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| orriel |
Author has written 50 stories for General, General, Fantasy, Song, Life, Nature, Family, and Love. Hiya. I'm orriel, a 14-year-old female from the midwest. I hope you enjoy my writing. Some of these are quite old, from up to 3 years ago (soon to be 4), I believe, so please judge my skills on the later pieces, not the earlier. I am currently on the favorites list of 2 people (thank you greenbug67 and The Dark Elfy Chick)! Woo. Go me. :rolls eyes: December 16 - I return every review I recieve, and I love constructive criticism :hinthint: Thank you! | |||||
1. A Clear Sea reviewsI felt adrift, alone, and I didn't care. But then I did. Probably not the greatest, but I'd really appreciate it if you took the time to read it. Thank you.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-16-042. Shattered reviewsWhat a broken heart can do to a person... sorry, that's all I can think of to summarize this poem. The rhythm's a little kooky, but overall I like it. Please r/r!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-3-043. Three AM reviewsI couldn't sleep, so I got out my laptop and started to write. The idea for a poem slowly came to mind, so I typed it up and tweaked it around a bit. Kind of strange (not surprising since it was written very late), but I hope you'll like it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-19-034. The Song is Still the Same reviewsWritten for a class.. I'm not sure if I'll use it, 'cause I'm not sure what I think about it. I could really use some feedback. This poem was supposed to be about a twisting cage.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-9-035. Darker Sister reviewsMy sister is several years older than me; an adult. This is about how I miss her, and about how annoying it is to have people confuse you for a sibling. If something looks strange, it's because fictionpress deleted some of my spacing.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-6-036. Caged Flight reviewsI put this under nature, but it has a deeper meaning. I see it as a metaphor for the way people struggle to be themselves, but it's open to interpretation.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-5-037. Confidante reviewsWritten as the second half of a form study (the first half being 'I am Sekai) About night and the dark - which I love.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-3-038. Rant reviewsSomething I really needed to get off my chest. Basically, just about life and school in general. Sorry this is such a boring summary :)Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 859 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-3-039. I am Sekai reviewsStory of a nomad girl who is deified. Bad summary, better story (at least I hope so)Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 662 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-1-0310. Bittersweet Ending reviewsI've been having some problems with my so-called "friends"Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-1-0211. Evening Fades reviewsJust a small poem about dusk fading into night.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-12-0212. The Storm reviewsOne of the longest (and maybe the best) poems I have ever written. Please r/r!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-12-0213. Parents reviewsA poem about my realization of how my parents are not invincible, that they cannot protect me from everything.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-25-0214. Not An Adult reviewsJust a poem about how I feel when my parents yell at me..Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-25-0215. The Diorn Chronicles reviewsThis is a semi-long story about a girl named Ambidine who lives in the land of Diorn. I don't want to say too much; I might give something away. I wrote part 1 as an assignment for school, so the other parts will obviously be better.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,659 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-25-0216. Bluebird reviewsWhew.. I haven't uploaded anything for months. I wrote this in the car on the way back from the woods.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-12-0217. Winter's Fire reviewsJust a small poem about the Aurora.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-15-0118. Forgotten Dreams reviewsWhere DO forgotten dreams go?Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-15-0119. Metal Reflections reviewsA poem about metal reflections and a forge...don't judge it till you read it! :poem doesn't really stick to what was said before:Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-12-0120. The Guardian reviewsAll is spawned from the small things, Those we overlook. So much can come from a sapling or a ladybug, Yet we fail to notice these accomplishments, for to us it's the big things that matter most.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,456 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-22-0121. Canoeing reviewsI don't want to write one!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-15-0122. Cantering reviewsJust a little acrostic about cantering (my favorite gait).Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-9-0123. Meaning reviewsOh, I don't feel like writing a summary! You'll just have to read it! :winkwink:Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-9-0124. Impossibility reviewsso many things seem possible, then impossible when you really try them (or vice-versa!)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-9-0125. Arctic Winds reviewsI think this describes me (or at least what I wish) and my dreams. I'd love to be...well..neither alive nor dead, going anywhere, and never stopping or being seen.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-7-0126. Lonely Soul reviewsThe wind must go on forever...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-7-0127. Whispre reviewsA short poem about how we're blind in so many ways.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-6-0128. Eyes Of Morning reviewsOh..just read it! :is writing something for school and her brain feels like a sponge:Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-18-0129. Untouched reviewsA poem about the road left untouched.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-1-0130. Tears from The Heart reviewsjust a sad song about a broken heart (not mine, btw)Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-28-0131. Springlight reviewsA short poem about spring. It was an assignment :'Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-21-0132. Beautiful Day reviewsI'm too lazy to write a summary...the name says it all.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-21-0133. Little Candle reviewsa poem about those who are different, or ignored.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-21-0134. One By One reviewsKind of hard to describe this poem...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-21-0135. Velvet Darkness reviewsJust a poem about the night...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-21-0136. Feathered Ebony reviewsjust a poem about a raven...although it's also a bit symbolic.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-7-0137. Victory Lost reviewsIt's basically about what it would have been like if the Americans had lost the American Revolution. This was a class assignment, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope that you will, too!Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,094 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-22-0138. The Feline Eye reviewsa poem about looking into a feline's eye (more specifically a tiger's)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-17-0139. Behind the Waterfall reviewsthis one hurt...I put too much of myself into it.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-17-0140. Sequoia reviewsa poem about our vanishing forests/trees. Please r/r!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-14-0141. war whispers reviewsI really don't know how to describe it. I think you'll like it, though, so read on.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-13-0142. From the Heaven's Grasp reviewsa sort of a riddle...see if you can solve it. :warning: do not read the reviews before the poem!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-13-0143. SilverNight reviewsJust a poem about the moon. It's not really about the moon though. It's hard to describe it...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2-13-0144. The Legend of Lampur » reviewsRevised edition...you'll have to read to find out what it's about.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,357 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-2-01 - Published: 1-25-0145. Baxendale (part 1) reviewsmm...part of a new series...has NOTHING whatsoever to do with Carina and EleanaFiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-23-0046. Of Storm Clouds and Rainy Days reviewsa little poem...you'll have to read it to find out what it's like :PPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-23-0047. Butterflies reviewsA poem about *drumroll* butterflies!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-22-0048. The First Snow reviewsA poem about the first snow of winter.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-22-0049. Autumn To Winter reviewsa poem about the changing seasons.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-22-0050. You don't say...... reviewsA wacky little poem...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 12-22-00
