Amrun
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since: 02-01-03, id: 336458
Author has written 36 stories for Essay, General, General, Life, Friendship, Love, Nature, Family, Historical, Religion, and Humor.

I just recently decided to take a look back at this, reading my old stuff to see how much I've grown. Excuse me for leaving the few pieces I have on here up, because I know that they're terrible, but I'm leaving them as a reminder to myself. I may even post some of my new stuff, but I'm not sure.

I'm a published poet among other things, and I know how very crucial constructive criticism is. I implore you to leave good, well-thought out, helpful reviews of my writing, AND of everyone else's. Seeing "Wow thsi was GRT, ur a really good writter," may boost YOUR ego, but I personally would rather my work be torn apart if it will help make me a better writer.

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1. The Sonnet of a Wave reviews
Written November 'o5. Constructive criticism welcome.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-06
2. Insomnia reviews
'Who can sleep/When dreams are at your doorstep'
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-05
3. Monster reviews
"How can you lock a monster in a room with no doors"
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-15-05
4. Rejection reviews
Fear of a thing will prevent the joy of taking the risk and loving it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-13-05
5. Kiss Me reviews
I don't really know how to summarize this. For once, I think I might actually LIKEe this one. Amazing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-21-05
6. Best Friends reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory, thank you very much. Reviews appreciated and returned.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-18-05
7. Terminated reviews
Written on a request for a friend of mine. READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED, but hey, it's all in the name of humour, I promise.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-18-05
8. Written on Treebark » reviews
A series of poems inspired by ... you guessed it ... nature.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 5-31-05
9. Where Am I? reviews
Where am I on the map of all the girls you've been through?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-17-05
10. Tranquility reviews
Just some thoughts I jotted down at the beach that happened to take poetical form.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-05
11. Questioning » reviews
A series of poems, each with a consummate unanswerable question.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-8-05 - Published: 5-29-05
12. Morning has a mellow taste reviews
Constructive reviews will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-5-05
13. Inside Out reviews
Constructive reviews more than welcome! The favor will be returned.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-4-05
14. Lord, Thank You for the Fireflies reviews
Written in Summer '03. The title in itself is a bit self-explanatory. A poem expressing gratitude for the small things in life.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-4-05
15. The Last Knight reviews
A short one-shot from 5 or 6 months ago about chivalry in midieval times (kind of). Atleast that was what I INTENDED to write about ... it turned out a tad bit different.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-05
16. Arise reviews
Arise, my darling, and come away.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-05
17. Swallow reviews
One way highway.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-4-05
18. Shattered reviews
Worthwhile reviews will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-05
19. Hit me reviews
Nothing to say. Personal.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-05
20. Guilty
Not written for aesthetic perfection. This is total raw, personal feeling. Normally, I don't post things like this, but something compelled me ...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Published: 6-3-05
21. Let Yourself Cry
Constructive reviews please. They will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Published: 6-1-05
22. Nothing New reviews
This is how I cope with abandonment, basically.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-31-05
23. Sweet Nothings of a Past Life reviews
Critical reviews, please. I'll return the favor.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-31-05
24. Lust Meets Desperation reviews
My view of today's society's tainted version of "love."
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-30-05
25. Dogs reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-30-05
26. Trust Issues
How I've finally realized that I view life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 5-30-05
27. Risk reviews
This is a poem I wrote to myself a long time ago, and just now found in a notebook.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-30-05
28. Artificial Happiness reviews
Small, five-line poem. It's not recent; I have no idea when it's actually dated. Constructive criticism please.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-29-05
29. I am reviews
Please give thoughtful, constructive reviews. I'll return the favor. Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-29-05
30. You reviews
Written summer '04, posted as archive. Consructive reviews pleaded for!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 494 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-29-05
31. Girl Depressed
It only hurts because you've never known anything worse.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Published: 5-29-05
32. The Box reviews
A poem written for a school assignment about memories and looking back
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-19-04
33. Cracks On My Ceiling reviews
The results of attempting (and failing) to sleep last night. ...Interesting, I must say. My right brain definitely had a big play in this one.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-22-03
34. Normal reviews
James Bennet feels ordinary, sees himself as ordinary. Unfortunately, the world does not.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 623 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-20-03
35. Nothing reviews
I felt this way once; it was the scariest half-hour of my life. One of my better poetry pieces, actually.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-20-03
36. Change reviews
Inspired by a phone call, here is my stupid essay on change...
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 935 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-19-03