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since: 12-07-02, id: 306080, Profile Updated: 02-28-08
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Author has written 13 stories for Supernatural, General, Friendship, General, and Young Adult.
Name
Andrea

Birthday
9/12/86

Favorite genre
Anything supernatural and dramatic (lots of angels/demons, vampires and that sort of thing, with a little romance or something mixed in).

My own writing
It's been a while since I've written something original, and since I've worked on anything I've started. School and work and then role-playing somewhat interfered and I had lost all interest in my writings. Recently, however, I've regained interested and a muse has visited me and inspired December's Touch. That one is the newest and the first one I've been able to complete (and I thought it was going to be My Darling Nocturne)! So, yay for that. -. Right now I'm in the process of revising it. I would have made a whole new story for the revised version, but FicPress basically doesn't allow that. So, I'm integrating the revised chapters in with the old and giving the new ones names so everyone can tell where I've revised up to so far. Any constructive criticism on either the original or the revised chapters would be greatly appreciated.

Story summaries (since those little ones don't cut it)
December's Touch (Complete)
Caresse ran away from home after being attacked and finds herself passing out in the middle of a freezing December rain. When she awakes she finds she is being carried by a very enigmatic man who introduces himself as Lio. He cleans her up, gives her a place to stay, and seems to brush over the strange bite on her wrist. She's very grateful for his kindness, but the longer she stays the more she finds herself sucked into the enigma that is him- curious about his mannerisms, his reasons for taking her in, and why he refuses to tell her anything. And when he does tell her anything his answers only lead to more questions, which he laughs at as he refuses to answer those straight too. What's Caresse to do? Lio is absolutely right when he says she's to stubborn and too morbidly curious to leave.

Fallen
This is the first story I've written that's in first-person. I was experimenting with the voice and POV to see if I could get it down; the plot helped me out greatly I think. Anyway, this one is very apocalyptic. It's about a war being waged between Heaven and Hell, where Heaven gets invaded and essentially loses the battle. The whole of Heaven crashes to the earth, forcing a major shift in reality. With Heaven defeated, Lucifer and his demons rules the universe, and small gaggles of remaining humans are attempting to survive in this new environment. But it's hard, because in this new reality nothing is as it seems. Angels are mutated and hideous, looking more like what Demons should, and the Demons are beautiful, seductive, and quite enjoying feeding the souls of remaining humans.

Gavriel
Gavriel is a vampire. Okay. But he isn't typical. Most vampires enjoy just feeding and killing and moving on. Gavriel enjoys playing with his food to the most sadistic extent. What's a few ripped-out tracheas or crucified people? Gavriel also has something of an Oedipal complex towards his dead mother, whose ghost he is convinced he's seen ...

The Tears of Angels
This one is one whose title I really don't like but I can't think of anything better to call it. I started this in one of my more emo moods (thank God they don't happen so often anymore XD). This one's about Cael, who really does have problem, he just doesn't know how to handle them. So he resorts to cutting and making suicide threats (mostly empty suicide threats). And then there's Ailani. She's the perfect student, daughter, and sometimes sister. She gets all A's, she works hard, and as a result has no social life. Now what could be the result when she is paired up with Cael for an English project?

My Darling Nocturne
Nocturne is an angel who's fallen from Heaven for a crime she doesn't remember committing, and one she didn't understand when she could. She was supposed to go straight to Hell for what she'd done, but somehow only made it halfway there. Now she wanders Earth, confused, lost, and with no memory of who or what she is besides her name. And following closely behind are an angel and a demon, one who would kill her and one who would save her from anything. And mixed up in all of this is Zeke, a cynical 21-year-old who begrudgingly allows himself to be drawn into the whole mess.

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1. Grace
Very short snippet of a chapter from a story I will be writing in the future. For now, this is just a little preview scene. Girl shows up at her best friend's house and he stays with her while she deals with some pretty heavy news. Rated T to be safe.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,094 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-28-08 - Published: 6-28-08
2. December's Touch » reviews
Now in the revision process! Revised chapters are the ones with titles; if the story seems disjointed or if the style doesn't seem to flow between chapters with titles and chapters with no titles, that's why. Thanks to everyone for their critiques!
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 22 - Words: 92,243 - Reviews: 59 - Updated: 2-16-08 - Published: 11-26-07
3. Fallen » reviews
The world became a different place in a single night. Heaven had literally fallen to the earth, forcing a blend of the natural with the supernatural. Angels had mutated into hideous beasts while beautiful Demons, led by Lucifer, were unleashed to lure hum
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,117 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-28-06 - Published: 7-17-05
4. Gavriel » reviews
Gavriel's a young vampire who's just crossed the line into insanity. He is tormented by his mother's voice in his head and he swears he's seen her ghost. He's doing a horrible job of coping and he begins to kill his victims in brutal ways. M for language
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 24,427 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-25-05 - Published: 2-25-04
5. The Tears of Angels » reviews
Cael is the dark, quiet kid that sits in the back of the room, homework incomplete; Ailani is the perfect, straight-A student who hasn't missed a day of school in her life. What do they have in common? The fact that they hate each other.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 24,242 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 6-16-05 - Published: 7-30-04
6. My Darling Nocturne » reviews
She unknowingly committed a crime and was cast from Heaven; she fell, and thus lost her memory. Now Nocturne must deal with the consequences of her naive crime- the amnesia and the monster growing inside her. CHAPTER 25 NOW UP! Please Read and Review!
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 26 - Words: 87,737 - Reviews: 43 - Updated: 9-4-04 - Published: 7-2-03
7. Crawling Shadows reviews
I'm not quite sure where this came from more inspiration from music I guess. Just random phrases all tied together somehow. It's dark ... and typical of me ... R&R please
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-3-04 - Published: 8-3-04
8. The Door Of Your Mind, The Window Of Your Soul reviews
Well, I was listening to a cool song and suddenly all these images started coming to me, so I had to quickly write them down. This, obviously, was the result. The title was too long than FicPress usually allows, but it's at the top of the poem inside.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-21-04 - Published: 5-21-04
9. Mother, Mother reviews
A short poem about 'Mother,' who is an abused woman. One day, she decides to finally take matters into her own hands and end her pain. T for suicide. Please Read and Review
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-8-04 - Published: 5-8-04
10. I Really Enjoyed Killing You reviews
I was cleaning my room and I found some old poetry that I'd written, like, a million years ago when I was into writing 'image poems'. This was the only good one though. T for violence and blood and some cruelty ... I guess ... please R&R
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-3-04 - Published: 5-3-04
11. Fly, Sad Angel reviews
One of my more uplifting pieces. It starts off sad, but it has some encouragement at the end. Pretty much, don't let pain and past hurts stop you. Fly away. You can make it. Plz R&R
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-19-04 - Published: 4-19-04
12. Thank You from me reviews
First spiritual poem I've ever written. It's a thank-you to God for all the things in life that have taught me to appreciate other things. I think it's good; tell me what you think.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-23-04 - Published: 3-23-04
13. To End With Dance reviews
Comparing suicide to a dance and song. There are some hints at selfmutilation, so to be on the safe side it's K.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-19-04 - Published: 3-19-04
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