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| Amrun |
Author has written 36 stories for Essay, General, General, Life, Friendship, Love, Nature, Family, Historical, Religion, and Humor. I just recently decided to take a look back at this, reading my old stuff to see how much I've grown. Excuse me for leaving the few pieces I have on here up, because I know that they're terrible, but I'm leaving them as a reminder to myself. I may even post some of my new stuff, but I'm not sure. I'm a published poet among other things, and I know how very crucial constructive criticism is. I implore you to leave good, well-thought out, helpful reviews of my writing, AND of everyone else's. Seeing "Wow thsi was GRT, ur a really good writter," may boost YOUR ego, but I personally would rather my work be torn apart if it will help make me a better writer. All authors heed this notice: Posting work on fictionpress gives up first publication rights. It's seen as "self-publication." Of large works, only small excerpts may be posted. Any site that requires a password to view works are excluded from this. | |||||
1. The Sonnet of a Wave reviewsWritten November 'o5. Constructive criticism welcome.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-062. Insomnia reviews'Who can sleep/When dreams are at your doorstep'Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-053. Monster reviews"How can you lock a monster in a room with no doors"Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-15-054. Rejection reviewsFear of a thing will prevent the joy of taking the risk and loving it.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-13-055. Kiss Me reviewsI don't really know how to summarize this. For once, I think I might actually LIKEe this one. Amazing.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-21-056. Best Friends reviewsIt's a bit self-explanatory, thank you very much. Reviews appreciated and returned.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-18-057. Terminated reviewsWritten on a request for a friend of mine. READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED, but hey, it's all in the name of humour, I promise.Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-18-058. Written on Treebark » reviewsA series of poems inspired by ... you guessed it ... nature.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 5-31-059. Where Am I? reviewsWhere am I on the map of all the girls you've been through?Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-17-0510. Tranquility reviewsJust some thoughts I jotted down at the beach that happened to take poetical form.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-0511. Questioning » reviewsA series of poems, each with a consummate unanswerable question.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-8-05 - Published: 5-29-0512. Morning has a mellow taste reviewsConstructive reviews will be reciprocated.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-5-0513. Inside Out reviewsConstructive reviews more than welcome! The favor will be returned.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-4-0514. Lord, Thank You for the Fireflies reviewsWritten in Summer '03. The title in itself is a bit self-explanatory. A poem expressing gratitude for the small things in life.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-4-0515. The Last Knight reviewsA short one-shot from 5 or 6 months ago about chivalry in midieval times (kind of). Atleast that was what I INTENDED to write about ... it turned out a tad bit different.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-0516. Arise reviewsArise, my darling, and come away.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-0517. Swallow reviewsOne way highway.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-4-0518. Shattered reviewsWorthwhile reviews will be reciprocated.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-0519. Hit me reviewsNothing to say. Personal.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-0520. GuiltyNot written for aesthetic perfection. This is total raw, personal feeling. Normally, I don't post things like this, but something compelled me ...Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Published: 6-3-0521. Let Yourself CryConstructive reviews please. They will be reciprocated.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Published: 6-1-0522. Nothing New reviewsThis is how I cope with abandonment, basically.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-31-0523. Sweet Nothings of a Past Life reviewsCritical reviews, please. I'll return the favor.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-31-0524. Lust Meets Desperation reviewsMy view of today's society's tainted version of "love."Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-30-0525. Dogs reviewsIt's a bit self-explanatory.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-30-0526. Trust IssuesHow I've finally realized that I view life.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 5-30-0527. Risk reviewsThis is a poem I wrote to myself a long time ago, and just now found in a notebook.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-30-0528. Artificial Happiness reviewsSmall, five-line poem. It's not recent; I have no idea when it's actually dated. Constructive criticism please.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-29-0529. I am reviewsPlease give thoughtful, constructive reviews. I'll return the favor. Thanks in advance!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-29-0530. You reviewsWritten summer '04, posted as archive. Consructive reviews pleaded for!Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 494 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-29-0531. Girl DepressedIt only hurts because you've never known anything worse.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Published: 5-29-0532. The Box reviewsA poem written for a school assignment about memories and looking backPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-19-0433. Cracks On My Ceiling reviewsThe results of attempting (and failing) to sleep last night. ...Interesting, I must say. My right brain definitely had a big play in this one.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-22-0334. Normal reviewsJames Bennet feels ordinary, sees himself as ordinary. Unfortunately, the world does not.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 623 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-20-03
