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Raven's Wing
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since: 11-26-02, id: 300064
Hello all,
I don't know why you are reading this, but you are. FYI I am a 16 year old girl who hopes to pursue a career in writing. I love to write fan-fic as a way to improve my writing skills and think out of the box, actually getting into the characters heads. For now, I just write Newsies fanfiction. It is good fun and I really enjoy it. Mostly writing about Spot Conlon, who was played by Gabriel Damon.
In my humble opinion, he is drop dead sexy in that movie. Anything else I have ever really seen him in, he isn't that great, but in Newsies.... Woo hoo! Also beside him being beyond fine in that movie, he has that additude that just makes me drool. I am a very strong personality and I got for the dominate male. Call me a freak, but I do.(also Gabe has a teddy bear named Pear, awwwwwwww) Anyway, besides being a complete loser, obsessed, freak, over that... I like to... umm....
Did I mention that I like writing Newsies fanfiction? With Spot Conlon in it?

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Stories
The One Shot Collection
There are all of my one part stories that are just one part. Well that was redundant. Oh well, allow me to state again that these are just one part....

Fallen Hero: Another short angst fiction. Blah blah blah. You know the drill. I don't really like this one, but it is third person view of Jack. Set after the strike.

Bring me to Life: This is my first ever song-fic based on the wonderful song by Evanescence called "Bring me to Life". If you haven't heard it, go dl it right now. Anyway, it is another Jack POV and I really wanted to write it happy and have everything work out, but it turned all dark and angsty. Stupid Spot!muse it making everything I write angst!

The Greatest Thrill
Another one part Jack fiction. This one just popped out of nowhere. Actually it popped out while I was watching American Psycho... which is a great movie... Christian Bale is so hot in it. -drools then smack herself- Sorry, about that. Anyway, this is a one part fiction from Jack's POV. It is a different take on Jack and kind of interesting IMHO.

Short Fictions
These are all stories that are only going to be five chapters or less. They don't fit into the one shot, but they really aren't whole stories either. Normally these are angst fiction that are told from a few points of view.


Bulletholes and Broken hearts: My first angst piece. Jack goes to Santa Fe to get things ready for him and Sarah, but it takes a little longer than planned. In fact it takes two years for things to get settled, when he returns to New York, he finds much has changed. The changes are so dractic that it drives Jack to extreme measures. What are those changes and drastic measures? Read to find out. ^_^ Warning: Character Deaths - Mild Language *Finished*

Long Stories
These stories are well... long. They are full of content and take a long to to write. I enjoy them and I have them broken up into different groups.

The Brookyln Fictions
These fictions are all about Spot and his gang and all of the going ons in Brooklyn.

Blind Spot: My first Spot Conlons fic. Spot Colons is an free, strong, stubborn boy and the most respected and feared newsy in all of New York. It is set one year after the strike. The Queens' boys are causing problems for Spot and his Brooklyn compainions, but what can he do? In a battle, Spot is blinded and loses everything. His power, his reputation, his way of life, his source of money, everything. The only way to find the answers he seeks is to look in his blind spot. This is the sequel to "Frostbitten"(I just thought that the title kinda has double meaning, woo hoo! go me!)

Frostbitten: This story started out as a one piece angst fic then evolved into a series. Previously titled, The Taste of Hell, this prequel to Blind Spot is a personal favorite. Being a newsie isn't an easy life, for some it is hell. For the Brooklyn newsies, it is just one blow after another in the bitter winter. A strange girl who goes by the alias of Frost appears seemingly out of nowhere. Her heart is as stone, her touch is cold as winter frost, her words are cryptic, her expressions few, she answers my questions only to leave me with more....(This story clarifies many points in Blind Spot that may seem strange or not make sence)

The Manhattan Stories
These stories follow the progression of things that happen in Manhattan with Jack and the boys. I personally like Brooklyn fictions better, but whatever....

All In A Whisper: This story has been removed for complete redo-age. Sorry for the trouble. This is an original fiction (well it is fan-fiction but the plot is mine!) it is set in the winter right after the strike. Trouble is brewing in the Manhattan area and no one can pin-point who is causing it. The newsies seem to be taking a large amount of the hits. It seems to be nothing more than a bunch of pranks, but when one of the boys goes missing and one ends up dead, they can't help but feel something bigger is behind all of this. A mysterious girl who has never made a sound in their presence may be the key to all of this, but she isn't talking. How can they solve this mystery and get revenge? And how will they be able to realize that the answer is all in a whisper?

Basic Story Stats

All In a Whisper: Chapters: XX Reviews: XX Status: Unfinished
Blind Spot: Chapters: 12 Reviews: 55 Status: Unfinished
Bring Me To Life Chapters: 1 Reviews: 4 Status: Finished
Bulletholes and Broken Hearts: Chapters: 2 Reviews: 8 Status: Finished
Fallen Hero Chapters: 1 Reviews: 5 Status: Finished
Frostbitten: Chapters: 11 Reviews: 57 Status: Unfinished
The Greatest Thrill Chapters: 1 Reviews: 4 Status: Finished

Update Report:

Blind Spot: look for an update on Wednesday the 12th
Frostbitten: Look for an update on Monday the 10th.

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Conversations with non-vampires:

Heather: Well you can't have Spot because I want Spot
Me: I want Spot more than you! You can have Jack.
Heather: Ewww, I don't want Jack!
Me: Why not, he's a stud!
Heather: If he is such a stud, why don't you take him?
Me: Because I know you want him.
Heather: Ewww! No!
Me: Fine, you can have Spot, after all, Jack gets really, really, really hot when he gets older. (think American Psycho, and as if he wasn't hot in newsies...)
Heather: Oh wait, good point, I want Jack!

My Brother: Why are you watching that stupid movie again?
Me: Newsies isn't stupid!
Brother: Yeah it is, you must think one of them is hot.
Me: Duh.
Brother: Which one?
Me: All of them!
Brother: That is so gross!
Me: Is it as gross as your collection of Eliza Dushku pictures?
Brother: Whoa, what collection?
Me: The one that you are hiding in the bottom drawer of your dresser.
Brother: You know, this movie isn't all that bad....


Drama class quotes:
Samantha:Anthony, you're going to call me about the meeting all right? You're the one planning it aren't you? You know, the one with Micah? Hello? Are you listening to me?
Me: He isn't listening, are you Ampherny? *Pokes Anthony and he jerks his head up from whatever he was writing on small scraps of paper*
Anthony: Huh? What? Oh! Sam! Yeah, sure.... *looks back down at the papers*
Me: I bet he couldn't tell you what you just said.
Samantha:Probably not....
Anthony: *repeats Sam's question almost word for word*
Me & Samantha: *blink*blink*
Anthony *big smile*: See! I would make a great husband! *goes back to scribbling*

Justin: ... and so I've decided that my guitars name should be Jenny.
Me: So you're naming it after your girlfriend?
Justin: Yeah! No wait, she isn't my girlfriend.
Me: she isn't your girlfriend, but your going out, and your naming your guitar after her.
Justin: No, we're courting and yes I am naming my guitar after her.
Me: So are you going to name your car after me?
Justin: No I already named that after Anthony, he is my gay lover.
Me: Whoa, what?
Justin: Yeah, it's true! Hey Anthony, come here! *Anthony walks over* Hey tell her you're my lover.
Anthony: He's my lover! *Puts his hand over Justin's mouth and pretends to make out with him*
Me: Oh wow, I didn't need to see that. *after Anthony walks away* So, what can you name after me?
Justin: How about my toothbrush?


Paul: (After having a peice of Eclipse gum) WHOA! You know that gum is strong when you can feel it in your NOSE! (points to his nose)
Me: (gives him a weird look before putting three peices in my mouth)
Paul: (whacks me on the back of the head)Spit them out woman! What are you trying to do? Kill yourself?

Kaitlyn: Omigosh I just broke a nail!
Josh: Omigosh you guys! I did too!
Me: Josh?
Josh: Yes?
Me: Shaddup


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Favorite Movie-Musical Quotes:

Amercan Psycho:

Patrick:I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

Waiter: Would you like to hear today's specials?
Patrick: Not if you want to keep your spleen.

Patrick: There are no more barriers to cross all I have in common with the uncontrollable and the insane, the vicious and the evil, all the mayhem I have caused and my utter indifference toward it I have now surpassed. my pain is constant and sharp and I do not hope for a better world for anyone, infact I want my pain to be inflicted on others I want no one to escape, but even after admitting this there is no catharsis my punishment continuos to allude me and I gain no deeper knowledge of myself no new knowledge can be extracted from my telling, This Confession Has Meant Nothing.

Newsies:

Davie: Why's ya come back?
Jack: Well I guess I can't be somet'ing I ain't.
Davie: What's that? A scab?
Jack: No, smart.

Jack: If we go on strike then we are a union. Right?
Davie: No. We're just a bunch of angry kids with no money.

Crutchy: It's this brain of mine, it's always makin' mistakes...it's got a mind of its own.

Jack: We was beat when we was born.

Spot: Your Honor, I object!
Judge E.A. Monaham: On what grounds?
Spot: On the grounds of Brooklyn!

Jack: So what do you say, Spot?
Spot: I say... that what you say... is what I say.

Racetrack: Look at this! Baby born with two heads... must be from Brooklyn.

Jack: For a dreamer night's the only time of day.

Joseph and his Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat:

Joseph: But I don't speak Egyptian very well!

Narator: Potiphar had very few cares, He was one of Egypt millionaires, Having made a fortune buying shares in -
Potiphar: Pyramids.

Brothers: Being told we're also-rans, Does not makes us Joseph fans!

People on Fan Fiction that deserve Shout outs:
Ali because even though her stories chapters are short, they are sweet and normally pretty good. ^_^ I like her fiction, and she wrote a Spot fluff! Something I have always wanted to do, but have never been able to acomplish. -melts with envy- Oh yeah, and she reviews some of my stories!
The Omniscient Bookseller Two words: Genius. Well okay, that is one word, but that is the only one that I could think of.
skittles For faithfully reviewing me. I want to read your stories, so post them!
Ireland O'Reily For being a faithful reader of pretty much all of my fictions! I love you for it!
Kaylee For always wanting more, no matter how badly the last chapter sucked!
Annie: She gives me enthusiastic reviews on Blind Spot! I don't think I have ever gotten two thumbs AND two big toes up before....
The Illusion Mage: Last but not least, the frikking genius writer that I love. This girl is amazing, simply amazing, if you think I am good, read her stuff, you will be like, haha! Raven SUCKS! Read her stuff, NOW!
Silent Breeze: she gives me awesome reviews that make me fall out of my chair I laugh so hard. I love her, and you should too! 

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