dabeni21
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since: 12-09-02, id: 307588
country: USA
Author has written 109 stories for Song, General, Love, Manga, and Religion.

My true name is David. Writing lyrics and music is my life. I have a band called Toxic Remedy. I'm 18.

That's pretty much all you need to know. My songs speak for themselves.


1. The Disappearance Of Innocence
This song is about the tragic Atlanta murders. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 11-17-06 - Complete
2. Leader of Deception
This song is ambiguous. Please read it and review. metal up the irons!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 11-15-06 - Complete
3. Fool
Simply a fool once in love.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Published: 10-18-06 - Complete
4. Call Me The Villian
A song I wrote out of anger about how I always have to pretend I am someone I not just to please a so-called friend of mine. Please Read and Review, your opinions are greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 10-3-06
5. Never Fade reviews
A dream that could never be...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-5-06
6. The Locks reviews
All hope has died...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-5-06
7. I Wish I Can reviews
A song about losing someone you love. My heart is in this song.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-26-06
8. Life on the Fast Lane
A song about just living life and living it with no regrets. Inspired by the song Detroit Rock City by Kiss.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 6-22-06
9. Betray Me reviews
A song about how someone you consider close betrays you.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-22-06
10. Prisoner reviews
This song is for all those people who had an addiction of any kind, whether it be drugs, sex, love, anything.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-20-05
11. Die Away reviews
A song about a relationship. Please Read and Review
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-4-05
12. Remember reviews
It's a song about someone who used to love someone, but now just wants to forget them, but can't. Very sad song. Please Read and Review and I'll always return the favor.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 322 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-25-05
13. How I Love Her reviews
Don't let the title fool you. A funny song about a guy who fell in love with a girl, only to find out a deep, dark secret.
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 389 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-5-05
14. Fragile Skin reviews
Break away from your skin
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-21-05
15. Jack Daniel's reviews
A story about someone who uses an alcoholic beverage to stay sane and realize his own problems.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-19-05
16. Hit the Ground reviews
A song about a person who has lost it all for all the lies they've said. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-5-05
17. What You Do To Me reviews
This song brought to you my band "My Paradox." Please Read and Review our work. This song is about how one feels when a feeling one thought they felt only causes them pain and sadness.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-16-05
18. Forgotten Image reviews
I got the title of my xanga site. Yea, kinda geeky. But the song really is straight from the heart. It's about how I had this friend, but they've really hurt me. Please R&R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-25-04
19. Shattered reviews
A depressing song on how you think you know a friend, but they turn out to be the enemy. Please R & R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-18-04
20. Blood Rose reviews
Please R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-17-04
21. Never Again
A song about how someone kepts constantly getting hurt, and they don't really know why.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Published: 10-17-04
22. Can They Save Us Now reviews
A complicated song about depression. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-6-04
23. One reviews
A song about someone who makes me happy and sad all at once. Please read and review my work.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 316 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-6-04
24. All But You reviews
A song about a girl I liked, and how she put me through hell, but I still think about her. Please Read and Review my work.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-6-04
25. Good Bye reviews
I once had a friend. But I needed to say good bye. This song is dedicated to that friend who I miss everyday.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-3-04
26. Do You Smile reviews
Hello there everyone. Wow, it's been a while since I've posted something new here in . Well, I hope this song does not disappoint. This song is for a friend I have, who is going through a tough time, but is hurting me by not telling me wha
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-24-04
27. In Your Eyes reviews
This is a song I wrote for a friend who is going through a rough time. Please Read and Review. I just noticed this is one of the very rare happy, full of hope songs.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-6-04
28. The Great Depression reviews
A song about my friends and me, and how we used to be the closests group of friends but now things have changed and everything's falling apart. Please Read and Review cause I'll do it for you!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-5-04
29. The Right Time reviews
The tune is Punk Rock. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-1-04
30. My Emotional Downfall Story
I've been going through a really rough time, and this song is about all that. A lot of emotional downfalls. Basically, a song based on venting. I would really appreciate it if you Read and Review it. Thanks.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 470 - Published: 4-30-04
31. Crooked Line reviews
Please R&R. I put a lot of thought into this song.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-24-04
32. Believer Of Lies reviews
A song I wrote in how nothing ever is perfect. Read and Review if you don't mind.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-1-04
33. Sand Glass reviews
Hello again my friends. I haven't posted up a new song at fictionpress for a long time, hopefully this song won't disappoint. Took me about a month or so to write, so I hope I get the honor of getting of your reviews, so as always PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-26-04
34. Dismay reviews
Just what the title says. A song about someone and how I feel now that everything's change. Please R&R. I worked one hour on this song.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-20-04
35. In My Life reviews
My first ever song about God. I wrote this just feeling it ya know? I've been going through rough times and the Lord pulls me through.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-19-04
36. Emotional Fall
Kinda depressing song. Please R&R
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Published: 1-11-04
37. Fate reviews
Messed up the title inside. I hope you like it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-8-04
38. Red Paint reviews
I haven't written a song in a long time. This one comes from inside of me. So please R&R. hint: has NOTHING TO DO with red paint
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-5-04
39. The Face Inside
Sometimes you feel like two different people, and sometimes, you don't know who you are. Some cuss words, nothing major.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 339 - Published: 11-19-03
40. One More Year
I wrote this song during a tough time. But during this tough time I had friends along the way. This song is for them.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Published: 11-19-03
41. Shouts reviews
This song means a lot to me. I wrote this song after some real hard times, both mentally and physically. It means a lot to me. I hope it means a lot to some ppl.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-10-03
42. The Movie Scene
Sometimes life is like a movie...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Published: 11-10-03
43. Takes Me
Please R&R. The words of few mean a lot.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Published: 10-29-03
44. Rust reviews
It's kind of a weird song. Basically, I try to wrote in it how I have failed someone close to me and how I wish to die. *just like the rest of you* Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-29-03
45. Cold as Stone reviews
The title doesn't really give justice to my song, but I couldn't really think of a title. I think this is my best work yet, because I tried my best. Please R&R and tell me otherwise!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-24-03
46. Move On reviews
Just read.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-20-03
47. Missing Inside
Please read.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Published: 10-20-03
48. Breaking Myself
Please read.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Published: 10-20-03
49. Words
There are so many words in the english language, but only a few express the way I feel. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Published: 10-19-03
50. Unopened Wounds reviews
Just R&R. Reading it will let you know what it is about.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 488 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-15-03
51. What I Wanted To Do
This is a song I wrote when I told this girl I loved her, but I got no love back. Please R&R! *sorri about that one cuss word, but it seemed to flow wit the song a bit...*
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 430 - Published: 10-13-03
52. Broken Emotions Album »
A list of songs I wrote. I try to put it in a order so it tells a story. The end should mention how I confessed my love to a girl but was put down. Based on true events. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 11 - Words: 1,962 - Published: 10-10-03
53. What I Need
A song based on what everyone needs. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 9-21-03
54. Pain's Sake reviews
I wrote this song for a girl, I have yet to show her. Please R&R
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-03
55. Rage Inside
Now this one is REALLY depressing. Me and my friend wrote it, so we would really, REALLY, appreciate it if u guys R&R this one.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Published: 9-15-03
56. Why So
A song based on how you block yourself from people not to hurt them.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 9-15-03
57. No Way
More depressing songs. I have like ten songs I am updating. I need reviews to live on.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Published: 9-15-03
58. Left Alone
Another one of those depressing songs.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Published: 9-15-03
59. Incoming
Hi. Please R&R
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Published: 9-12-03
60. Truth
I forgot I wrote this. Please R/R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 9-3-03
61. Styles of a Murderer
I am writing this story and this is the theme song. The story is weird and so is this song.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Published: 9-3-03
62. The World Today
Something that just came up that I really liked but it sounds stupid. Well the meaning is great I think. *cause I wrote it* Please R/R once again.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 415 - Published: 9-3-03
63. Feeling Different
A song based on how I felt about this one person, but now those feelings changed. Please R/R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Published: 9-3-03
64. Hidden Inside reviews
Just read.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-2-03
65. Gone Away reviews
This song is about how sometimes you think people are gone, even though they are right in front of you. PLEASE R&R! PLEASE!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-20-03
66. Half Bad reviews
A song based on how things ain't all bad. PLEASE R&R
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-03
67. Right Back
A song... tell me what it means. PLEASE R&R
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Published: 8-19-03
68. Holy S reviews
A seriously stupid song I wrote. I think it's funny in a cosmic way. Read and, I guess, enjoy.
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-18-03
69. New Morales
A song based on how I am gonna change. Please R&R and I am open to tips and recommendations.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Published: 8-18-03
70. Words to Remember Me By reviews
Please R&R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-2-03
71. Last Time reviews
More songs for the crowd. This one is based on how its the last time someone messes with you... PLEASE R&R PPL!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-31-03
72. Anticipation
A song on how you can't wait to see people get what they deserve.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Published: 7-29-03
73. Try to Breath Censored reviews
Yep, I originally posted this song in the Rated-R column, but I wanna see what you ppl think.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-29-03
74. Breath reviews
Whoa! My first song with cuss words! Please R&R! I poured my f'en guts out!
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-28-03
75. Nothing Stops
The voices inside keep calling me. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 7-15-03
76. Something to See
A song based on how can you see the good in someone if you hate them? Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 7-15-03
77. Torn Apart
My first song rated R. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Published: 7-15-03
78. Clarity reviews
I have been writing so many songs, but I think this one tops them all. PLEASE R&R SO I CAN BE INSPIRED TO KEEP ON WRITING!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-14-03
79. Can't Stay
This song is about how sometimes you care enough to leave the person you care for alone. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Published: 7-3-03
80. Enlightment reviews
Finding your light. Please R&R.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-2-03
81. Faded Light
The sense of losing something/ one holds dear/is something so cruel/l ife wouldn't care. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Published: 7-2-03
82. Words of Mouth
Linkin Park wanna be. Cause they are the best. This song is how sometimes you can just careless and leave. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Published: 6-17-03
83. Ignored reviews
I think the title kinda speaks for itself. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-14-03
84. Fall reviews
Well, the meaning of this song is how sometimes, for me all the time, we don't a reason for anything. Or something close to that. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-14-03
85. Is You
Yea, another song. It's based on my feelings some more. Kinda Linkin Park style, ya know. PLEASE R&R!1
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Published: 6-9-03
86. This Feeling reviews
A song on how sometimes we seem to loose it all, completely! Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-9-03
87. What Is Love?
What is love? What does it mean to you? PLEASE TELL ME AND R&R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Published: 6-9-03
88. Missing Emotion reviews
What is the missing emotion? Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-8-03
89. Obsession reviews
Please R&R. Trying to write the PERFECT poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-8-03
90. Running Out of Time reviews
Tell me what you think please. R&R por favor!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-23-03
91. Silent Ken reviews
Swordsman of Hope. A samurai, since his childhood, has been training all his life to avenge his parents. Murdered by a man named Silent Ken, he has traveled to a village on the hills and finally catches up to his enemy. But will he be able to actually def
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,715 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-23-03
92. Wash Away reviews
It may kinda suck. but I think it's alright. But the only way I'll know is if you PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-12-03
93. Collapse
Based on how sometimes things around you seem to fail. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Published: 5-7-03
94. Through reviews
What can love go through? Please R&R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-2-03
95. Only This Love reviews
Please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-2-03
96. Left To Feel
Yes ppl, that says PG-13. Its kinda dark. But if you think its nothing you can't handle, read on. Special thanks to my friend. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Published: 4-28-03
97. Sinking Down
Its a song on how sometimes you feel like your shrinknig, with no way out. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Published: 4-28-03
98. How Do I Know
If you are interested in the title, just read it then! PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Published: 4-26-03
99. Fade reviews
A song about how sometimes you wish to forget. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-26-03
100. Victim reviews
Please R&R. A song based on how things don't always end up so well.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-25-03
101. Lost reviews
I song I wrote what I felt one day. Special thanks to my friend, who proof read it. PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-21-03
102. Corner reviews
See what you think. Its kinda depressing, but bleh. PLEASE R&R all you rock fans!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-19-03
103. In You reviews
It may seem tormented, but I don't know. The only way I'll know if is you people PLEASE R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-19-03
104. Daylight reviews
It's something I wrote for my little sister. Please R&R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-19-03
105. Only Real
Please R&R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Published: 4-19-03
106. Surface
People keep telling me to write. So I do. Thanks to all the people who reviewed my stuff.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 3-16-03
107. Cry
Yeah, I know. I've been writing too much. But hey, I got a lot to say. This one is basically about my views on the war we are starting.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 3-10-03
108. Stream reviews
I found the one. This is how I feel. Please R&R!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-9-03
109. For Me reviews
I write too much.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-7-03