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Amrun
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since: 02-01-03, id: 336458
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Author has written 36 stories for Essay, General, General, Life, Friendship, Love, Nature, Family, Historical, Religion, and Humor.

I just recently decided to take a look back at this, reading my old stuff to see how much I've grown. Excuse me for leaving the few pieces I have on here up, because I know that they're terrible, but I'm leaving them as a reminder to myself. I may even post some of my new stuff, but I'm not sure.

I'm a published poet among other things, and I know how very crucial constructive criticism is. I implore you to leave good, well-thought out, helpful reviews of my writing, AND of everyone else's. Seeing "Wow thsi was GRT, ur a really good writter," may boost YOUR ego, but I personally would rather my work be torn apart if it will help make me a better writer.

All authors heed this notice:

Posting work on fictionpress gives up first publication rights. It's seen as "self-publication." Of large works, only small excerpts may be posted. Any site that requires a password to view works are excluded from this.




1. The Sonnet of a Wave reviews
Written November 'o5. Constructive criticism welcome.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-28-06 - Published: 1-28-06
2. Insomnia reviews
'Who can sleep/When dreams are at your doorstep'
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-19-05 - Published: 8-19-05
3. Monster reviews
"How can you lock a monster in a room with no doors"
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-05
4. Rejection reviews
Fear of a thing will prevent the joy of taking the risk and loving it.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-13-05 - Published: 7-13-05
5. Kiss Me reviews
I don't really know how to summarize this. For once, I think I might actually LIKEe this one. Amazing.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-21-05 - Published: 6-21-05
6. Best Friends reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory, thank you very much. Reviews appreciated and returned.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-05 - Published: 6-18-05
7. Terminated reviews
Written on a request for a friend of mine. READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED, but hey, it's all in the name of humour, I promise.
Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-05 - Published: 6-18-05
8. Written on Treebark » reviews
A series of poems inspired by ... you guessed it ... nature.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 5-31-05
9. Where Am I? reviews
Where am I on the map of all the girls you've been through?
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-05
10. Tranquility reviews
Just some thoughts I jotted down at the beach that happened to take poetical form.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-12-05 - Published: 6-12-05
11. Questioning » reviews
A series of poems, each with a consummate unanswerable question.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-8-05 - Published: 5-29-05
12. Morning has a mellow taste reviews
Constructive reviews will be reciprocated.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-5-05 - Published: 6-5-05
13. Inside Out reviews
Constructive reviews more than welcome! The favor will be returned.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
14. Lord, Thank You for the Fireflies reviews
Written in Summer '03. The title in itself is a bit self-explanatory. A poem expressing gratitude for the small things in life.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
15. The Last Knight reviews
A short one-shot from 5 or 6 months ago about chivalry in midieval times (kind of). Atleast that was what I INTENDED to write about ... it turned out a tad bit different.
Historical - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
16. Arise reviews
Arise, my darling, and come away.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
17. Swallow reviews
One way highway.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
18. Shattered reviews
Worthwhile reviews will be reciprocated.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
19. Hit me reviews
Nothing to say. Personal.
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
20. Guilty
Not written for aesthetic perfection. This is total raw, personal feeling. Normally, I don't post things like this, but something compelled me ...
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
21. Let Yourself Cry
Constructive reviews please. They will be reciprocated.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-1-05 - Published: 6-1-05
22. Nothing New reviews
This is how I cope with abandonment, basically.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-05
23. Sweet Nothings of a Past Life reviews
Critical reviews, please. I'll return the favor.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-05
24. Lust Meets Desperation reviews
My view of today's society's tainted version of "love."
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-05
25. Dogs reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-05
26. Trust Issues
How I've finally realized that I view life.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-05
27. Risk reviews
This is a poem I wrote to myself a long time ago, and just now found in a notebook.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-05
28. Artificial Happiness reviews
Small, five-line poem. It's not recent; I have no idea when it's actually dated. Constructive criticism please.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-05
29. I am reviews
Please give thoughtful, constructive reviews. I'll return the favor. Thanks in advance!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-05
30. You reviews
Written summer '04, posted as archive. Consructive reviews pleaded for!
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 474 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-05
31. Girl Depressed
It only hurts because you've never known anything worse.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-29-05 - Published: 5-29-05
32. The Box reviews
A poem written for a school assignment about memories and looking back
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-19-04 - Published: 7-19-04
33. Cracks On My Ceiling reviews
The results of attempting (and failing) to sleep last night. ...Interesting, I must say. My right brain definitely had a big play in this one.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-03 - Published: 7-22-03
34. Normal reviews
James Bennet feels ordinary, sees himself as ordinary. Unfortunately, the world does not.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 571 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-03 - Published: 7-20-03
35. Nothing reviews
I felt this way once; it was the scariest half-hour of my life. One of my better poetry pieces, actually.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-20-03 - Published: 7-20-03
36. Change reviews
Inspired by a phone call, here is my stupid essay on change...
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 876 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-19-03 - Published: 7-19-03
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