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Author has written 127 stories for General, Life, Haiku, War, Love, Fantasy, Spiritual, Religion, Nature, Politics, and School. this is all pretty crappy and only still up so i can find it years from now and cringe as i am doing now. 5/06 | |||||||
1. Confessions of a Golden Calf reviewsyou ought to know your idols.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-052. NonEuclidean Geometry reviewsWe are but so many sets of angular coordinates.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 4-6-05 - Published: 4-6-053. crash reviewsoh didn't you know, child? it all falls apart in the end.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 1-3-05 - Published: 1-3-054. whales reviewsyou won't know what I mean, but I don't care.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 11-7-04 - Published: 11-7-045. ghosts reviewsempty promises, empty arms-the ghost of you everywhere but just beyond my grasp. Cut haiku...or rather, chopped, since I cut up the cut form. Deal with it.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 7-9-04 - Published: 7-9-046. no ever after reviewsdon't kid yourself.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-047. From the Inside Out reviewsUtilizes 3-5-3 haiku, although they've been transformed into tankas. And used to sandwich free-verse...but this board would be so boring (pun non-intended) without variety, no?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-048. hell week is over reviewsthis isn't really poetic. but ap's are done. yes. done. throw away your princeton reviews, kids. bc calc and apus are DEAD.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-049. Immaterial reviewsmadness would imply anger, and i'm hardly in an aggravated/rather elevated state. and yet they still call me mad...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 4-27-04 - Published: 4-27-0410. In Vain » reviewsShakespearean sonnet, for Black Rider (from xmas). I realized after posting that I had left out a stanza...so now, 4 months later, you get the final four lines. Enjoy. Original included.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 12-25-0311. Spring on Fictionpress reviewsHappy Easter...happy spring! tankaHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 4-11-04 - Published: 4-11-0412. lose, she whispered reviewsif I told the truth you would refuse to believe, and even lies you shall not fully understand.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 4-5-04 - Published: 4-5-0413. the thin and lovely smile reviewsshall creep in a soft wave over fading features as the whispers of myth fly away, fly away. tankaHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 3-8-04 - Published: 3-8-0414. oh that exhilarating FEELING! reviewsSomething less depressing to pass the bleak greys of winter. wink yes you owe meLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-26-04 - Published: 2-26-0415. the day they jailed the colors reviewsconcept poem. took me forever to edit and is probably still not the way i want it. inspired partly by don mc-clean and partly by ivan denisovich. ah, communism.Politics - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 2-26-04 - Published: 2-26-0416. cicadas reviewsI suppose once in a while we all yearn for what we know we've lost, somehow, somewhere along the way. tankaHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 2-4-04 - Published: 2-4-0417. Riddle Me This » reviewsedit: the second riddle (third chapter) has been fixed. These riddles are tricky and not for the faint of-er-brain. Enjoy!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-8-0418. You are the Salt reviewsthat is thrown on my open wounds that you made, and meanwhile I shall be the knife that cleaves your breast at your own hand, and together to hell we shall united be torn apart. (this is r for a reason. If you normally like my "pretty" stuff, you prGeneral - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-26-04 - Published: 1-26-0419. clarity reviewsthink-piece, perhaps. Interpret as you will but please not stupidly. If you can't say anything intelligent don't say anything at all.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 1-20-04 - Published: 1-20-0420. lamentish thing reviewsI don't know why I'm posting this. Blah. Everything is blah right now. I'm screwing myself over. Sorry.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-19-04 - Published: 1-19-0421. lose youth reviews"We swore once/along the side of the spray/we'd be as Pan/and never grow up/except our wish backfired..."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 12-31-03 - Published: 12-31-0322. Emerge reviewsFollow to the river, child...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 12-27-03 - Published: 12-27-0323. holiday spirit reviewsWith all the over-commercialization of modern holidays, sometimes we forget the true meaning...hopefully un-cliché. For Magpie.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 12-27-03 - Published: 12-27-0324. calm before the storm reviewsfor Zanmath. Parallel chaos...which is odd really, because chaos and parallel don't seem to be quite compatibleGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-24-03 - Published: 12-24-0325. fae reviewsspliced haiku (reg-reg) for frugale, in the style of forest walk. I think every true poet has had a fixation on fairies, at some point in their life...they are poetry embodied, spirits of varied substance dancing on logic in the forest glades...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-22-03 - Published: 12-22-0326. dust reviewstombs and millenia entrance me...can you find the meaning? Perhaps...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-19-03 - Published: 12-19-0327. Christmas Gifts reviewsA pseudo-sonnet, you could say. My Christmas gift to all of you is-well, read the author's note or my profile, if it's still up there. And make requests soon, please, so I have time!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 12-13-0328. Collision Course reviewsSpliced haiku (a cut and regular-yeah, I like this form. The truth is coming out and the lies are pressing down...the day of judgement coming, from the god(s) and from the people...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 12-13-03 - Published: 12-13-0329. forest walk reviewsformatting fun...hopefulling chilling haiku (pl.), sliced, diced, enmeshed, and generally rearranged. Inspired by fog on the walk home today. Enjoy!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 12-10-03 - Published: 12-10-0330. Losing Grip reviewsTyburn-attempted after being wowed by Children of the Root's example. A new format that I've yet to master, I'd appreciate your comments/criticism/whatever. Everything collapses, and I can't hold on...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-0331. Pulse reviewsReverse haiku (7-5-7), first in a while. I kind of like this one. It's different than my usual tone, imho. if you really want to know what it's about, you'll read the poem. It's only three lines, guys.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 12-3-03 - Published: 12-3-0332. To Friends reviewsMy 100th post is for you-for everyone who's said a kind word, for the good ones, the close ones, the ones who cared when no one needed to, the ones who let me cry. Here's to you all. And many of you know who you are.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 11-30-03 - Published: 11-30-0333. Fall like Dolls reviewsThe phoenix may fly and the angels may dive, but when the ice is slippery, it's all too easy to slide into the underworld...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 11-23-03 - Published: 11-23-0334. Google Love Gone Bad reviewsis irritated eh...sort of a poetic rant on the flaws of a certain piece of software offered by what is generally my favorite search engine. God I hate pop-ups. Not intended to be pretentious, in any way.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 11-23-03 - Published: 11-23-0335. demons reviewsAt the cusp of a worldwide war, a struggling empire desperate for a scapegoat turned to a religious minority within their own country and slaughtered them, the first real genocide, brutally murdering millions. Think you know who I'm talking about? Don'tPolitics - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-20-03 - Published: 11-20-0336. last reviews3-5-3, a la Miz E. Mak. Calvary. My first shot at this, so feel free to critique.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-13-03 - Published: 11-13-0337. static reviewsNovember 5, 2003-I'll never forget.Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 11-9-03 - Published: 11-9-0338. Hope reviewsIt's never too late to pick up the pieces-the stained glass of cathedrals is but broken bottles rearranged...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-4-03 - Published: 11-4-0339. Si Je Pleurais reviewsin french, but with a translation included for those who don't speak it. I just love the way the words sound in this language...Love - Fiction Rated: K - French - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 10-29-03 - Published: 10-29-0340. Lost Chance reviewswe've all let a few slip away...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-26-0341. So Ironic reviews*Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 10-20-03 - Published: 10-20-0342. Chameleon reviewsBut didn't you know? You're not the only one who feels as you do; the ordinary people you imagine are no better than yourself. Why steal a soul when yours is hardly lacking? Alas you fail to see and try to blend in with the crowd, quilt yourself a newHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 10-20-03 - Published: 10-20-0343. Sanctuary reviewsSometimes you just need something to hold on to.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 10-19-03 - Published: 10-19-0344. Can't Set Me Free reviewsCut, cut, tanka, cut, stanza cut...what can I say, I love mixing and matching. Political: envision a future where we're afraid to think freely, else chaos should erupt from our minds and mouths...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-19-03 - Published: 10-19-0345. Sky Castles reviewsReality is imaginary, imagination real; escape with me from those silly laws of physics, toss your textbooks in the trash and fly away to Jupiter's moon...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 10-16-03 - Published: 10-16-0346. Plea to the Princess reviewsThis isn't a haiku in any shape or form, but this is Princess Mulan's domain, and so it's fitting for this to be here rather than anywhere else. Please come back...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 10-14-03 - Published: 10-14-0347. falling reviews*sigh* I hate to write generic angst...right now everything sucks so badly I can't even think of words that make it make sense. Maybe later when I'm not feeling so crappy I'll revise this.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-13-03 - Published: 10-13-0348. sunrise reviewsGood mother earth once again gives birth to the downy chick sun sweet rising...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-13-03 - Published: 10-13-0349. On Being Confirmed reviews...or being in the process of, rather. This all just seems so fake to me, but then again, isn't that what it is for me to go and confirm my belief in something in which my beliefs are all but firm? Fake?Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-12-03 - Published: 10-12-0350. Apocalypse reviewsring around the rosie...Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 10-7-03 - Published: 10-7-0351. odyssey reviewswe'll tell only the stars our secret...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-4-03 - Published: 10-4-0352. legacy reviewsIt took just one...one man with his one god to change the course of history forever. May not be what you're expecting...Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-2-03 - Published: 10-2-0353. all that you love will be carried away reviewsMy thanks to Stephen King, muse on this choka...reminisce on the ghosts of past lives as they whisper you secrets in raspy long-gone voices...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-27-03 - Published: 9-27-0354. Comments » reviews*collective gasp* yes, it's true-I've actually updated! Comment no. 6 is another reverse haiku (7-5-7).Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 33 - Updated: 9-25-03 - Published: 5-12-0355. Purge reviewsMy first reverse haiku (7-5-7). Can fire make me clean...?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-23-03 - Published: 9-23-0356. Covenant reviewsIt was made for a reason...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-16-03 - Published: 9-16-0357. Watch the Bird reviewsAn odd poem in a format I've never tried before...religious, social commentary if you look for it.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-14-03 - Published: 9-14-0358. wingless reviewsI'm just a fallen angel/trying to flap useless stumps...Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-11-03 - Published: 9-11-0359. Saved reviewsAh, the sweet smell of salvation. Cut haiku.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-7-03 - Published: 9-7-0360. Such Promises reviewscontrast poem-how is it to fly? how is it to fall?Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-6-03 - Published: 9-6-0361. Welcome to my Mind reviewsMore wordplay, except this time it actually has a point. "I wish to be lyrically complex..."General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-25-03 - Published: 8-25-0362. example reviewsanother tanka, woo! They're always watching her, try as she may to forget...wish as she might that she didn't have to...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-18-03 - Published: 8-18-0363. jealousy reviewsjust a drop can destroy a lifelong friendship...a tankaHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0364. Empty reviewsThis is a bit hard to post...mainly because it's so true. And the fact that it's true makes it almost embarrassing, because it's things I don't want to admit...I'm losing my life...slowly...voluntarily, although I occasionally try to save itLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-14-03 - Published: 8-14-0365. Color me Clear reviewsAnd I'm (finally) back with a non-angsty poem that I actually like."Color me clear/translucent transparency..." Includes reference to the Muppets.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-0366. The Dangers of RoseColored Glasses reviewsToss them in the trash and rejoice in variety.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-12-03 - Published: 8-12-0367. Better to Fall reviewsthan to be dropped.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0368. Life's a Bitch reviews...and then you dieLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0369. Lace reviewsAnother darker poem from me...battered, bruised, with porcelain scars, she still remembers days when she wore lace...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-24-03 - Published: 7-24-0370. Balloon reviewsEr...pretty dark stuff, which I usually don't write...involves a balloon and a tragedy. That's all I'll say. Leave a review.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0371. suffixalliteration reviewsWordplay-doesn't really mean anything, but it sounds cool if you read it out loud.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-18-03 - Published: 7-18-0372. Chocolát reviewsHardly what you'd expect on the subject...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-0373. Innocence reviewsMy first actual haiku in a long time...I actually like this one. Thanks to Heart of the Sword for the formatting tips!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-7-03 - Published: 7-7-0374. Lies reviewsEver notice the striking similarity between a spider and a liar?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-6-03 - Published: 7-6-0375. Rubber Ducky reviewsCut haiku for the bathtub. "For love of rubber duckies..."Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-5-03 - Published: 7-5-0376. Holograph reviewsReality, schmeality.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-5-03 - Published: 7-5-0377. Peach reviewscan a peach bleed?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-3-03 - Published: 7-3-0378. swell reviewsyou can look at it in one of two ways: either it's complete randomness, or it has a deeper, hidden meaning. I'm not goin to say that either conclusion would be completely correct or incorrect.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-03 - Published: 6-27-0379. Gone With the Wind reviewskudos to Margaret [insert last name here], to whom I owe the title. It's so true, though...so many things you take for granted can disappear in just a moment, just the time it takes to blink. Gone...gone with the wind...please kill me now before i chokeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-27-03 - Published: 6-27-0380. daybreak reviewsA modified tanka-see ch 5 of comments or the a/n for explanation-involves flowers, dye, tears, and mascara. And, of course, daybreak-hence the title...yes, I'm quite aware of my condition...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-27-03 - Published: 6-27-0381. What a pity reviewsCut haiku-I was a caterpillar...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-26-03 - Published: 6-26-0382. Summer reviewsok, so maybe i have a twisted imagination...here you go, folks. Summer. (don't fret, it's only about a cricket, for heavens sake.)Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-25-03 - Published: 6-25-0383. On the Power of Love reviewsThe idealistic young man preached the power of love. The battered old woman knew better.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-22-03 - Published: 6-22-0384. child soldier reviewsIn hundreds of countries, armies are taking children to serve on the front lines. Why? Because they are "dispensable." If a child dies, they can always take another. These children don't volunteer. They are stolen from their homes. Read and forwardWar - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-15-03 - Published: 6-15-0385. Ode to Sugar reviewsTaken from my latin america test, decided to post it here b/c I like it A 30 line or so thing in the style of Neruda: magical realism, all that good stuff. enjoy!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-0386. A Mother's Epitaph reviewstitle self-explanatory; self-sacrifice, etc. 5 linesLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-0387. Sweatshop Capitalism reviewscut haiku sequence-you could say it mourns for the child victims of capitalism.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-4-03 - Published: 6-4-0388. Stone Lover reviewsfirst attempt at a sonnet. Criticism appreciated, flames used to toast marshmallows. "My dear, in your perfection I would keep you/still and perfect, Grecian bust, forevermore..."Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-3-03 - Published: 6-3-0389. doubtchaossuicidal reviews*exhales* read if you wish...sneak a glimpse of my mind as I torture myself with doubts, with beliefs, with questions...Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-2-03 - Published: 6-2-0390. Slipping reviews*sigh* this faith a snake from fingers falls...Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-2-03 - Published: 6-2-0391. Freshmanitis reviewsA new form-presenting-the tanku! Oh! Who's brilliant! (er...or too lazy to reformat the poem into either a tanka or a haiku...but oh well. R&R)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-29-03 - Published: 5-29-0392. sweet poison reviewslet's call it human nature, shall we? Basically I can't decide where this ought to go. Leave a review telling me to take it down if you really care that much.Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-26-03 - Published: 5-26-0393. Regaining my Faith reviewsslowly but surely...Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-26-03 - Published: 5-26-0394. Smithereens reviewsyou smashed me like a china doll...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-20-03 - Published: 5-20-0395. avocado reviewsA choka. If you want to look at it deeply (word), then it means something. If not-well, it's a poem about an avocado.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-18-03 - Published: 5-18-0396. Doubts reviewsMy first piece of fiction, rather than poetry-please don't flame this. It's completely true. Lately, I've been having doubts...Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 676 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-18-03 - Published: 5-18-0397. I am, and I am not reviewsI am that silly little girl...I am not that lowly snake...see how many hearts will breakLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-0398. Thief reviewsIf I stole away your soul, still I'd not be as guilty...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-0399. Superficial reviewswhy, I *wonder* what this could be about....Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-03100. cry reviewsok--I admit, it's not really a haiku...or even a cut haiku. But the syllabic meter (?) at least starts out 1-2-3-4-5-5-4-3-2-1, or something like that....anyways. I just thought it would fit better here. Read and leave me a review!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-11-03 - Published: 5-11-03101. bliss reviewsnow that i think of it, it's a bit sad that "bliss" should be a fantasy....Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-8-03 - Published: 5-8-03102. For once, why don't you? reviewsWhy am *I* always the one who does these things? Why not *you* for a change?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-7-03 - Published: 5-7-03103. Hold my hand reviewsnot ready to let go....a short, rather pointless haiku, but I actually like it. A real haiku this time, not cut or a tanka or a sandwich.....Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-6-03 - Published: 5-6-03104. Jump reviewsQuod me nutruit, me destruit....Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-6-03 - Published: 5-6-03105. if reviewsif for one second you could just forget...if i could peel away all those layers and layers...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-3-03 - Published: 5-3-03106. angel reviewsmy angel couldn't save me....Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-1-03 - Published: 5-1-03107. feathergirl reviewsa cut haiku sandwich....thanks again to Princess Mulan for introducing me to the form! ::see those feathers drifting...?::Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-30-03 - Published: 4-30-03108. Song of the Nymph reviewspreviously titled "the maybe-child"...you tell me which one works better. An old poem of mine that I dug up while cleaning under my be, but I actually like it.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-03 - Published: 4-29-03109. I'll Paint You reviewsWith a palette of your dreamings, I'll paint you....General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-29-03 - Published: 4-29-03110. Monthly Blues reviewswe all get down in the dumps now and then....Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 4-28-03 - Published: 4-28-03111. Burns reviewsWhen hatred consumes you, you become living fire...but when the fire has burnt out, all that is left is ash. Odd format, cut haiku, normal haiku, and regular verse.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 4-25-03 - Published: 4-25-03112. Blind reviews"You have 20/20 vision/But boy, you sure are blind."Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-25-03 - Published: 4-25-03113. It's my Birthday! reviewstanka, written while *gasp* procrastinating! Again!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-22-03 - Published: 4-22-03114. late night essay reviewsso tired…curse…procrastinationHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 4-21-03 - Published: 4-21-03115. egg hunt's end reviewscut haiku--Happy Easter!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-20-03 - Published: 4-20-03116. maggie reviewsi was holding my 2-year old sister when I wrote this....she's babbling about the keyboard right now ("a big one here....and a little one....)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-20-03 - Published: 4-20-03117. Nineteen reviewsI wasn't fair to the soldiers in my previous poem, so hopefully this will make up for it. War from the viewpoint of a young American soldier.War - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-18-03 - Published: 4-18-03118. Civilian Hero reviewsa tribute in cut haikuHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-13-03 - Published: 4-13-03119. She Wore White reviewsFor the victims of war; a plea for peace.War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 4-13-03 - Published: 4-13-03120. If I Can't reviewsIf I can't have you....Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-12-03 - Published: 4-12-03121. Alzheimers reviewsmy interpretation....a real haiku instead of a tanka, for a change!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-10-03 - Published: 4-10-03122. Cut me Down reviewsNot sure if this is good yet, do tell--just a couple of lines that came to me today.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-10-03 - Published: 4-10-03123. First reviewsFirst what? I'm sure you can guess....another tankaHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-9-03 - Published: 4-9-03124. glass reviewsLike most of my poems, the meaning *is* the poem, so a summary would rather ruin it, don't you think? How much can a person resemble glass?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-8-03 - Published: 4-8-03125. the blind man reviewsImagine a life without sight....what would you see?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-8-03 - Published: 4-8-03126. abortion reviewsBasically, the title tells it all....a quick analogy, I guess. I'd like to hear your views on the subject, so tell me what you think in a review after reading!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 4-8-03 - Published: 4-8-03
