“Our strategy should be not only to confront empire (USA) but lay siege to it. To deprive it of oxygen, to shame it, to mock it. With our art, our music, our literature, our stubbornness, our joy, our brilliance, our sheer relentlessness, and our ability to tell our own stories. Stories that are different from the ones we are being brainwashed to believe. –Arundhati Roy


ATTENTION: This
awful. the most cliche thing you've written as of yet. unless you plan on beginning the new 'babysitter's club' series for gay kids, please stop writing. is a bad review. It is not bad because of what it says (frankly I couldn't care what it says). It's bad because it says absolutely nothing. No critiscm, nothing. If you're going to give me a negative review then at least give me something with freaking critism. What can I do better? What is so cliche about it? What are the weak points? Maybe I'm just expecting too much 

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1. Crusade reviews

Me trying take on surrealism and religion. From an Arts High Prompt "imagine the Virgin Mary's face appears to you on a Girl Scouts cookie box"

Fable - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,444 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-18-04 - Published: 6-18-04

2. Traveler's Cheque reviews

"Pretty was ...lacking the good taste to at least be born somewhere far away to justify her longings."

Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 737 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-12-04 - Published: 2-12-04

3. They Are Not Talking reviews

I'm a product of divorce- bastardization of 'American Psycho' quote (its PG just for my summary)

Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-12-04 - Published: 2-12-04

4. love slowly loathe quietly fall apart love slowly » reviews

A camp for gifted and talented teenagers who're just as preoccupied with romance and coming to terms with their sexualities as they are with studying

General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,032 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-18-03 - Published: 10-29-03

5. Longer Letter Later » reviews

writing a note of undying devotion to someone in your class, a teacher interrupts you *M/M longing*

Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,945 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 8-15-03 - Published: 7-14-03

6. Sometimes Y reviews

Sorry I can’t have myself/ The Way You want me to/and if I could I'd love me like I love you

Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-03

7. Fallen Monument reviews

all monuments will fall down...

Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-03

8. Two Young Stoners reviews

it's a poem... umm... yeah...

Nature - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-03

9. Swallowed A Penny reviews

A stream of conciousness. Short to the point. About wanting to do something and feeling trapped

Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 416 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-03

10. My Favorite Abortion reviews

look at the title. then the rating. repeat as often as necessary. do not flame b/c you are anti abortion.

Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-03

11. Curtain Call » reviews

a short story- there are smaller chapters but as no one has reviewed...

Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,331 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 4-1-03

12. Really Children

...Running her finger down the crease in a lampshade she stared at the pictures on the wall. The two stray prints that weren’t of happy houses or pictures from when the children were really children.

General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,170 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-10-03 - Published: 6-10-03

13. Bottle Neck reviews

...Vodka worked faster than he thought. Or maybe just clumsiness. He hit the play button and Bob Marley began to croon on repeat. “Stir it up, little darling, stir it up...”

General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,050 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-10-03 - Published: 6-10-03

14. Fleshed Out reviews

A man watches his wife undress; tension in the air

Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,292 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-10-03 - Published: 6-10-03

15. Conversation reviews

I don't know how to describe this other than it's a conversation between 2 people. Well, a third perosn joins in and another person is an important part but I get ahead of myself

General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 610 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-03 - Published: 6-8-03

16. Flee the Bulls reviews

My take on the Sept 11 anniversary. feedback is like dung: not always pretty but sometimes necessary to start a fire

Politics - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 510 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-2-03 - Published: 6-2-03

17. Hick Rasphody reviews

a little ditty I made up with a friend of mine (cathy)

Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-2-03 - Published: 6-2-03

18. All At Once reviews

feedback is like dung~ not always pretty but sometimes necessary to start a fire

Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-2-03 - Published: 6-2-03

19. Fly reviews

stream of conciousness not really anything I guess

Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-15-03 - Published: 4-15-03

20. Saw A Swan reviews

10 short stories that I wrote in the mind/voice of a child

Kids - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-15-03 - Published: 4-15-03

21. Super Man reviews

a song that I wrote when I looked at my brother or friends or myself and realized the similarities we had in difficulty in relating to our parents and our parents to us (if that made sense)

Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-10-03 - Published: 4-10-03