
Edwin Arlington Robinson
Shel Silverstein
Lord Alfred Tennyson
François Villon
C.K Williams
William Carlos Williams

And probably many more...

Such as BIBLICAL POETRY
The ESV translation of Job is wonderful.


Stories Authored: (39) . Favorite Authors: (0) . Favorite Stories: (0) . C2 Communities (0) .


1. When You Wake reviews
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Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-08 - Published: 6-14-08
2. Sad Man
Its about wanting a kind of answer to your problem that did not, does not, and never will exist. This actually sounds like a "The Streets" rap when I read it out loud to myself. I find that kinda funny.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-5-08 - Published: 6-5-08
3. What Did You Say? reviews
Another poem by me criticizing the human being's tendency to deny reality. His cluctching to the fantasy that his ego has any kind of control over anything at all.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-14-08 - Published: 4-14-08
4. Needs as Vanity reviews
A very quick scratch lyric I wrote for a melody over a guitar riff.
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-14-08 - Published: 4-14-08
5. Chaos
The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away. Blessed be the name of the Lord."
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-14-08 - Published: 4-14-08
6. Context
I don't really want to explain this one.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-6-08 - Published: 2-6-08
7. Folded Napkin reviews
I wrote this on a napkin...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-30-08 - Published: 1-30-08
8. Walk With Your Head
Hey, it's actually pretty structured!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08
9. It Once Was Filled
It rhymes but still not a lot of structured meter.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08
10. All Of My Languages reviews
Wrote this during a rain storm while listening to Fog by Radiohead.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-12-08 - Published: 1-12-08
11. Levitation Through The Breakers reviews
A short bit of surreal imagery.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
12. The Stilted Tower
Unreachable but why?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
13. Color Coded Resonses reviews
Blaming someone else for your own inhibitions.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
14. TwentyTwo People
I got the number twentytwo from a guy's shirt in front of me in class. No real significance.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
15. Dream Melody
A dream I had.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
16. Undivided Attention
You can seem totally unaware and yet be more alert to the situation than you've ever been in your life with anything else.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
17. Single Stranded Liar reviews
When you lie, it seems like everything knows.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
18. Shapely Pointless Details
A lot of time we are stupid, blind, and like to focus on meaningless details. Let's shape up.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
19. Willingly Caged
This is specifically talking about being stuck on a certain topic when writing, but can be applied across the board in life.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
20. Sentimental
Where to store all this baggage?
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
21. Change
Changing can be very very hard. Sometimes impossible.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
22. Moments With You
Maybe some addictions are good.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
23. Brigand
I find this one slightly odd.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
24. Apathy
This short thing is quite cruel. It's about when you know you've done something wrong but you just don't care. The relationship context gives a little more bite than stealing a cookie.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
25. Stone Temple Walls
Thought of this during a service in a stone church.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
26. Striped and Blinded reviews
Another poem about inhibitions and how irrational yet powerful they are.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
27. Stairwell Fireflies
It's poem.And I wrote it.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
28. Honestly
This is based on the let's just be friends dilemma. There are things beyond physical affection and obvious romantic gushing that make a relationship what it is. There are certain kinds of honesty that don't work in normal friendships.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
29. Same Shade Black
Don't have anything to say about it really.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
30. Musical Silence
It's like in David Copperfield: Miss Murdstone was between Dora and me in the pew but I heard her sing, and the congregation vanished. A sermon was delivered about Dora, of course and I am afraid that is all I know of the service.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
31. Shoe Shine Skyline
This reminds me of the DCFC song Styrofoam Plates: It's no stretch to say you were not quite a father but a donor of seeds to a poor single mother that would raise us alone, we never saw the money that went down your throat through the hole in your belly.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
32. What are Eyes to a Soul?
Everyone tries to say that they can see who someone truly is by the eyes.B.S.Everyone likes themselves too much and thinks they're so perceptive. You know a lot less than you think.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
33. Unwanted Wantings reviews
This poem talks about the first rumblings of interest in that other person that seem to hunt you down whether you wish it to or not.Not sure if I'm happy with this one although I never seem to get tired of the cliche I can't get you out of my mind.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
34. Fool
Seemingly small inhibitions can lead to large disappointments. This is from the perspective of someone whose love was not realized because he could not look beyond his love for self.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
35. Soon To Be None
There's a lot of abstract feelings in this one. I don't know if I'm happy with the repeated form simplicity being in there.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
36. What is a Mask?
Kinda philosophical but then the end takes a sort of sharp turn. Don't know if I like the turn as a whole.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
37. Communication
This made no sense to me when I wrote it, but the more I read the more I see what I was saying.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
38. Halfway Gone reviews
This was a wild card for my english composition portfolio.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
39. Traveler
An old poem about trying to find yourself that I wrote when I was 14.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-25-04 - Published: 3-25-04
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